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Beat: Brayman productions
Hook: Tha Q
Verses 1 & 2: Q


Concept: I just wanted to blow some steam off after work and this is what came out. It's a mixture of bragging, venting, and reflecting on my life.


Holla


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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232659
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232640

What's hot:
fuckin' beat topp
hook is ill like that la la la shit
multi's in hook and verse tight. that one where you had stamina and shit in it, was sick string.
flow delivery emotion all nice

What's coo:
quality coo. not best, not worst
lyrics coo. nothing really stood out, but overall nice

What's not:
vocals tad bit too high in first verse

shit overall dope. love the fuckin' hook man. the hook fuckin' ripped it. love that hook. beat dope too. stay up man. LOOK @ THESE NIGGAS!!!!!!! lol 9/10

RTF:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232650

Not a bad track, but I don't think it's even close to your best by far. Your hooks have definitely been getting better, but the actual verses seemed a little lack luster to me. I noticed a couple of punch ins in the first verse that I'm not used to hearing from you. I don't know if you got lazy or what, but it just didn't seem like you. This would be cool for a mixtape, but I think it needs a little work on the first verse. Second verse was straight, but it seemed pretty repetetive, like with the flow and shit. Just didn't keep me intrested for too long. I think it might just be that I'm used to hearing more upbeat, faster tempo songs from you. I don't know.....

Good shit though

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^^hmm..there are no punch ins in this track







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preciate da feed tho

^^yep

thanx for the nods yall







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RTF whenever possible ~_~

When you changed flow right before you said something about your grandmama it sounded a lot like a punch in. Now that I relisten I'm not hearing a lot of what I heard the first time, but whatever.......it still sounds like a punch in

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LMFAO yeahhhh boi. this hook is dangerous AI stand up. im feelin this to def. The chorus is sick. The quality is alot better then before. Your multi's SICK like alwayz.. Your emotion is good for this kind of track..the lyrics is HOT. i like this kind of shit. so thats a plus on my feedback. Shit this is a dangerous track. Im feelin this. added to rv station Uh Huh

8.5/10

nice shit

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shoulda punched in the la la la's in the hook. kept the last la a lil longer for an overlap woulda been tighter....but it was nice....liked how you came in the first verse.....the second verse didnt come in as hard.....its a good song, just doesnt sound like something you care about and it doesnt seem your in an angry mood, so it just sounds like its missing something.....the track is good, but it needs more time put into it, its like one of those almost there tracks....but an almost there track for you is like a 8/10 for the rest of the kids here......good shit. but i expect more from you

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man Q dont know how come but lately youve been only 10/10 songs seriously, each time you post i download them, when are you making a new mixtape???? cuz i really want it, the beat is fucking hot, where did you get it, i love th4e hook and the lalala thing, flow is dopeee, quality is good too, damn props for your tracks

^^preciate the feed


As for a mixtape, I have no idea man.

I need some inspiration I guess.



Holla

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