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Old 01-16-06, 01:56 AM   #1
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11. Vaskez vs. 14. Ambient

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Check in by Wednesday, 11:59 PM Eastern Time.
Drop verse by Friday, 11:59 PM Eastern Time.

20 Lines.

No Recycling.
No Biting.
No Feeding.

Good Luck..

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Old 01-16-06, 07:43 AM   #2
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I'm in this
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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant
And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack
Skills is what you lack
I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac
Ya more like a Reagal
I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel
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Old 01-16-06, 12:34 PM   #3
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Old 01-16-06, 09:58 PM   #4
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let's drop early, you wanna do that? Like I can drop tomo (17th) if you can
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And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack
Skills is what you lack
I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac
Ya more like a Reagal
I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel
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Old 01-17-06, 08:06 AM   #5
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Dude, you're lucky you got this far with two no-show wins, last week and the week before..

His verse last week: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=219172

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Originally Posted by Ambient's verse last week
i ain't racist.. ALL bitches get smothered when im steppin
white heads, black heads
the majority of this board is the 1st & ur face is covered in the 2nd
word, u some spotty teen u aint a man, u'll die whore
try shaving but 1st ud better remove the ones in ya cheek from my 2 by 4


WTF?!
Ya flow's worse than curses, lines stretched, next to worthless
Rhymes THAT far apart should be in two separate verses
Some spit so dope, they leave fans gasping in a devout crowd
Amb leaves peeps breathless...when they read 1 of his bars out loud
N you should fear me on audio, cos I'm known to smack down boys
While everyone knows that Ambient sound's just shitty background noise
Ya custom title? Reading back, I understand why ya feelin slack
Not caring's a good way to deal with losing n being wack
Plus it's clear that you're gay n don't wanna see bitches get pussy out
Even tho your opponent's gotta do that for you to win a bout ^^^^
I battle dope, Amb battles wack, so I'm easily leavin the bitch dead
Hah, closest Amb came to battling hot was in this thread


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Originally Posted by Ambient's verse last week
im evil like 666 son it's no lie that i gotta nasty streak
meth. gets naked for girls & they be like "dude, that's a nasty streak"


Damn...
I guess ya brain's scarred, ya takin disgrace & shame far
cos who else's dumb enough to recycle rhymes in the same bar?
S'like at school there were a lotta poor kids goin nowhere fast
But Amb always dressed in silk n satin...the damn slowest class
When peeps ask me "who the wackest?", the answer stands to hurt
It ain't got shit to do with modesty, but I'm sure Am' the worst
Now don't stress about dropping fresh, be positive<-shit helps
Don't worry about ya concepts...
...each of them's old enough to take care of itself
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And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack
Skills is what you lack
I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac
Ya more like a Reagal
I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel
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Old 01-17-06, 11:17 AM   #6
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yeah i remember that thread lol..........
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Old 01-17-06, 03:53 PM   #7
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damn vazkez nice drop i liked that line "loose ur breathe if you say one of his lines out loud"
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Old 01-17-06, 09:16 PM   #8
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lmao at this ish
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Old 01-20-06, 09:14 PM   #9
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lets start... first off? lets talk about me n how im smackin dweebs
second off? i dunno bitch, ask ya girl the guy that was after me
ur decent at best bitch but ur still fuckin lame
"insane in the text brain"? vaz aint crazy..
COZ HE AINT GOT A FUCKIN BRAIN


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damn vazkez nice drop i liked that line "loose ur breathe if you say one of his lines out loud"


haha all u stupid bitches jumpin on his dick imma bitch slap quickly
ironic, past tense is who u can expect a vote from & what ur ass will be
its damn silly that ppl should think that u'll bring the win
bitch, ur act is so wooden u could be the face of timberland
u fake fuck, basically ur verse hasn't got a pot to piss in
but i aint gonna drop wack as fuck... coz i know u hate competition
i get bitches with my six pac my muscles be shaped nice
even vazkez is in shape... well, even round is a shape right?
haha my power'll kill u bitch, i lift wieghts, so expect me winning
the only exercise this kid gets is suckin in his gut when he next to women
u talk trash homo just lie after lie son,i laugh when u say u text nice
u getting ur shit backed up.... is ONLY sumthin to do with ur sex life
but really ur word don't mean shit, it's meaningless kid
next time u lie, it'll be face down with both my feet in ur ribs
im a text animal yo & most of the shit u talk is played
i talk shit...
n im gonna reverse my car over vaz so i can go back on what i say
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Old 01-20-06, 11:11 PM   #10
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lol I have no idea who past tense is

damn ya took your time, anyway, votes up
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And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack
Skills is what you lack
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Ya more like a Reagal
I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel
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Old 01-21-06, 03:01 AM   #11
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Ya flow's worse than curses, lines stretched, next to worthless
Rhymes THAT far apart should be in two separate verses
Some spit so dope, they leave fans gasping in a devout crowd
Amb leaves peeps breathless...when they read 1 of his bars out loud
N you should fear me on audio, cos I'm known to smack down boys
While everyone knows that Ambient sound's just shitty background noise
Plus it's clear that you're gay n don't wanna see bitches get pussy out
Even tho your opponent's gotta do that for you to win a bout ^^^^
Now don't stress about dropping fresh, be positive<-shit helps
Don't worry about ya concepts...
...each of them's old enough to take care of itself

VS.

u fake fuck, basically ur verse hasn't got a pot to piss in
but i aint gonna drop wack as fuck... coz i know u hate competition
haha my power'll kill u bitch, i lift wieghts, so expect me winning
the only exercise this kid gets is suckin in his gut when he next to women
u talk trash homo just lie after lie son,i laugh when u say u text nice
u getting ur shit backed up.... is ONLY sumthin to do with ur sex life


This battle was quite close I think. Vaskez was more consistent and started off strong and ended good to. Ambient seemed to start slow and pick up towards the end with some nice bars. The "gettin ur shit backed in" line was funny, and I liked the fat joke line to. Vaskez though flipped a lot of punches into clever disses, the closer of his was quite clever, the punches on his stretched lines was nice, and the one about ambient - background noise....that was probably my favourite bar of this whole battle. Overall though, Ambient showed his ring rust I think, and Vaskez came consistent as always and takes this.

V/ - Vaskez
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Old 01-21-06, 10:40 AM   #12
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Some spit so dope, they leave fans gasping in a devout crowd
Amb leaves peeps breathless...when they read 1 of his bars out loud
N you should fear me on audio, cos I'm known to smack down boys
While everyone knows that Ambient sound's just shitty background noise
I battle dope, Amb battles wack, so I'm easily leavin the bitch dead
Hah, closest Amb came to battling hot was in this thread
When peeps ask me "who the wackest?", the answer stands to hurt
It ain't got shit to do with modesty, but I'm sure Am' the worst
Now don't stress about dropping fresh, be positive<-shit helps
Don't worry about ya concepts...
...each of them's old enough to take care of itself

vs.

haha all u stupid bitches jumpin on his dick imma bitch slap quickly
ironic, past tense is who u can expect a vote from & what ur ass will be
u fake fuck, basically ur verse hasn't got a pot to piss in
but i aint gonna drop wack as fuck... coz i know u hate competition
haha my power'll kill u bitch, i lift wieghts, so expect me winning
the only exercise this kid gets is suckin in his gut when he next to women
u talk trash homo just lie after lie son,i laugh when u say u text nice
u getting ur shit backed up.... is ONLY sumthin to do with ur sex life

V/ Vaskez.. barely.
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Old 01-21-06, 10:41 AM   #13
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Quotables..

Vaskez

Ya flow's worse than curses, lines stretched, next to worthless
Rhymes THAT far apart should be in two separate verses
Some spit so dope, they leave fans gasping in a devout crowd
Amb leaves peeps breathless...when they read 1 of his bars out loud
^LMAO


& closed well

S'like at school there were a lotta poor kids goin nowhere fast
But Amb always dressed in silk n satin...the damn slowest class

Now don't stress about dropping fresh, be positive<-shit helps
Don't worry about ya concepts...
...each of them's old enough to take care of itself

Vs


Am
im a text animal yo & most of the shit u talk is played
i talk shit...
n im gonna reverse my car over vaz so i can go back on what i say

Pretty 1 sided IMO. V/ Vaskez
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Old 01-21-06, 11:21 AM   #14
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Ya flow's worse than curses, lines stretched, next to worthless
Rhymes THAT far apart should be in two separate verses
Some spit so dope, they leave fans gasping in a devout crowd
Amb leaves peeps breathless...when they read 1 of his bars out loud
Plus it's clear that you're gay n don't wanna see bitches get pussy out
Even tho your opponent's gotta do that for you to win a bout ^^^^
Now don't stress about dropping fresh, be positive<-shit helps
Don't worry about ya concepts...
...each of them's old enough to take care of itself

VS.

haha my power'll kill u bitch, i lift wieghts, so expect me winning
the only exercise this kid gets is suckin in his gut when he next to women
u talk trash homo just lie after lie son,i laugh when u say u text nice
u getting ur shit backed up.... is ONLY sumthin to do with ur sex life



ehh i thought this was pretty one sided... vaskez dropped pretty nicely and Ambient dropped okay.. but i was expecting better.... overall vaz just came harder V/vaz
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Old 01-21-06, 12:24 PM   #15
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N you should fear me on audio, cos I'm known to smack down boys
While everyone knows that Ambient sound's just shitty background noise
Ya custom title? Reading back, I understand why ya feelin slack
Not caring's a good way to deal with losing n being wack
Plus it's clear that you're gay n don't wanna see bitches get pussy out
Even tho your opponent's gotta do that for you to win a bout ^^^^
I battle dope, Amb battles wack, so I'm easily leavin the bitch dead
Hah, closest Amb came to battling hot was in this thread

vs

its damn silly that ppl should think that u'll bring the win
bitch, ur act is so wooden u could be the face of timberland
u fake fuck, basically ur verse hasn't got a pot to piss in
but i aint gonna drop wack as fuck... coz i know u hate competition
i get bitches with my six pac my muscles be shaped nice
even vazkez is in shape... well, even round is a shape right?
haha my power'll kill u bitch, i lift wieghts, so expect me winning
the only exercise this kid gets is suckin in his gut when he next to women

tied in quotables but the ones i didnt quote tell the story here
vaskez ehhh shit was way better than ambients ehh shit
and consistency is the reason he gets my vote
v/ vask
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