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01-26-04, 12:04 AM
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Token (0-0) vs. Wise Ways (0-0)
IP: 544E ED5D
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Check in and agree on line amount Regular League Rules apply Verses are due Friday 12:00pm CT Must have post 3 links to votes in your check-in post For ever link you are missing you get docked a vote Matches will be closed Sunday night. come wack & ur out. voters vote who won, and if the loser is out. Last edited by Feeble Minded : 01-26-04 at 12:09 AM. |
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01-26-04, 08:50 AM
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IP: 41AE D395
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Respect is all I'm after. Prime effort is all you can expect. Perfection will be promised in time. The Creation Last edited by Token : 01-28-04 at 04:16 PM. |
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01-26-04, 02:47 PM
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IP: D38E 499D
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10 Lines it is Voted on: Aisle 5 vs. Dixie Nourmous Lirael One vs. Def Con N LitEnd vs. FuE-Xion Last edited by Wise Ways : 01-28-04 at 02:36 AM. |
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01-26-04, 08:51 PM
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IP: 1481 46A3
Token?...You gotta be kidding...you kidding right?...shiiiiit
Everything u say is bogus..don't try to talk ya way out..cuz u said it No respect kid..peeped IR..even saw other mods changing your edit I'm About to teach T a lesson..here..learn some downward motion Cuz like reabilatated first time drug abusers..Wise is dropping Token You joking?Toke got his name on a list..lol..now he thinks he's a vet Congrats you on elite..Too bad u haven't stepped foot in there yet! I'll set ya talent on tha table..and notice its still bare on tha surface T's talent gives him worts..just attempting to use it makes u nervous! Spits are like shaq fucking tha shit out of virgins..Its bound to tear ya You lost? Cuz T's more out of place..then Artic Penguins in tha Sierra! Theres no Feeding..Is there?? |
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01-30-04, 12:06 AM
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IP: F7ED CA3D
Wise Ways?.. Lmao.. I'll have to agree with what he said before his verse
I've been busy in IR.. weeding out herbs and shrooms We've decided to get to the bottom of it.. .. And that's where I found you Sure we remember WL.. since Wits End.. We've begun to miss em After reading your verse.. ..You weren't kidding when you said you were withholding your wisdom! Token Vs. Wise Ways?.. I thought you would've surely withdrew You stand no chance... ..But Atleast you're loyal to your second crew But enough with the small talk.. Really, you can shut up herb You can't come hard.. ..Your avatar is the only thing looking forward to your verse After we're thru.. your Theory of being dope will be Kaos No, There's no feeding.. ..You didn't have anything good to play off!
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Respect is all I'm after. Prime effort is all you can expect. Perfection will be promised in time. The Creation |
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01-30-04, 08:40 AM
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^ Says It All ^
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IP: AB4F CB05
Vote - Token
Came with a much more wittier verse, and somewhat harder punches. Wise Ways had one decent line: You joking?Toke got his name on a list..lol..now he thinks he's a vet Congrats you on elite..Too bad u haven't stepped foot in there yet! ^ wording could have been better though. Token came with a few quoteables: After reading your verse.. ..You weren't kidding when you said you were withholding your wisdom! You can't come hard.. ..Your avatar is the only thing looking forward to your verse ^again, wording could have been better, but good punches. Also, vote Wise out of LLL...sorry kid.
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01-30-04, 09:29 AM
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IP: FF89 3C60
Man, tight verse, Toke...
Props. Ya just killed this with better wordplay, much wittier personals... And harsh, funny punches. This shit here... Token Vs. Wise Ways?.. I thought you would've surely withdrew You stand no chance... ..But at least you're loyal to your second crew Was ya only weak line...pretty much crap... Wise did nice too, but he stretched his lines some cuz he was reaching for punches... I think he had some good concepts, but didn't word them properly, killing some of the impact. This coulda been alot closer, but wasn't... Just an all around more dominant verse by Token Peace
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01-30-04, 01:08 PM
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Fuck You, I Rhyme Better
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IP: 297A 7E4D
LOL tokens line about the avvy took it for me
Wise had some nice lines, i liked the IR line...but i think you went too much for the: your like an MC in wendys...type of lines...they just dont hit hard...needs rewording vote Token |
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01-30-04, 04:50 PM
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IP: 9DAE 3ADA
Lmao...Wise had 3 good punches. They were actually pretty nice. One of the best verses I've seen from him.
As for Token, 4 good punches. However, that Avy line and Second Crew line killed it. Nice shit Token, I guess you have elevated a little bit  Anyway, a much better battle then I was anticipating. Vote ~ Token Vote ~ Wise Ways is put in another Do or Die type Match for next week. Last edited by Lethargic : 01-30-04 at 05:55 PM. |
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01-30-04, 05:47 PM
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IP: 41AE D395
Thank you for the votes guys.
Good battle Wise Ways.. You guys forgot to vote him in or out of LLL though.
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Respect is all I'm after. Prime effort is all you can expect. Perfection will be promised in time. The Creation |
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01-31-04, 02:05 PM
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Banned: Double Voting
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IP: 0FCE DAC3
Word Up.
I Used To Think Token Was Whaaaaack. I Guess He Proved Me Wrong. He Came Decent, Wise Didn't I Really Wasn't Feelin His Verse At All He Mighta Had One Or Two Punches But Most Of Token's Verse Hit. Good Shit And Keep It Up Token. Vote = Token Vote = Wise Out. |
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01-31-04, 02:17 PM
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IP: 1B3B C284
Damn Token....that was a dope verse......
uve really improved you won for all the above reaons....... v / token V / In for Wise Ways... Why? cuz altho his srtucture was a bit off i see some potential in him to be good...he wont elevate outside of LLL.........he had a few good lines.... Wise i say you work on some of the things people talked about and possibly give him another chance next week and see if he can improve if not then he can be out |
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01-31-04, 04:23 PM
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Even If U Like Me..Fuck U
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IP: 2C1F 94C9
Vote....Token.....
Vote IN....for Wise Ways... Token had a decent verse..with a few witty punches.... and a quotable or 2 in there.... Wise u came Alright...ya know...def not that great... i just dont think it wuz enuff to take token on this one... but like Taktik said...i think Wise has potential... and will def elevate and get 10 times better... within the next month... Good battle Guyz....Stay Up.... Gh05t!... |
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01-31-04, 07:46 PM
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IP: 1481 46A3
yea...thanks guys...
I've improved alot already since i did that verse 7-0....2-2..to decide if I'm still in |
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01-31-04, 08:05 PM
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Adage, Aphorism, Maxim.
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IP: 5B99 B902
Vote = Token.
As I read Wise Ways verse... he had some witty punches that made me laugh. Everything u say is bogus..don't try to talk ya way out..cuz u said it No respect kid..peeped IR..even saw other mods changing your edit You joking?Toke got his name on a list..lol..now he thinks he's a vet Congrats you on elite..Too bad u haven't stepped foot in there yet! ^I loved these two punches... not sure if they're real, but they are witty. However, the rest of your verse was eh. Penguins in the sierra... blah. Should've finished stronger. Token, started out good with the, "where I found you" line. Decent middle of verse, Wise Ways changed his avy, so I don't get that line about his avy. And you finished your verse with a good punch. That took it for you. After we're thru.. your Theory of being dope will be Kaos No, There's no feeding.. ..You didn't have anything good to play off! Hah. Nice. However, vote Wise in.
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