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11-24-05, 01:31 PM
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Black Dragon - Quick Reaction
IP: 00CA 3534
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=215224
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=215320 ------------------------------------ tha beat is by my homeboi/producer Mercilus.........www.soundclick.com/joshuakarlovositis........ http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3133730 ^^Click Hi-Fi or Quick Reaction (Hi-Fi) 'preciate any feedback................. pz ~1~
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11-24-05, 05:27 PM
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IP: 303B 3599
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The beat starts off pretty cool. I think I got the same strings in GB if I'm not mistaken. Your vocals need to turn up a slight bit like 2 dB's. The flow sounded on but your mic is stripping a lot of the body out of your voice. I'd pump this in my car if the quality was on point. The hook's pretty good and actually sounds like a hook, not just more rhymes. There's slight places where the flow hiccups, but it's over-all written to the beat no doubt. The only thing I coulda asked for (aside from the quality) is that the flow in the last verse was different form the two prior ones. Thadaboudit. Peace.
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11-25-05, 12:03 PM
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IP: 00CA 3534
'preciate da feedback man.......bout the strings it wuz sampled from Paganini's 5th and 24th Caprices....all violins at different octaves........
pz ~1~
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11-25-05, 12:36 PM
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IP: 1ADC A69C
I actually liked the beat
flow is choppy lyrics are str8 though not great/not bad = pretty decent dawg keep droppin 1
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11-25-05, 08:57 PM
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~Spitten Fire~
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IP: 00CA 3534
'preciate da feedback...........i took off the version yall responded to and fixed my problems...........so uppin......................
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11-26-05, 08:28 PM
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~Spitten Fire~
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IP: 00CA 3534
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11-26-05, 08:35 PM
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IP: 5350 A834
beat starts off weird, but it gits nice
flow iz nice lyircs r aight chorus iz dope yeah mayn im likin this shit. rtf pleeze! http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=215548 werd
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11-27-05, 04:06 PM
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IP: 00CA 3534
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12-01-05, 07:47 PM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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IP: 12E7 3621
its not on the page no more cant dropp feed
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12-01-05, 08:18 PM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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IP: 12E7 3621
give me the direct link too ur soundclick so i can hear
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12-01-05, 08:19 PM
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~Spitten Fire~
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IP: 00CA 3534
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12-01-05, 08:56 PM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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IP: 12E7 3621
aight peepin now
production: the production is pretty good i like the intro wit the violins it gets cool..overall this beat aint too bad:8/10 Flow:your flow is real nice...your rode the beat real man.....:7/10 Pressense:your pressense is str8 not too shabby...keep it comin:7/10 Emotion:your emotion stayed the same should had more change ups:7/10 Quality:quality was real bad..i wasn't feelin it...:five/10 Lyrics:your lyrics were coool fit beat real well:8/10 Overall:This wasn't too bad of a song man..keep um coming:7/10 1 |
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12-03-05, 04:11 PM
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~Spitten Fire~
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IP: 00CA 3534
'preciate da feedback homie............^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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