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I go first since I called you out...







*Lil' Pac checks in*

Not tha shizz, just plain shizz is more like~it~son
His rhymes make no sense and have no structure, are you typin’ on Vikadon
You better watch your face, they call me Doc cuz its like I Surgically Dent~Sir
Excuse me nurse; please send this man to the “Wackness Emergency Center”
Cuz son, you couldn’t shine if you rolled with Mr. Clean
While my balls is always fresh cuz I force feed ya girl Listerine
With my gunplay I’ll leave this pussy holy like Sunday
You could eat Scrabble pieces for breakfast and still not enhance your wordplay
Look~G, we all have one question for you rookie
Don’t get shook~B, we just wanna know why you gave up on pussy?
Take a puff of this lyrical weed, it will enhance~your full
Fuckin’ faggot, we all know this cowboy rides more than mechanical bulls
I wish this was real, Id hit you in tha face and make your shit~drop
Then you’d learn ta seal that shit like ya name was Ziplock
You cats wanna know why Tiny Tim had crutches?
Cuz he fucked with Lil’ Pac, so shizz, shut it
No Im for real dogg don’t even reply
I do it often but Im not a fan of making mommas cry
I just kicked this cat around, like he was just knee~high
This is lyrical combat, no place for Texans wearing tight ass Levi’s

You're online, on tha site.



Are you gonna check in? I wanna get this battle going...





Come on man...

this kid is right...maybe i shouldn't reply
how could this guy suprise me, look at him why?
should i respond to a guy by the name of "lil pac"
or "lil twat", cause he jocks me harder than a lil jock
this kid jacks off to " gang related" and "rainy days"
and he's from the 239, that excplains why he's gay
a strait fag talkin bout how tiny tim was on cruchtches
we all know the answer, cause you buttfucked him
yeah im a rookie... you just signed on as a free agent
i been puttin this down eversince you played hot scotch on streets pavement
i'm maybe wack. but thank god i'm not you
i decided to battle , cause there's nothing else to do


oh yeah... i guess i checked in *******

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We got a battle on our hands.




Please DONT sleep on this.





Aight, last time.....






Uppin' for votes on this battle

Aight, I got 5 up's allowed.




I've used 2.






Here's number 3.





shizz, good idea with tha sig, but put in tha

this was a good battle:
flow:shizz
vocab:lil Pac
punches:lil Pac
personals:lil Pac
structure:shizz

Lil Pac got this but shizz had a good rhyme too it's just lil pac's hit harder

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damnitt vote!!!!!!!!!!!

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can't be mad cant' be mad
kid has talent. pretty damn funny too. i couldnt write from laughing. damn we dont wear tight jeans in texas....






shit

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lol, just a poke at cowboys























Uppin' number 4.






Please dont sleep, and shizz, thanks.

This is my last up.....














Number 5..............








Stop sleepin', WAKE UP!













Please finish this battle for us.....................

good battle, good battle..
flow-shiz
opener-pac
closer-pac
punches-pac
entertainment-pac
shiz u mite have some potentail, but u need to elevate some..
Tip: Focus more on better punches and wordplay...

o0 yea the overall was -Lil' Pac
The Tip was for Shizz
and One of ya PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE return the favor and vote on one of the battles in my signature...I would really appreciate it!

Thx!

Good stuff but I cant vote so it dont even matter, other than that I like SHizzes style, its like mine, short and sweet wheelin n dealin---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------