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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
Detrimental 3 100.00%
D.Silver 0 0%
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Old 01-02-04, 05:17 AM   #1
D.Silver
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Unhappy D.Silver Vs Detrimental

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ya know tha rules...

10 bars MAX

check in... n we'll start
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Old 01-02-04, 05:50 AM   #2
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checkin in

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Old 01-02-04, 06:01 AM   #3
D.Silver
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we movin to 04, ima leave this whore w/ 0-3...
quit playin w/ keys, ya crews embarrassed ya in SOE...
believe you freestyle... when you put in alot of effort...
if not, why you in SOE's thread seekin fo comfort...?
bein wack hurts... but i dont know tha feelin...
i son men... begin takin notes like those drug dealin...
who you kiddin... tryin to play straight faggot...
ya tha globes slut... every nigga gets Into Det...
text vet... ?day you joined Sonz is one they rather fo get...
droppin tracks... ?when done... put away ya new train set...

blah...

Good Luck
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Old 01-02-04, 10:21 AM   #4
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just so you know.. ppl refer to me as "D" instead of typin my whole name..
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I'd drop hard on him, but look at da sad face, its easy to see hes been fearin it..
Cos asking who's better is like his name, the answers always D, Period! (D.)...
Auckland? damn you should quit now, you're a fuckin jerk and i'm mad tight..
Cos when it comes to rapping u prolly do it with a skirt and a bag pipe!...
You so desperate for dis u'd prolly sell ya damn asshole for just a single vote...
I'm 1st & 2nd, cos I already got the gold and now i got 'D Silver by the throat'..
Man your verse was wack as shit, I honestly can't believe you just tried...
And the only time your verses ever get two looks is when u click on preview reply..
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all i need...good luck...
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Old 01-02-04, 10:44 AM   #5
D.Silver
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aint tryin to sway votes... but just to keep peeps straight... aucklands in new zealand...

nice drop neways... uppin fo votes
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Old 01-02-04, 11:37 AM   #6
Detrimental
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HAHAHAHAHAH my bad on that auckland thing i dont know my countries well

can we get some votes in here
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Old 01-02-04, 12:07 PM   #7
doc_knock
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yeah, other than the auckland thing...lol.

this was a decent battle. D. Silver had some decent punches but Detrimental had better ones. Also, detrimental's wordplay was better, flow was better too.

vote: detrimental.


i spend time on your battles, please spend time on mine.


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102139

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101943
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Old 01-02-04, 12:16 PM   #8
Detrimental
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id return the favor if i could dawg but i cant poll votes yet

sorry bro, thanks for the vote

if i make 10 more posts soon ill return the favor
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Old 01-02-04, 01:40 PM   #9
Detrimental
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^uppin

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favors will be returned today, ill make sure to get 100 posts

so please drop some votes
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Old 01-02-04, 03:05 PM   #10
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fuckin sleepers... all these people online and nobodys voting lol

i can return favors now so drop votes with links
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Old 01-02-04, 10:50 PM   #11
D.Silver
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uppin #2

... wont be able to vote on neones battles yet... but i will once i reach tha required amount of posts yo

bahleedat
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Old 01-02-04, 10:53 PM   #12
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D.Silver you didnt compare to detrimentals
with just that he beat you.. all catas.-det

vote-detrimental
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Old 01-03-04, 12:52 AM   #13
D.Silver
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^ah... tha shit i need to do just to post...

neway i thought peeps break verses down?

ah well uppin #3
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Old 01-05-04, 11:11 PM   #14
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They are supposed to... anyway this is my new screen name....

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Old 01-05-04, 11:24 PM   #15
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D. Silver- some attempts at wordplay, kinda' choppy flow...the rhymes fell off in a couple spots, overall an alright verse...

Detrimental- some good wordplay, I liked the 1st and second place bar, good structure, well rounded verse...

Conclusion- Niether had a horrible verse but I'ma go with Detrimental because of his better wordplay, he simply had the best punches of the battle n' that's what it came down to...good battle though...

Vote=Detrimental
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