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Old 01-14-04, 10:36 PM   #1
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¢orrupted Vi5on5:What Up Gang5ta <~( Yaz )~>

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[What Up Gang5ta]

[Ver5e 1]
¢ut throat viloun¢e, enough ta make ya s¢ream
an get ya ta relize what you ¢learly do not see
yo lifez all easy, yo ri¢h, layed bak an ¢hilled
on ma blok, if u were ta tri dat yad be killed
unlea5hed wene u afraid ta bring a lil beef
how u a real thug if u neva lived on da 5treet
I live the 5treetz ni¢¢a, naw gohead an 5krat¢h that out
I made the 5treetz ni¢¢a, they were made ta faze ya out
I'l blaze ya up an put yout life through liven hell
dun tri an lie gansta kuz all ya liez seem ta fail
i see the truth wene i look into ma ni¢¢az eyez
an the only gang5ta i 5ee iz one liven in dispize
5o what up gangsta, or 5houd i say the real groupy
if u were su¢h a real Gansta go ahead an shoot me
ni¢¢a how do u figer that u kan pull da trigger
get away qui¢ker befo u kat¢h a bullet sliver

[¢hour5]
what up gangsta, ya trina run ma hood
what up gangsta, pop ya ni¢¢a i would
what up gangsta, ya u aint gonna do shit
keep runnin yo mouth an ima split ya lip

[Ver5e 2]
ya keep doin it ni¢¢a, an prosed ta akt viloent
be 5ilent wene im 5pitten but prai5e a vilet
a liven vetrin, waz a legend in da pa5t
but dat 5hyt dun lazt, it flyz by 5o fa5t
but ni¢¢az kud neva la5t kuz nex ta me dey 5ekon be5t
an if they der prote5t theil have kapz in their ¢he5t
an if one dem kok 5ukaz iz fronten ma krew gonna be jumpen
runnin an rantin bout whoz a real G
ni¢¢a prai5e me befo i got ya in bullet 5pray
leave yo head a5tray an blow out yo fuken brain
drive thyz ni¢¢a in5ain, but naw i aint ta blame
im juz doin what a true thug doez,
dun fuke it kuz, u blowin ma buzz
u frontin wit me an u bown ta fuken trip
get ya killed qui¢k trinna fuk wit ma 5hyt
5lit ya wri5t, like u already 5hould know
ma krew will hit ya up if ya realy wanna go
ima take yo gurl out fuk her an play ya
u think u a real G, well den waz up gan5ta

[¢hour5 x2]
what up gangsta, ya trina run ma hood
what up gangsta, pop ya ni¢¢a i would
what up gangsta, ya u aint gonna do shit
keep runnin yo mouth an ima split ya lip
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Old 01-15-04, 12:23 AM   #2
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I like it everything was on key man keep doing yo thing............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..
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Old 01-15-04, 09:47 AM   #3
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uppin fo fead yo
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Old 01-15-04, 10:06 AM   #4
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Decent..Good flow...nice wordplay...still having problems with the spelling..LOL~
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Old 01-15-04, 02:49 PM   #5
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yo bro I like. had some good flow and some alright multi's could maybe use some more vocab though but other then that it was down.
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Old 01-15-04, 10:42 PM   #6
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haha pimpen an pen... READ MA 5IG j/p kuz, but i enjoied thyz one, uppin fo mo feed
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Old 01-16-04, 10:21 PM   #7
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iight im uppin thyz... again
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Old 01-16-04, 11:12 PM   #8
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yea Yaz I think this one was Really Nicely Doen ya have Improved on ya strucutre and ya flow a bit and ya have real good vocab in this i enjoyed this Piece man i think it ya Second best after Tha Collab With Gene...yea so i think this here was really Good...feep that shit Droping Man...PeacE...
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Old 01-16-04, 11:18 PM   #9
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You're gay, type correctly, faggot.
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Old 01-16-04, 11:24 PM   #10
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^ ^ ^

True. . My Dope Compadre . .

Yaz . . Honestly Kid. . Typing That Way Isn't Cool In Any Way, Shape, Or Form . . I Know You Want Your Own Style. . But Typing With 5's And That Fucked Up C Isn't Your Own Style. . It's Annoying.

Maybe For You To Understand I Need To Retype That . .

Yaz. . Hone5tly Kid. . Typing That Way I5n't Cool In Any Way, 5hape, Or Form . . I Know You Want Your Own 5tyle. . But Typing with 5'5 And That Fucked Up C I5n't Your Own 5tyle. . It'5 Annoying.

Damn, I Just Annoyed Myself.
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Old 01-17-04, 01:19 AM   #11
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yo fuk u ni¢¢a, u dunno 5hyt an if u keep runnin yo mouth ima fuken pop yo bit¢h a55 lil fuken punk.... o ya uppin fo feed
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Old 01-17-04, 01:53 AM   #12
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Shut up, now.
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Old 01-17-04, 01:57 AM   #13
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Peep The Sig. . Ya Not Even On Our Level Kid. . And You're Not Gangsta. . Threatening To Pop My Ass Over A Fucking Machine . . The Fuck You Gonna Do ? Throw Your Wack Bars At Me N Kredit ? Kid, Our Bars Lacerate. . And They're Just Fucking Words. . Imagine That.
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Old 01-17-04, 02:16 AM   #14
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yo imagin thyz, u runnin yo fuken a55 off from 9trey 5^ motha fuka, or u to preppy ta know wtf dat meenz, an u aint evan ben in a fuken battle bit¢h, that 5howez how good u are, dumbfuk, u gonna find yo5elf punked wit yo mouff runnin off. now quit freepo5tuin on thyz 5hyt befo 5hyt happenz. fuken punk a55 ni¢¢a. uppin on thyz 5hyt an if u gonna 5ay 5umtin bout ma s'z bein 5'z ju5t 5ay iz hard ta read wit it.

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Old 01-17-04, 07:37 AM   #15
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it was aight...might wanna up ya vocab and add multis in there....but not too bad...

pce..
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