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Nobody Votes, This Being Slept On For Weeks Or What?
Up.

Please vote, Leave a link and ill return the favour with an honest vote,
Uppin this shit.
again.

iGht ,
both were ight.....
Structure-Both needed work,but true's was better
Flow-True had a much cleaner flow, skorp, was all over .
wordplay-true put more creativity into his shit..he used more defiant words in his verse
punches- true hit harder w/ his punches....but I think personal were a tie, I think true could have came up with a better concept.. but good battle keep elevatin

v/ True-Souldja

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108569

Be an honest person and Honestly check out and vote my battles........sorry bout the free post..

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108569

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I meant Vote on my battles...................sorry for freeposting

As long you both had fun and tried your best, you're both winners! Oh yea, Souldja gets my vote.

skorpius- I honestly didn't see two words that rhymed together in your first verse. (Maybe Ottawa and Uhhh.) I suggest coming up with a simple rhyme scheme next time. Keep working and you'll improve.

True-Souldja- you took it cause you had a stronger opening, although it kinda died off near the end. I give you props for trying to come up with some interesting ideas (like the foldgiers coffee) Keep practicing is all the advice I can give you, we all could use more.

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Like American companies that did business with Hitler"
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Fuck, I forgot to include my link.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108289

Thanks.

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"I’m a mercenary, I don't care how I get richer,
Like American companies that did business with Hitler"
-Immortal Technique

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