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01-19-07, 08:14 AM | #3 | ||
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your metas are fucking crazy, i read it twice and the way each
section is done is like i said fucking crazy, these lines were very interesting to me... Quote:
these three lines just felt deep, i saw the medical kit as him tryin to salvage the relationship, while the flash light was like hope, and the axe became his desperation, which for me made the whole piece make sense...i started to see the piece in a whole new light...the connections throughout suddenly became clear i saw everything as metaphors for a relationship in trouble, the diamonds bluff...for me became divorce...which correlates with the third stanza, i have theories on the others but its the ending im having the most problems with...if im on the right track...are they at the divorce table or have you twisted the ending to a prequel to when they first got married, its the jokers dismay line thats throwing me...and if im totally wrong sorry bout that…but at least you know I saw something in this piece and I enjoyed it…engaged the mind…dope |
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