i pm'ed sed u ready, an then u turned up in here, an sed 30 minutes to drop!!!


only pre-writers, set up a battle, an then check in 2 hours later!!!

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wtf..............................i checked in early bitch you didnt.......then i pmed you saying check in man weel drop in 30.u pmd back saying i cnt i got audio to do....so i sed ok we will do it at 8 like we did.....your wak shut the fuck up and let pll vote..................................

i sed lets drop at 8 RFOL, i pm'ed you sayin you ready to spit, because i was ready!!
an yu never sent one back, an i noticed a post in here saying lets spit in 30 mins!!

as if you didn't have enough time!!

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K took this one. good verse man, im impressed you really have elevated alot. you came hard the whole way throught with some clever shit right there. hard hitting punches/personals...good shit. only thing i could say to work on is that when you are using that type of structure make sure the lines arent too long cuz it hurts the flow. the ... kind of serves for a pause then you get to the punchline and your like wow...but nice verse some of the best ive seen from you. 007...your verse was decent but ive seen you come harder.....second to last line wasnt even a punch and you need constant disses to take this battle....some of your lines were worded a bit funny and some didnt hit that hard at all. nice verse though. you had K in the flow category.

vote K

could you guys please hit this up...i took the time to vote on your battle...
people have been reading it...but dont wanna vote for some reason...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109418

Uppin for my squad member.................................