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Old 03-11-09, 12:02 AM   #16
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Voted For: Da Problem Child

See the problem is your style is bringing flip,jump and skip but u aint got this won,
coz you may just be a child but no-one round here has heard of BATTLE-NASTICS SON.
ehh, decent name play but i juss dont get the punch... maybe its just me
Bitch you got things twisted, i look at your ryhme scheme but musta missed it,
Coz yeah i see it and dissed it but still if it was a building it would be listed.
this was okay, good flow and a decent punch, but a little forced... work on the delivery my dood
This battle iv pissed it, the trophy iv already kissed it,
u admit u have problems but u loved it so much u tried to fist it.
okay, decent concept... good nameplay, but the set up was a filler and the punch is weak
Yes your lame n, i dont wonna be the 1 your blame'n
but its wack your demonstrating,your read makes me feel its raining.
not really a punch, and if it is, its not hard hitting... take this line out like a target and come with a dope punch... this seemed like filler material to me
Where the fuck u at kid? coz really i dont know....
coz i need to lines of snow to try follow your flow.
this was pretty weak, it doesn't really hit hard and not a good closer

His trash can rhymes dont even deserve a desent punchline
itz amazing how you can be on so many peoples dicks at one-time
ehh not a good opener
and also exiting to be battling my one-biggest-fan
so i'll come at this cat quick simular to a one-minute-man
okay, played concept though.
its so indifficult to stop this clown-from-breathing
im suprise he's found time to challenge me, the porn sites must be down-this-evening
you rhymes'-desieving i'd father this sucker
but from that time-consieving, how did you escape from the rubber
eh. good flow, a bit stretched... the punch was kinda weak and a little forced... a better delievery could have saved this line
its only fair to come hard as wood, because he couldn't scrape-of blisters
so i'll slay him like a jew, and im Adolf-Hitler
okay, decent punch but kind of a played concept... closer material tho so points for that

In my opinion, this was a weak battle for ya'll... i've seen both come with a lot better shit. This was a tough decision for me but Since problem child can with a better closer than byron i'ma have to give it to em... the rest was pretty much even... close yall
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Old 03-11-09, 01:44 PM   #17
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Old 03-12-09, 06:25 AM   #18
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Old 03-12-09, 07:35 PM   #19
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Old 03-17-09, 01:52 PM   #20
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Old 03-17-09, 10:39 PM   #21
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Old 03-18-09, 12:39 AM   #22
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two different styles but my vote goes to da problem child flow was better brydon had some fire lines but all in all dpc u win
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Old 03-18-09, 01:52 AM   #23
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See the problem is your style is bringing flip,jump and skip but u aint got this won,
coz you may just be a child but no-one round here has heard of BATTLE-NASTICS SON.
nah...

Bitch you got things twisted, i look at your ryhme scheme but musta missed it,
Coz yeah i see it and dissed it but still if it was a building it would be listed.
eeeh i saw the reference but felt like u could of worded this wa better..

This battle iv pissed it, the trophy iv already kissed it,
u admit u have problems but u loved it so much u tried to fist it.
nasty and weak...

Yes your lame n, i dont wonna be the 1 your blame'n
but its wack your demonstrating,your read makes me feel its raining.
weak...

Where the fuck u at kid? coz really i dont know....
coz i need to lines of snow to try follow your flow.
nah weak...
4/10 weak verse...

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His trash can rhymes dont even deserve a desent punchline
itz amazing how you can be on so many peoples dicks at one-time
flow no punch and wasnt even a good diss...

and also exiting to be battling my one-biggest-fan
so i'll come at this cat quick simular to a one-minute-man
nasty and have no relevence to this battle...

its so indifficult to stop this clown-from-breathing
im suprise he's found time to challenge me, the porn sites must be down-this-evening
eeeh but decent at best..

you rhymes'-desieving i'd father this sucker
but from that time-consieving, how did you escape from the rubber
weak and played...

its only fair to come hard as wood, because he couldn't scrape-of blisters
so i'll slay him like a jew, and im Adolf-Hitler
best line in this battle yet still a played concept...


6/10

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Old 03-18-09, 07:18 AM   #24
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Voted For: Da Problem Child

and also exiting to be battling my one-biggest-fan
so i'll come at this cat quick simular to a one-minute-man

you rhymes'-desieving i'd father this sucker
but from that time-consieving, how did you escape from the rubber

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i cant explain it any more,.... DPC just had the better verse
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