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stocks is buildin/
quip cant stop the killin/
i could wait, stop and eat,/
and get enoguh for j-cochrin/
beefin....you need more gaurds then baywatch/
and i hate cops/
so heat...i keep it under the mat/
keep mouthin/ il have ya crew commin deep in black/
take "C'' ....yea i pull um when its beef/
and i could understand why ur funeral is deep/
fuck it...rearrange that/
got the spliff....extra clips....got bring them thangs back/
i slang crack....spend 4....8 is what i brang back/
and u know that this hata' knows his games whack/
and un-cut yall....WHO WANT WHAT//....im out....1

i think this cat is scared............................................ .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ....

LMAO @ Me Scared At The Horrible Verse..

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Ayo I Decapitate-Hoe, Then Irraticate-Flows With Scripts That Incinagrate Pro's
I Just Fasinate-At-Shows, While You Stay On The Net Downloading My Shows Uno?
I'll Whip Out The Flow - Then Rip-On-The Go, Sip On The Low And Blaze You're Crew
You Getting Before A Fucken V..Theirs No Way You Avioding Me Tearing You
I'm Fearing Who? - Yah Just A Net Worm..Go Jump In Between Two Cars
I Blast At Bars, Kill Then Scar..This Line'll Get It's Point Across Yah Fucken Avatar
You Suffer From Sars - I've Heard This Weak Kid Spit..His Voice Sounds More Bitch Then Dolphins
Loading And Locking, Roll And Rocking..Got My Fist In His Throat..A Real Nail In The Coughin
My Verse Is Too Shocking - So Just Elevate Or Pull Up..Better Yet Top-Pull
You're Less Then..While I Stay Greater Than Like The Letter 'V' Horizontal

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lmao....that shit didnt even make sense.....u used the same word to ryhmes the who rap....damn....vote for the real king....coem on now...

CQuip wins.

Hotbarz... what you spit sounds like a regular radio freestyle... its not bad but it's certainly not a battle. You need to attack this cat, not rap about how you sell crack and keep gats pack in the ac. haha. Anyway, Quip had a better flow, better punches and even a better vocab and set up.


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i cant vote because i dont post hot barz won because he has a natrual skill of PUNCH LINES something that quip lacks i know the winner is Hotbarz

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stocks is buildin/
quip cant stop the killin/
3/10 it rhymes nigga but whos it aimed at?
i could wait, stop and eat,/
and get enoguh for j-cochrin/
3/10 the fuck u talkin about?
beefin....you need more gaurds then baywatch/
and i hate cops/
2/10 you hate cops, good for u man
so heat...i keep it under the mat/
keep mouthin/ il have ya crew commin deep in black/
4/10 your BEST line
take "C'' ....yea i pull um when its beef/
and i could understand why ur funeral is deep/
3/10
fuck it...rearrange that/
got the spliff....extra clips....got bring them thangs back/
extra clips, u bitin off Biggie freestyles now 3/10
i slang crack....spend 4....8 is what i brang back/
and u know that this hata' knows his games whack/
3/10 his game is WHACK what a broad overused statement
and un-cut yall....WHO WANT WHAT//....im out....1
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the only positive to that verse is that it was a genuine freestyle, if it wasn't and you sat around thinking that up, then dont ever come back to this site.
C_quip had less lines and STILL had more points nigga, u need to elevate, think of more punches for ur freestyles, look at EM he freestyles AND has punches in the mix so its not just a buncha words that rhymes
VOTE C QUIP
Repay the favor kids when u see my shit in the forum
Ayo I Decapitate-Hoe, Then Irraticate-Flows With Scripts That Incinagrate Pro's
I Just Fasinate-At-Shows, While You Stay On The Net Downloading My Shows Uno?
4/10
I'll Whip Out The Flow - Then Rip-On-The Go, Sip On The Low And Blaze You're Crew
You Getting Before A Fucken V..Theirs No Way You Avioding Me Tearing You
5/10 WOW AN ATTACK! FIRST OF THE BATTLE!
I'm Fearing Who? - Yah Just A Net Worm..Go Jump In Between Two Cars
I Blast At Bars, Kill Then Scar..This Line'll Get It's Point Across Yah Fucken Avatar
6/10
You Suffer From Sars - I've Heard This Weak Kid Spit..His Voice Sounds More Bitch Then Dolphins
Loading And Locking, Roll And Rocking..Got My Fist In His Throat..A Real Nail In The Coughin
6/10 the dolphin line was cool but not that other "stuff"
My Verse Is Too Shocking - So Just Elevate Or Pull Up..Better Yet Top-Pull
You're Less Then..While I Stay Greater Than Like The Letter 'V' Horizontal
7/10 cool closer but what the hell is TOP-PULL?
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lets get some more votes u know this is a kinda close battle...................................

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Flow:both
structure:both
multies:C
diss:c
entertainment:both
personals: neither had any good ones
voteC-quip

Ayo return tha favor by dropin an honest vote on my battle with clockwise or threats or hell u can do both,get at me

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HotBarz-
...man..you ever heard of flow? for real man one line would have like 10 words in it, and the next would have 4 words...on audio that would sound like shit...and on text it looks ugly...you get no points on flow and structure...you get a fat 0 out of 10...

you had decent rhymes....I'll give you a 6.0 for your rhymes...just b/c you rhymed multi syllable words but they were irrelevant things...."more guards than baywatch//and I hate cops"...who cares?

you had hardly no punchlines..I saw a few that could be called punches I guess but nothing really worth quoting...you get a 2.0 for punches...

wordplay... you get a .5

vocab...you get a 1.0

ok..Cquip

You had a much better flow, altho u did have slightly stretched bars...I understand that though b/c I write with stretched bars sometimes but it flows when I read it...I give you a 7.5 on flow and structure...

you had pretty nice multis....multis using bigger rhymes...not amazing b/c I see it all the time, but it's definately a good thing...8.0 on your multis..

vocab...you used a pretty good vocabulary...although my theory on vocab has always been "use words that are simple, but not used a lot..not words that are really big and nobody knows the definition of"...you kinda did a mixture of both...but you made yourself look 50 times more intelligent than this kat in the process...so you get a 7.5 for vocab...

decent wordplay and punches when you used them...u just didn't have much wordplay or punchlines...your last line was pretty good but I think it coulda been worded better...it was hard to read...

neway my vote goes to cquip

Vote- Cquip

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