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01-16-04, 04:33 PM
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IP: CB2E 7CE0
um checked it..and dont see where the hypes at.....you put a muffled effect on your voice....or maybe its your mic...your lyrics need work...just overall need work...
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01-16-04, 05:12 PM
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IP: B81A 82F5
LoL @ My Lyrics Need Work...
... And You're A Textcee Wit' Over 1000 Posts... And Yeah, My Mic Is Fucked Up... ... So Its Not A Muffle Effect... But Anyway, Good Lookin' For The Feed-Back... ... Uppin'... |
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01-16-04, 05:36 PM
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IP: CB2E 7CE0
textcee sorry mayne im audio.....think before you speak.
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01-16-04, 11:01 PM
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IP: B81A 82F5
Right...
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01-16-04, 11:31 PM
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IP: 15F2 6465
well the hook....the words is hot but i aint really feelin how you said it. might be me, i dont really like that slurring shizz. ya bars is hot, yea and you already kno bout ya quality. im feelin ya other tracks too
holla back at me: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=101599 |
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01-17-04, 01:12 PM
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That's Whats Hood, Man...
... Good Lookin'... I Got'Chu... ... Uppin'!!! |
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01-17-04, 03:25 PM
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IP: 658C 12B2
Nice Man...
Good Beat...But I Think You Flowed Too Slow For This Type Of Beat... And Your Voice Wasn't Very Clear... But You Had Some Sick Lines...Like The Sex With Strangers...Keep Working Man...! Overall... 8/10 By The Way... If You Need Beats...Check Me Out... Third World Productions |
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01-17-04, 11:26 PM
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IP: B81A 82F5
Good Lookin', Family...
... It's Appreciated... Uppin'!!! |
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01-20-04, 02:02 PM
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IP: 4806 E309
Yea it was straight probly would of been hard if you did it in da studio but you good peep my tracks at [url]www.soundclick.com/abstractmindzmusic Overall 6out of10
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01-26-04, 10:53 AM
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Good Lookin'...
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01-26-04, 11:01 AM
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ya delivery is blah... clean that up... flow isn't that hot... hum... your hat is to big... No 50/50 for you... the you are what you eat line isn't hot... Ride the beat shit... stop fightin it...
and never say Yah'mean again... deacon said everything else...
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01-26-04, 12:46 PM
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This Comin' From A Kid Wit' Over 1,000 Posts... HaHa... Wheres Ya' Life??? Anyway... Umm... The Feed-Back Is Appreciated... But Remember One Thing... You Can't Beat Me... Simple... Uppin'!!!
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01-27-04, 02:31 PM
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IP: 41A1 AA65
its aiight..i think the flow is ass like a downsyndrom juelz...b/c you shoulda been going fasta on the beat. chorus is catchy..JAY OOOOOOOOOOOOOOO lol illlllllllllll...hot shit duke. bad quality.
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02-01-04, 09:59 PM
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Good Lookin'... Uppin'...
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