Starts off sounding very melancholy. Enh, I wasn't feeling the singing at the beginning it doesn't fit the beat at all. The verse was okay, towards the end of the verse I was thrown off.

I didn't realize it was a snippet and was expecting much more. Your voice is off key in a lot of parts, it happens to everyone but you gotta practice getting your tone on beat. Another thing, you should have faded the track out because it bounces straight into the next track.

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