10-15 lines lets get this up tonight

just dont bitch and shit..

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Zarbon....Quit ducking our battle and spit
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109053

oh shit i forgot about this,,sorry bro..im spitting now for yours..and tilly i will hit this up after...

ya plan of attack…useless, but ya still seeking one
I say go with the flow, but you barely hold a decent one
my figure of speech, deadly killing anything that’s fertile
your figure of speech sticks to padded bras and gray girdles
blow bubbles nude...fuggin pre-teen..zar rippin flows
fuck buyin coke,im so nice, i'll give you a free hit in the nose
you considered ill? ..with riders on ya damn testicles
i'll make it subject to change, like talkin bout transexuals
and ill give you aching bones with no need for faking moans
youll just go off shaking, same as them vibrating phones
The battles mine for the taking, I’m coppin it now
Cause ya bodys hidden in a trash can like oscar the grouch
When I flow, tillyeyedie, I spit in whirlwinds
While you’re the biggest bitch next to Clifford’s girlfriend

this bitch wants to battle so he deletes half his profile
i think hes scared to lose i beat him hes in denial
but its worthwhile becauseun fortunatly im not homicidal
but trust me with a mic ill kill your ass with a big smile
Zarbon what kind of name iz that...... its plain whack
ill smack ya more silly cause ur illnest is what you lack
i looked far and wide but all i fopund out is your age
26 thats your age? Your losses will end up like it in a day
what the hell, juss spit what ya want i dont care
your making me nevous? surrrrre and tupac pulled out his hair
im nice but yet cold as ice yo bitch your dead like the three blind mice
Hell 10-16? bitch ill write 12 and devour your ass like asians with rice

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uppin............................................. ......

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tilleydie got this battle all the way.........................better verse....punches and wordplay...............he was consistent..................i feel he came off the top and merked this herb....good job dawg...zarbon u were really good...just u didnt come hard enough though....no hate please...both return the favor....both battles im on are winning..so i know if u are hatting on me.....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109693
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109699
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Tilleyedie won this with a verse more pact with punches and personals. Xarbon started off dope, but fell off later. Pretty dop verse by both
Please drop an honest vote here. Thanks guys http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109779

uppin............................................. .

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yo back to poll my vote for tilley. Nice to see anutha Asian on da site lol. Please drop an honest vote here guys http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110074

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Feeble Minded

Zarb

ya plan of attack…useless, but ya still seeking one
I say go with the flow, but you barely hold a decent one
Not really feelin it, not a great rhyme either, seeking..decent..one..one
my figure of speech, deadly killing anything that’s fertile
your figure of speech sticks to padded bras and gray girdles
Nah.. not really feeling it again
blow bubbles nude...fuggin pre-teen..zar rippin flows
fuck buyin coke,im so nice, i'll give you a free hit in the nose
not the greatest punch
you considered ill? ..with riders on ya damn testicles
i'll make it subject to change, like talkin bout transexuals
Not a direct hard hitting punch
and ill give you aching bones with no need for faking moans
youll just go off shaking, same as them vibrating phones
Decent
The battles mine for the taking, I’m coppin it now
Cause ya bodys hidden in a trash can like oscar the grouch
Decent again
When I flow, tillyeyedie, I spit in whirlwinds
While you’re the biggest bitch next to Clifford’s girlfriend
lol...good ending


T.E.D.

this bitch wants to battle so he deletes half his profile
i think hes scared to lose i beat him hes in denial
Coula been re worded much beter.. meh opening
but its worthwhile becauseun fortunatly im not homicidal
but trust me with a mic ill kill your ass with a big smile
didnt hit hard at all
Zarbon what kind of name iz that...... its plain whack
ill smack ya more silly cause ur illnest is what you lack
Blah.. zarbon is just as bad as your name, wack lines
i looked far and wide but all i fopund out is your age
26 thats your age? Your losses will end up like it in a day
you said age twice, not feelin that, and records mean shit
what the hell, juss spit what ya want i dont care
your making me nevous? surrrrre and tupac pulled out his hair
Played...blah
im nice but yet cold as ice yo bitch your dead like the three blind mice
Hell 10-16? bitch ill write 12 and devour your ass like asians with rice
sayin that you will kill them wit under the line limit is played as fuck


Overall - Zarbon took this battle all becuase of 3 of his punches....both of you need to go to Wackness Emergancy Center and get some help on punches and personals and set up... this was a weak battle

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tilleyedie got this one wit an overall tight verse...kept it up the whole time wit flow,punches,and sum tight werdplay....zarbons verse was tight too but toward the end i jus wasnt feelin it....aight yo tight battle tho close but tilleyedie got this one.......return the favor http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110270

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pictureperfect2 vs me..please vote

Zarbon had won in my opinion because he had better punches, vocabulary was straight, metaphors wern't dat good if he was trying to make one, punches were straight but good enough to beat Tilleyedie, and he had dat better ending, but opener was weak and didn't rhyme.

Tilleyedie had lost because his punches wern't as hard hitting as Zarbon, rhyming scheme was a little better, metaphors were played out kinda and heard a lot of other niggas use it before, ending was not good, but opener was.

overall it was a weak battle but this is my honest vote for dis battle and how I feel dis win goes to Zarbon for keeping Tilleyedie at bay with his punches and ending.

Vote= Zarbon

please take da time to reply to my battle like I did for you, greatly appreciated.

AK-mixa vs. Cashvillin
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109978

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