battle

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IP: 58E6 C588


lets do this
10 - 20 lines
due in 30 mins
blind spit
u set it up
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Tha One

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me bein beat by some cat name optimus, shit sounds perposturate,
his neck i'll slit, n fuck like a clit, stick my dick, down his asoffagus,

i never knew one worthy, to serve me, exspecially from jersey,
only thing new, about you, is ur post boo, hand on the cock like herby, (Herbie Hancock)

call u boo like ya my bitch, might be after this, syke, unlike u i hate dick,
optimus aint in his prime nor gettin warmer, ima brake this transformer, quick,
(optimus prime the transformer figure)

named after a cartoon, fuckin bafoon, ass bout to be whipped by high noon,
only way you catch float, is on a boat, caught up in this tycoon,

winds turn quick, like ya moms do a trick, suckin dick, Ya I said that shit,
don't get mad, cause moms been had, shit i might be ya dad, i know i spit up in that clit,

so if so, son you know, ima have to let you go,
take you in to this world then take you out, no doubt, all cause of a ho,

i just couldnt pull out, shoulda left it in her mouth,
but when i was all up inside her, like a ruff ryder, coulndt resisit hearin her scream n shout,

n whats worse then, is u's a liven abortion, just a portion,
that slipped, from her clit, n didnt flush, years later wearin lipstick n blush, a he/she sqwashin.

my abilities go beyond the science of conventional matter,/
my verbal thunder makes the heavens shatter, /
ya blood n brains splattered left adjacent to the pavement,/
got ya body parts scattered across my fuckin basement, /
with one swing I leave ya wonderin where ya whole face-went./
I shatter ya nose-bone, ya spit, but no original flows-shown. /
ya styles “choppy” I should be payin ya to mow my-lawn/
potency in my one breath equal that of a hit from five-bongs/
an MC? You couldn’t move crowds spittin the illest live-songs/
you’re prancing round the board reppin silk nylons/
spittin high pitched spits, like a fuckin lady, ya drank “slim”-fast, but still aint no “shady”,/
throwin punches, tryin to degrade-me, I wouldn’t cop your album if the fuckin label paid-me/
You may be Christmas, but I’m more “gifted” than December twenty-fifth/
Judgments passed swift, You aint “seein clearly” man, take some advice from Jimmy Cliff/
go back home ya housewife, pack ya kids school-lunches/
disses? you’re in a verbal gunfight, only a fool-punches/
shut ya lips, cut tha bull-shit, sit back, I’ll unload a “full clip”/
cause im tha “star” of my “gang” like guru and premier/
looks like you’re a rook and shouldn’t be-here, cause it’s strictly sucka free-here/
I know ya crews sayin, its Op that we-fear/

uppin for votes come on peeps only 2 days to post em.
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Opener - Ja'e Roc (optimus talked highly of himself, ja'e roc dissed optimus)
Flow - Ja'e Roc
Vocab - Optimus
Structure - Ja'e Roc
Punches - Optimus
Personals - Optimus
Closer - Optimus

Vote - Optimus

Ja'e Roc had some nice worplay but didnt really have hard hittin punches, I vote Optimus because his punches were better, there were more of em, and they were harder hitting. Ja'e Roc had some nice rhymes though (optimus, asoffagus) and wordplay. Good battle both of you.
Pz.

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Opener:Ja'e Roc
Closer:Ja'e Roc
Flow:Optimus
Enjoyment:Ja'e Roc
Punches:Ja'e Roc

Vote Ja'e Roc
Optimus u were 2full of urself in ur opener wen u shud of dissed Ja'e Roc instead!

will u repay d favor on this please seen as i took the time 2 break urs down!

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...334#post1098334

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optimus took this shyt no doubt cuz he had better punches..and more personals......
everything else was pretty much the same
vote=optimus

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