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Old 12-28-03, 01:31 AM   #16
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i dunno i've heard better from you before.....i felt like you could've done better, so this was just average for me....i like the intro track tho....that was a little hot....but i dunno, i wasn't feelin it like dat.....keep doing ya thing tho, cuz i know u got more material there that's hot....stay up....UnO





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Old 12-28-03, 02:40 AM   #17
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who is big nick?
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Old 12-28-03, 02:19 PM   #18
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who is big nick?


u talkn 2 me? if u are howd u hear about nic?


but good lookn every1 for the feedbacc, the compared 2 me tracc is gittn fixd up cuzz theres 2many voices on it, so we cuttin it down a lil, itll be cleand up...

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Droppin June 1, 2004
Smigg Dirtee Presents The A-Team "Team Work"
(The Real A-Team is: Silas aka Smigg Dirtee, C.Gigolo, JBoog, Kilo, JCin, Steezo, Bandit, L Cap)
Featuring: Luni Coleone, Jay Tee, MC Eiht, I-Rocc, B-12, 12 Guage Shottie, Jack D, Macnifacent and many more...
Label: The A-Team/Money Hungry Ent/Navarre
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Old 12-28-03, 03:02 PM   #19
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you said "aint that right big nick"
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Old 12-28-03, 05:04 PM   #20
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lol... oh thass rite....Big Nic my lil cuzzn...we have a group album dropn...hes coo...and he was reccordn me when i was doin my verse..

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Droppin June 1, 2004
Smigg Dirtee Presents The A-Team "Team Work"
(The Real A-Team is: Silas aka Smigg Dirtee, C.Gigolo, JBoog, Kilo, JCin, Steezo, Bandit, L Cap)
Featuring: Luni Coleone, Jay Tee, MC Eiht, I-Rocc, B-12, 12 Guage Shottie, Jack D, Macnifacent and many more...
Label: The A-Team/Money Hungry Ent/Navarre
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Old 12-28-03, 05:15 PM   #21
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it was iiiight but u got betta TRACKS.......
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Old 12-28-03, 11:03 PM   #22
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juss added a new tracc

"Its Nuthn"
beat: 8miles & runnin


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Droppin June 1, 2004
Smigg Dirtee Presents The A-Team "Team Work"
(The Real A-Team is: Silas aka Smigg Dirtee, C.Gigolo, JBoog, Kilo, JCin, Steezo, Bandit, L Cap)
Featuring: Luni Coleone, Jay Tee, MC Eiht, I-Rocc, B-12, 12 Guage Shottie, Jack D, Macnifacent and many more...
Label: The A-Team/Money Hungry Ent/Navarre
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Old 12-28-03, 11:43 PM   #23
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peeped the one at the bottom... love this beat... your lyrics got better compared to back in tha day shit, less filler an' shit, flow's still sick, nice track...

peepin... "It's Nuthn"

pretty much what i expected...... your quality's as always top notch shit, lyrics are funny.. sum nice lines, flow's really smooth.. sum a'ight multi's, wordplay pretty basic, but when it there it still like woah.... also a nice track..1
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Old 12-29-03, 12:06 AM   #24
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for the last track you posted....

i love this beat so much, so its hard to make this song wack lol...
im feelin your voice(kinda sound like a kid tho) and flow...lyrics are pretty dope....lol @ the adlibs...LMAO at the outro...that 'bitch' is real loud...nice track tho, if you had better quality itd be iLL...but i was feelin this one nonetheless
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Old 12-29-03, 12:28 PM   #25
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theres no question you got skill man, but if i was going to really critique you, i would tell you all of your tracks are the same..

they are all "im way too dope, and you suck." <thats the basic meaning to all your tracks.

lyrics are hot, but sometime you over do it.. like "when my album drops it gon be triple platinum" so i would say be a lil more real...

also, i noticed, at least in all these songs ive heard, your dissing (im assuming nobody in particular, but just coming with dope diss lyrics).. show some diversity..

plz dont jump all over me saying "i have all kinds of songs that show diversity, so fucking listen to the rest of my shit be fire you judge you fucking homo ass bitch homo power ranger!" cuz im just going off of whats on your sound click lol...

lol i like how you have the download option off on your songs like everyone tryin to bootleg your shit
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Old 12-29-03, 02:14 PM   #26
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you fucking homo ass bitch homo power ranger!

im playn, but...

i hear wut ure sayn, i aint got alotta songz rite now on me, so wut i put up is wut i have on cd....so ya kno....im coccy on sum shit, so thass the triple platinum...i alwayz have sum 2 diss, but i do have other kinda songz....and i needa delete sum voices off these traccz, sounds 2 flooded...

but good lookn


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Featuring: Luni Coleone, Jay Tee, MC Eiht, I-Rocc, B-12, 12 Guage Shottie, Jack D, Macnifacent and many more...
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Old 12-29-03, 04:35 PM   #27
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NEW SONG ADDED!!!

"Tonight" feat. Steezo & Soulo

this is a smoov song..it shows my diversity...(coo?)


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Smigg Dirtee Presents The A-Team "Team Work"
(The Real A-Team is: Silas aka Smigg Dirtee, C.Gigolo, JBoog, Kilo, JCin, Steezo, Bandit, L Cap)
Featuring: Luni Coleone, Jay Tee, MC Eiht, I-Rocc, B-12, 12 Guage Shottie, Jack D, Macnifacent and many more...
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Old 12-29-03, 04:54 PM   #28
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^already heard it......i cant remember which soundclick

you got too many......shits str8....hooks koo

i never heard you on that pussy whipness shit....jus playin

i see the "diversity"
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Old 12-29-03, 05:51 PM   #29
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cin..if i reply to this do you mind voting on a text battle? i wi.ll give you a full breakdown of both tracks first..but i'd like you to give a fair an honest vote on a battle after i've done it..ok?

first up..."tonight"


ok..intro's a lil quiet and long..think i can hear somethin in the backgrond..

first dude

ok...voice is a lil low..

im feelin the opening...nice voice...flow definetely...

nice vocabulary..not over the top but nice...

lol at the chorus...some dude tryna sing...

verse 2..

nice flow again..

lol

"dont fall in love baby its a 1 night fling"

both aint got corny voices which is always nice...

lol

"i wanna make ya mine..but i gota keep it a 1 night"

nice touch..

verse 3 coming up...

lol the generic...chorus dude droppin his 2 cents...

"ima tell you my success story..MONEY COMES FIRST"

that would of been iller if the "money comes first" was said with aggresion but this is a nice little laid back track...

the chorus is growing on me man i like it now..i didnt at first so this is cool..its ends nice tho it woulda been more..hmm.."Professional" if you would have left the beat going a little longer...ok song 2 coming up

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Old 12-29-03, 06:07 PM   #30
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ok....

"its nuthin"

aah this is more ot my preference..some hard shit...

nice drop...on the beat str8 away..

nice multi's an rhyme scheme...

the car sorta sound over the top is a lil too loud...jus realised how nice your mic quality...

"Its the 'Earth' versus me..the 'DIRTIEST' in this industry"

if the wordplay was intentional as im geussing that is ILL

lol rewinded to it again...

"I (W)rap Tighter that a turban on a hindu"

the rap - wrap wordplay is kinda played but it was dropped nicely...

"From the Chest down you burn an from the neck up you bleed"

jus illness..

damn your quality is ill...especially when you jump on the mic an start talking...

by the way you rap..i think you;d be ILL at audio battles...

foreal this second track is alot more to my liking...illness an flow kept throughout without having to sound forced...

foreal ya up on the level of nyce quota an some other ill cats...





oh yea drop a vote here please

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...56&pagenumber=1

i did take time to give in depth feedback on both pieces...

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