16 lines max
due by 5

checking in...due by 5 wtf u talkign about.....give a better time cuz im eastern man...fix ya self

due by 5 central time so that's what ?6 eastern or whatever

fuck this shit im keying pz out..............fuck due in 5 shit probably has his shit already prewritten by now

bitch i'm at school, i don't have time to do this shit now.
And you will lose bitch!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!

ay yo look...

Check the facts son...due in 5 is fucking way to long/
probably has his shit prewritten as we speak/that shit is just wrong/
i dont know what the hell this herb has in mind but it wont work/
Bio is useless...so i throw small witty punches at this unknown jerk/
thats why it gave me the idea this guy is nothing but gas and farts/
light a match bitch...lets explode this thread into the dark/
and if he does he'll just backfire his ass into fumes/
Put a gas mask on bitch...its time to press quick reply and resume/
Dont you get it dawg...U should have never accepted...im never messin/
this battle wont help you elevate...it will just end your Rap lesson/
16 fucking lines...what the fuck have you been EATING!/
SHIT MAN......2 verses can give u a whack newbie beating/
I even get the worse mother fucking textee to battle your prewriting ass/
he can beat your stupid ass in 1 verse..thats how long you'll last/
man your done for...u just earned your first lose/
get outta this thread man...ur just losing posts for no cause/

bla...not much effort cuz my mind isnt free.

^^^^Blah

Quit bitchin!!!!!!!!!!
Prophet steady worryin about time and you aint gone even be lastin/
We all know that you're the shit but I haven't begun bein sarcastic/
This dudes been involved in 21 Frontlines and still battlin newbies?!/
Come to find out........he still can't bare my shit like PG movies/
Tp's talent level is nonexistent kinda like ya past hood/
and optimistic about bein wack so just says that he's half good/
He actually thinks he's tyte? Well I guess I'm slayin a dreamer/
Now his so called soldier dynasty are all ashamed of their leader/
You the type to be a internet thug, but in real like you're a rap-geek/
And soon he'll lose his RB rep wit this beatin on his stat sheet/
Prophet should of known it was over when he enter the BS and posted/
I actually wanted some competition....guess I was punished for hopin/
I know he hates and probably wish he never made his dumb rhyme/
He must of graduated then got booted out elevated front-lines/
I even took time to check ya sig, it says "WHere Will You End Up?/
He'll have to place my name beside c-rocka...........at the End-Up/(Bottom then up a sentence)

OUT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

drop the votes

Prophet should of known it was over when he enter the BS and posted/
I actually wanted some competition....guess I was punished for hopin/
^bitten line of Of rapboards.com fuckig biter ill find the link i seen that shit before...i go to both sites...be obvious and dont bite...lame ass

^^^LOL, be serious dude I freestyled my verse in like 10 minutes and I don't even go to rapboards. If i did bite, which i didn't, why such a simple line like that.

You just tryin to stall cause you lossed dogg, take it like a man yo.

Mods!!!!!!!!!

up up and away

You aint gettin out this loss homeboy, i'mma make a new thread!!

Punches: Eyi
Wordplay: Neither
Multis: Eyi
Personals: Tie
Opener: Eyi
Closer: Eyi

Vote - EyI-sytez

Come to find out........he still can't bare my shit like PG movies/
Best line

Prophet's verse was pretty weak, used a lot of filler, both add more punches or wordplay, prophet you need to flip some multis, your verse was too basic.

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Check the facts son...due in 5 is fucking way to long/
probably has his shit prewritten as we speak/that shit is just wrong/
^this is filler not a punch not a personal....sorry
i dont know what the hell this herb has in mind but it wont work/
Bio is useless...so i throw small witty punches at this unknown jerk/
^this is an ok personal.....not much there though man...
thats why it gave me the idea this guy is nothing but gas and farts/
light a match bitch...lets explode this thread into the dark/
^well its interesting...i dunno its and Ok punch....
and if he does he'll just backfire his ass into fumes/
Put a gas mask on bitch...its time to press quick reply and resume/
^meh stretched it out didn't really like it....
Dont you get it dawg...U should have never accepted...im never messin/
this battle wont help you elevate...it will just end your Rap lesson/
^this is intresting its almost a punch but not quite.....
16 fucking lines...what the fuck have you been EATING!/
SHIT MAN......2 verses can give u a whack newbie beating/
^thats an Ok punch .......prolly one of your better ones...
I even get the worse mother fucking textee to battle your prewriting ass/
he can beat your stupid ass in 1 verse..thats how long you'll last/
^this is repetive and idon't like it ....
man your done for...u just earned your first lose/
get outta this thread man...ur just losing posts for no cause/
wouldn't he be gaining posts...maybye u i don't get that one.....



Prophet steady worryin about time and you aint gone even be lastin/
We all know that you're the shit but I haven't begun bein sarcastic/
^this is a weak open with a dumb punch
This dudes been involved in 21 Frontlines and still battlin newbies?!/
Come to find out........he still can't bare my shit like PG movies/
^i'm assuming you forgot the words to see....nice punch
Tp's talent level is nonexistent kinda like ya past hood/
and optimistic about bein wack so just says that he's half good/
^thats a good punch too....
He actually thinks he's tyte? Well I guess I'm slayin a dreamer/
Now his so called soldier dynasty are all ashamed of their leader/
^eheheahahah nice nice....kinda simple...
You the type to be a internet thug, but in real like you're a rap-geek/
And soon he'll lose his RB rep wit this beatin on his stat sheet/
^i like it....whatever....ok punch
Prophet should of known it was over when he enter the BS and posted/
I actually wanted some competition....guess I was punished for hopin/
^thats a good punch in my opinion.....
I know he hates and probably wish he never made his dumb rhyme/
He must of graduated then got booted out elevated front-lines/
^nice punch...kinda played but eh....
I even took time to check ya sig, it says "WHere Will You End Up?/
He'll have to place my name beside c-rocka...........at the End-Up/(Bottom then up a sentence)
yea fine closer...eye stez gets this one...prophet man....you need to go back to your old style and structure ...peace........