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Old 04-14-09, 12:04 AM   #31
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Voted For: Da Problem Child

ive always thought Da Problem Child dropped dope, i like his swag... he took this w/o a doubt his lines were easier to read and he actually took subliminal shots at Fly-e

no hate keep rapping fellas

*fuck JTR* i want to battle you again you got lucky
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Old 04-14-09, 12:21 AM   #32
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lmao uppin this too. but i am glad you always like dpc shows the politics in that vote. Anyways uppin.
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Old 04-14-09, 12:21 PM   #33
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checkin votes........................boring as fuck!
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Old 04-29-09, 08:31 AM   #34
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Uppin............................................. ..........
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Old 04-29-09, 09:15 AM   #35
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Yo problem child you aint a problem but ya lyrics deffinetly are
The first step is admittin the problem and don't take it to da heart
Or maybe you will and you'll have a cardiac arrest
So before you type ya verse my name will make you struggle wit ery breath
pm'ing me thinkin that my votes is always against you
it aint that i hate you your shit jus really aint good dude
Nothin personal bra you jus need to go another way
Because rap aint ya game so please go, Don't stay
I don't care for you one bit single you out wit a grin
At least my votes i got wasn't from pm'n for da win

nothing to great about this verse,try make your punches more effective to your opponent,do some background work before hand!flow aint to bad tho,thats improved!best punch is highlighted.

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Fly-E's sick like a caved disease....sike! he cant win if he prayed and pleased
people mistake him as a midget, because he stays on his knees
I leave faces squinted harshly, in a mad-mean-face
yea you win some but this is nothing like the drag-queen-race
I've studied your battles,How could you say you gunnin' and Pull-it
when the only thing you pull is hamstrings, when runnin from bullets
even if you could...you couldnt, every line of yours is killed-and-slautered
because the only time you spit effective is when you mouth's filled-with-water
he will be runnin'-now, when gunz his size let of a thunder-sound
that will refrain him from being FLY-E when he's six-feet-underground

some nice wordplay in here,first thing i noticed.but the punches werent alwats as effective as they could have been.but a good verse none the less.best punch is highlighted.

if you could vote on my battle,that would be sweet.that shit needs closing haha
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Old 05-01-09, 02:45 PM   #36
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overall better verse, no need to break down the WHOLE battle.....i just was not feelin Fly's verse(no hate).

DPC punches were more effective, Fly had a couple decent lines but wasnt enough
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