Thats It I'm Fed Up
I Think It's Time To Drop Some Knowledge
On Our Current Situation That You Don't See In College

..It Started In Florida - And This I Cant Understand
How Majority Votes For One But Gets The Other Man
..This Philosophies A Mockery, Democracy's Hypocracy
We Complain About Things But Do Shit About Debauchery
..It's Obvious We're Too "Scurred" But We Love To Talk Shit
We'll Hear How Whack It Is - But Never Read About It

What?

Thats Like...Diggin Down To China But Ending Up In Taiwan
Thats Like...Listening To Hendrix When Your Stuck In Saigon
..And I Guess We'll Never Know Why Presidents Tell Residents
To Send Their Sons And Daughters To Die For Iraq Benefit
..This Has Been Done Ever Since - Genesis And The Creation
Army Ads Make Dying Looking Like A Vegas Vacation
..A Heroic Stimulation In A Fucked Up Situation
We Help Others When Our Own Are Living In Train Stations
..We Don't Let Hatians Come In But Embrace Others With Hugs
"Cuz The Last Thing We Need Is More Black Teens Selling Drugs"
..So While Po's Grabbin Dealers, Pot Smokers And Petty Thiefs
We Got Pedaphiles, Rapists And Killers Runnin' The Streets
..You Cant Smoke The Reef But You Can Own A Gun
You Cant Reason With Police..Thats Why We All Run
...And Half You Rap Listeners Dont Know Henry Kissinger
But Think "This Niggas Hard" When You Hear Thats He's A Murderer

...We Can Stop "Boarder Hoppers" From Commin In ... But We Cant
Stop Terrorist From Flying In ... Your Telling Me Their Not Lying Kid?
...Thats Cause You Must Be Watching To Much TV
Cause CNN Only Shows What Bush Wants Us To See
...We Can't Solve H.I.V But We Can Solve The War On Dope
By Throwing Our Tax Dollars So We Can Torch Crops Of Coke
...So Now Farmers Have No Hope - And Our Country Is Now A Joke
And We Might Solve Some Of These Problems If You People Awoke

...Ya'll Prolly Think I'm Paranoid And Afraid Of The Man
...So Fuck You! I'm Moving My Sorry Ass To Amsterdam

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could i get some love on this?

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Yeah...that was a good muthafuckin piece! I enjoyed the message thoroughly..got a lil lost in the middle there..seems like you tried to complicate it too much..but I felt the flow..and it came together beautifully. Great Piece.

This was a good piece............the topic pulled me into it an was what kept my interest in your piece.........its a touchy subject an bein in the military i understand a lot of what you were talking about an what you were tryin to.........so loved the material......great approach on it........vocab was pretty smooth, vocab was pretty good too.........all in all good piece!! keep it up!!!

Good flow - presented your argument pretty well. Nice contrasts set up. I think it might be a little easier to read if didn't capitalize everything - just a thought. Oh yeah and I think it might come a little stronger if you took out the part at the top about people just talking about problems - 'cause in the end that makes it kinda ironic. Nice intelligent piece though - keep it up. Hit my "Broken Metamorphosis" if you can.

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