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Old 08-23-06, 02:24 PM   #1
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FEATURED TRACK: YoO**NEW*TRACK**FROM YA BOYS MGD EBIRCS AN EL REY

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Newest joint for my mixtape comin in sept.....ahahahahaa Fiya leave feedback i always leave RTF....Haters not welcome if u happen to shit on my porch eat-a-DICK lmao...anyways heres the low-down

1st: Ebircs
2nd: Urs truly
3rd: El Rey

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=561615
Track: Barred-4-Bar-shit first one ^^^


my links:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233473
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233413
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232973
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Old 08-23-06, 04:37 PM   #3
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listehning good to hear ebircs back.........flow is on point these beats are pretty much his .......second cat was aight the adlibs were to loud and corny at times but i see u commin up over all aight nothin standout......rey ya voice fits a track but there are going to be timres that the off beat flow wont always work...............good ish
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Old 08-23-06, 04:54 PM   #4
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Ebrics is on some of that sick shit as usual...good flow and the lytics is dope....second dude was on beat that made me happy... i unnobout u voice but that happens.. like tone said adlibs is off.. rey... your off beat... i unno if that was purpose... coulda been a dope ass flow... if it was just a lil on more.. your pressence is illy...so is ya voice and ya lyrics....nice shit

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Old 08-23-06, 11:19 PM   #6
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Good looks on the feed y'all
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Old 08-24-06, 02:33 AM   #7
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alright beat
im guessing cho didnt pick it
its pretty cool
cho might be a little too loud but liking the delivery cocky lines fit your delivery well
lol at two mismatched socks idk that line def stood out nice adlibs
ok you need to add some bass or somethign casue it doesnnt fit at all lyrics are pretty cool nto feeling them as much as chos but yea flow was off a little bit but yea add some bass
el rey yea bad mixing so flow is off a little not too much though jsut barelynoticable emotion wise idk cho came totally different then both of yall i think he set the bar and yall came a little under
jsut remember when yoru collabing try to match the fellow emcees instead of trying to shine
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Old 08-24-06, 09:41 AM   #9
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Thanks for the feedback.....
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Old 08-24-06, 08:06 PM   #11
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Uppin' people sleepin yo....
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Old 08-24-06, 08:08 PM   #12
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beats pretty hot...

1st cat - voice is kinda annoyin not hatin just sayin... lol @ my cousin vinnie and two youts

2nd - flow falls off at points and the ad libs we're too loud

3rd - voice does fit this better than anyone else but the flow is offff your just jam packin tooo many words on a line and tryint to say them faster don't help

overall - sub par track fellas i can't really comment on lyrics or rhyme scheme cause it was all mad basic, but i hope to here some better shit

stay up

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Old 08-24-06, 08:44 PM   #14
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Beat: It's straight, I like the piano in the background.

1st Verse: Flow's straight, not much I can complain about there. "I walk from bar to bar like a zombie at night" <-- was feeling that line, the "My Cousin Vinnie" line was dope too, 'cuz I actually refer to that movie as "the one with the 2 yutes" to some people.

2nd Verse: Never heard Vato XL before, but he was straight. Style wasn't really my bag, but it was decent nonetheless. Delivery was alright, it would sound better if you turned your doubles up. Lyrics were alright too.

3rd Verse: Never heard Rey on the mic before either, but he was alright too. Lyrics were coo, "woman-sized breasts" haha. I'll edit some more feed in later after a few more listens.

So yeah, overall this was good. LIke I said to Rey, I'll edit more feed in later, but till then keep up the good work guys.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4357374
Feed is much appreciated.

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