Aight you spittin first. Remember minimum of 10 lines.

This guy cant even see, whats he's trying to read//
This is my first battle, and i'm planting my seed//
Im first class, and no matter how hard you try//
RhymeTyme's ill rhymes will make you cry//
take you to a rematch, and away i go//
you cant match my fresh and authentic flow//
this battle board makes you think, you're underground//
ill battle you again, and then ill use sound//
my words are worthy, they come through your speakers//
you will try to commit suicide, and swallow your fingers//
hit yourself in the head with a phone, and damage the ringers//
You might as well be, Britney Spears backup singers//
Your style might as well be some undeserving babble//
You really need to get out. Have you ever heard a battle?//
Aight, this time i'll actually go easy//
The wind is my beat, and today it's breezy//
Thats all, i aint got nothin left//
It's my first battle, Everybody, respect...

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Aight here we go...

Lyrics Not Only Killin Me, He Havin The Reader's So Bored They Leavin in a Hearse
I Don't Know Whats Worse His Structure, Or Punches, Bitch Is Suppose To Battle Herb's First
This Whiga Sure Can Rhyme, But His Time On My Clock Has Ended
Hey Rappin Like Coolio is a Definite To Get His Street Credit Dented
But I must Give Pity To This Noob Who Can't Speak it
So I Shoved a Dictionary Into His Brain, And He Still Spit's Lines That Don't Mean Shit
He Got Himself Stuck In This Mess And There's No Way Around
Hit Him With These Punches And A New Mental Disease Was Found
This Battled Ended With His First Line, But His Effort Was Classic
To Bad When I Said Lets Duel, He Brought A Gun Made of Plastic

Oh For the Voters Can You please be elaborate with the votes and like say what the best lines and shit are? I'm trying to elevate and I wanted to know what my best line was so I can think of other stuff along those lines.

Uppin come on let get some votes
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Uppin come on let get some votes
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Uppin
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yea this deserve some votes

rhymetyme didnt really get any momentum go'n in his verse

and clock came alot harder than tis other dude

and please please please refrain from that damn word "herb" i hate that shit really i mean nobody uses that damn word in real life and personally dont get it

but ne way vote:clockwyse

check my sig for some of my open battles

Aight I'll refrain from the word herb and thinks for peepin the battle.
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104588
vote for dis illest battle

That right there is stupid, you need to at least tell us who you think won, posting for your own battle is gay as hell Top-quala-t needs a warning

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Wtf No votes?
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What are you thinking, you must be insane//
you lay on the floor, in a pool of blood stain//
my rhymes, they go against the grain, but i dont strain//
i just conjure up a word or two in my enchanced brain//
Case scenario worst? You were destined to leave here in a hearse//
Rap is voodoo, and I just cast a curse//
the only redemption, is to haul your ass to church//
Im gonna make it loud and clear, just who you're dealin with//
Im a white suburban kid, and you dont know shit//
Rap isnt a game, you might as well quit//
Your raps arn't good, i dont deem them fit//
I say this as i walk away, This seems to be it//
Your face here, my certificate//

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