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01-30-04, 04:03 PM
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A cold killa
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IP: 101E D839
killa- you need to fix your structure, i had a hard time understanding yor verse.
n'zyme- your vese was straight, punches and wordplay where nice and you clearly took this vote n'zyme Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom
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01-30-04, 04:04 PM
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IP: 2F46 BF0E
thanks for the honest vote..........up up and away.............
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01-31-04, 12:46 PM
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IP: 2F46 BF0E
uppin this shit.........honest votes that follow the rubric only.....
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01-31-04, 02:59 PM
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IP: 2F46 BF0E
damn...........votes people.........don't sleep on this shit....
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01-31-04, 03:10 PM
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\/ pissing me off!!!!
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N'zyme murdered this cat,
every line was nice, better personals, defo harder hitting punches, he had a structure, his wordplay was nice, an it was a good battle verse!! killa conceptz, that was absoulute shit realy, fix ya struture, make your punches hit him, hit with some personal, you had no wordplay really, your cretivity an ability to make punches obviously dont match!! jus elevate!! peace |
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02-02-04, 06:16 PM
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So Tired Of It.
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IP: C1DA C961
N Zyme clearly takes this... more witty punches.. good personals.. structure/flow was on point etc..
Every catergory taken.. Killa.. sort out the structure first.. then try and add some witty personals to hit real hard.. Some decent attempts, but without a good flow your verse was virtually useless... cheetah/spot line was creative.. aim for similar.. Basically a very one sided battle.. For originality, structure, and witty punches.. Vote - N 'Zyme yes^^ he basically said it all..just elevate aight?
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02-04-04, 04:58 AM
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uppin............................................. .
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02-04-04, 05:32 AM
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IP: 1807 6B94
yo n'zyme takes this easy...HARD hittin punches...good personals....nice flow...shit lookin like n'zyme got great potential on this site aslong as he keeps it up
killa you need to hit with harder punches and throw personals in...thats what its all about |
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02-04-04, 05:32 AM
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IP: 1807 6B94
yo hit this shit up...http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111543
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02-04-04, 05:33 AM
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IP: 1807 6B94
ill throw down honest votes to nebody dat throws down on dat shit
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02-05-04, 01:39 PM
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IP: CFF5 B64A
a yo just finish dis' battle off
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02-05-04, 01:56 PM
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Light Weight
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hurry
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