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Old 01-26-04, 12:08 AM   #1
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come wack & ur out the league
 
Old 01-26-04, 12:13 AM   #2
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I never come wack Feeble, you y mother er you!

Oh BTW Dixie, you're dead.

BTW WE'RE GOING 10.
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Old 01-26-04, 12:43 AM   #3
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checkin in

why did I have to go against the best person on the site
also..it would be much appreciated if you put my full name instead of just Dixie..
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Old 01-26-04, 06:42 PM   #4
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I'm sick of these faggots, & while I'm givin' it to you hard..
You're takin' 10 inches of cock. .
but beggin' to go the whole nine yards
Surprised you got this far, n' kid your demise is planned
Leavin' you fucked quicker than 10 year olds at Never Land
They say smilies show emotion, well dawg I'll show love
Endin' up missing one hand. . . like that dude above.......^^
For Dixie thangs ain't goin' well, last Christmas was dull
Considerin' you couldn't even afford to buy a lump of coal!
These frontliners are gettin' old, sendin' you away for months
& apparently Dixie got upset when. .
They informed em' the 1-2 tourney involves throwin' a punch

10 keystyled. Hurry up n' post kid.
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Old 01-26-04, 07:54 PM   #5
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Aisle is a Lyrical Machine.....although he hasn't Battled All Year
I noticed you needed Help In Predictions..so I'll Kick In Your Gear
Did my Research On Yo Past Battles..and mostly Your Style's Basic
Deja Vu?..I Never Seen You Twice..and I've Been To The Matrix
Aisle Speaks Highly of Me....and I Doubt He Sings Soprano
That was a 10 key?I'm just glad he didn't Post The Whole Piano
And Aisle Is Too Weak..I can't Picture His Punches Damagin' My Health
Well Maybe he Can Make a Fist...if he Stop Fingerin' Himself
I'm Dead?..You barely Scratched the Surface..it's More Like a Smear..chump
You Were Truthful..You Never Come wack.....
cause you Always Do It 'fore You Come

easily matched your 10 lines..I just hope it's good enuff..
goodluck
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Old 01-26-04, 08:10 PM   #6
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Alright you fuckers, you gotta vote sometime. So vote!

Niggers.
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Old 01-27-04, 06:47 AM   #7
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Or not.
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Old 01-27-04, 01:28 PM   #8
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Gonna say that Iyuhl had the harder stuff...

Although, he displayed moments of whackness...
(Christmas/Coal)

And came with a played concept...
(Neverland...though it was flipped real nice, still played)

It's really the opener and closer that fucked Dixie up and won this battle.

Dixie claimed to have done research, but then I didn't see any of it.
Not really any personals in that verse.

And alot of forced punches...
(the opener, the "matrix" line...)

That weren't the least bit hard.

Best lines were the "soprano/piano" and the "fingerin himself" one...
And the latter required a visual aid...
Very creative, but for battle? Eh.

Nonetheless, Dixie's best, I feel, didn't touch Iuyhl's best.

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Old 01-27-04, 01:36 PM   #9
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LoL. I spent like 8 minutes on this, thanks for the vote though BTK.

1-0 my last upping.
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Old 01-27-04, 01:51 PM   #10
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ya Aisle CAME WACK !!
but better than dixie.. lol

i seen much better from aisle than that
but he didn't need to go all out to take this
the finisher took this for me

v/ Aisle
 
Old 01-27-04, 02:07 PM   #11
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Aisle's verse was garbage. Not at all what I was expecting. Even if it is Dixie you're facing...you should at least put some effort into your verse. In case of any unexpected surprises. Luckily for you, there weren't any. The only line I liked from Dixie was the 10 keys/piano line. Only prob is I've seen it before. So, for overall better verse...even though they both sucked...

Vote ~ Mr. Johnny 5

Aisle...don't ever torment us LLLerz by making us read that shit again..lol.
 
Old 01-27-04, 02:20 PM   #12
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LOL!

If they would have given me somebody like you, I would have spent longer on my verse. I just wanted to get it over with, my wording sucked lol.

Anyways 3-0, I'm going to stop posting now.
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Old 01-27-04, 02:42 PM   #13
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Aight battle...
Liked aisle's closer..nice personal
Tha thumbs up punch was aight..
Aight opener...too

Dixie.. ya piano punch was tha best of yours I thought
that fingering line is played to shit
Closer was a lil hard to get..didn't flow right

so..with harder verse over all

v/Aisle
 
Old 01-27-04, 02:52 PM   #14
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Good To See Ya Elevatin Aisle!! ...J/P

But Seriously, That Was Like 1/16 Assed From Aisle...But Funny Thing Is...He Still Won. Dixie Came Pretty Weak, Both Had Played Lines, Both Had Wack Lines, However, Aisle Had Glimpses Of A Decent Concept...But Wording Was All Wrong.

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Old 01-27-04, 03:40 PM   #15
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This battle was weak .. why do you dickride them so badly? Neither came good at all. Aisle did enough to edge it but thats really all, both verses lacked any real battle substance in my opinion.

Aisle did just enough to get the win.
 
 


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