1 More Vote And This Battle Will Be Closed.

.................................................H urry ................Hurry.

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GhOsT - WrITeRZ
..Kidz I'll Cease to Spit 'Vowelz' An let the 'Eyez'-Inspect...
Fools On My Dick I aSSur You I got Chrome that'll leave your body count high-in-debt...
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Ok now its obvious how this works u gettin your buddies to vote or what.......How could anybody think u had better flow or structure, yo shit was all over the place like u pasted 3 diffrent verses together but whatever, i guess when u said no dickriding it dont apply to u

OK kido.............How U got 2 votes when only 1 dude voted correctly??

Anywayz End this weak battle i hate kido's who whine............................................. ........

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GhOsT - WrITeRZ
..Kidz I'll Cease to Spit 'Vowelz' An let the 'Eyez'-Inspect...
Fools On My Dick I aSSur You I got Chrome that'll leave your body count high-in-debt...
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FINISH THIS PLZZZZZZZZZ IT STOOOD THERE FOR 2 weeks NOWWWWWWWW

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GhOsT - WrITeRZ
..Kidz I'll Cease to Spit 'Vowelz' An let the 'Eyez'-Inspect...
Fools On My Dick I aSSur You I got Chrome that'll leave your body count high-in-debt...
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I wasnt the one whos whining little boy ure the one that came out and said " i SEE ALOT OF DICK RIDIDNG"......and the only reason u said that is cuz i was winning cuz of your retarted structure, who gives a fuck about the battle u can win i dont give a fuck its not liek it means something, but dont accuse me of cheating and shit cuz u were losing

jesus:

Names Jezus,but not the dude u know from Sunday school
Only cheek Im turnin in on my ass so u can kiss that one too
weak open
Yo, Aesthetic knows he cant win,but he still challenge me
Just so he could brag that he got the chance to battle me
no punch there
I could get physicly critical and biblicly super lyrical
If u win, YOU should be called Jesus cuz that be a miracle
Aight
Yo talent is minimal, so shut yo trap wrap it up and leave rap
Aesthetic eat me? he aint good enuff to drink the water out my kneecap
maybe I dont get it, nice flow tho
Wonna be thug, I choke ya out wit yo hollow chain and pendant
Yo ass goin down in a ball of flames like a 9/11 flight attendant
9/11 's old, but that hit
Ray Charles can see ure done, chewed up and spit out like gum
Ima say I merked this "MC" so u can at least pretend to be one
played gum line, weak close

Aesth
Gold Album Gospel Artist?? equalz to NOTHING, U from Weak Crew??Ya best member prolly isnt a member//1
And i beat all the others before Christ(B.C.) so bad they dont even remember//2..lol <---dont put this here
That was aight tho
Why Jesusl do Text?, I'll Cease to Spit 'Vowelz' An let the 'Eyez'-Inspect//3
Coz rest aSSured i got Chrome that'll leave your body count high-in-debt//4
ok
Listen I attack yo cleavage bitch, wit clenched fists, that leave u feverish/5
U from Jerusalem?? Kid I leave u wit 50 men, let them see u wit, a cercumsized penis bitch/6..lol
multi, aight
"Here to save u all" haha...It's a sad unavoidable predictcament, when u think u can win, when u lyrically sensative and impoyd a " finish him", when ultrasonic rhythem hit/7
Wit hollow tips, aimed at yo cerebic, and 50 hits to yo kindeys bitch/8
First line should be two, or even three...
simply prevents, yo battle rec is weak infants, and the battle events, i re-invent/9
Lyrical Jesus??Ii think u a thief and shit and like fiendish chicks,Like yo mom wit teeny tits, I leave yo faggot gospol singing clique meaningless/ 10
Once again, gotta break up the lines, but that was an aight close


Aesth wins this, cuz he had punches and personals, whereas LJ's only personal was stating Aesth's name. Personals is why Aesth won this. Try organizin your lines a bit better so they are easier ta read, cuz you gots some good rhymes. Also, get rid of those numbers, they arent needed.

vote - Aesthetic

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KayOhh vs John Dough ( round one )

KayOhh vs John Dough ( round two )

Appreciated

I spent some time votin on this, please hit up tha link below ta vote on my battle, aight?


Peace

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KayOhh vs John Dough ( round one )

KayOhh vs John Dough ( round two )

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This battle is a prime example of how nobody here knows what wit is, or wordplay. Fucking wannabes.

Punches: Aesth, definitely the B.C. line was dope, and the circumsized line was dope too.
Wordplay: Neither, anyways nobody had any
Multis: Aesth, dope multis, about 3-5 per line
Personals: Aesth, B.C., and circumsized lines are both personals
Opener: Aesth, B.C. line
Closer: Jesus, pretend to be one line was alright

Vote - Aesthetic

Little kids come here, open battles, and say a person's name gets their vote, and drops a link. Pisses me off.

And i beat all the others before Christ(B.C.) so bad they dont even remember
Dope line.

Return the favor in my battle with Rule

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