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.snap. 1 33.33%
cutastraphe 2 66.67%
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Old 02-05-04, 02:59 AM   #1
cutastraphe
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+cut vs .snap.+

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15 line max
house rules
blind spit
due in hour
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Old 02-05-04, 03:05 AM   #2
.snap.
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Old 02-05-04, 03:48 AM   #3
cutastraphe
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aight yo........


you don't even gotta check in, we all kno u'r verse is crap
my hands could be covered in pnb but your still the worst snap!!*
a purse snatcher, that's the only way you get money
text is crummy, less then funny, flows like i intend it's sunny
fifteen lines? i could beat you in two-let's not get carried away...
have ya lookin down like that dude in your sig u betta call it a day*
tryin to knock me out, give me a keg and a couple qualudes
see your a newbie, so take this truthfully, you'll .snap. and break loose!!
nigga i payed my dues, you just wishin u been noticed...
fixin the votings-i'll get all up in your grill-like my dicks in a foreman
so just sit and listen, my shit dismisses to clock clowns
you so full of it, make like the quick forum box and drop down!!*



explanations for morons...
*peanut butter/snap...tr snappin with peanut butter on your fingers..lol
*dj in his sig is lookin down must have no penis
*quick forum box in control panel..u kno





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Old 02-05-04, 03:51 AM   #4
.snap.
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Each time ya battle me, ya life's a little bit shorter/
Beatin you is like puttin M&M's in alphabetical order/

This newb couldnt fool-me wit a muthafuckin uzie/
Sprayin shit like grass feeder leavin himself in a doozie/

Poor cutastraphe, im spittin a masterpiece, of disaster so-please/
get on ya knees, an' realise i got the keys to your fuckin release/

Your spits~are~hopeless, theses lips strip~your~focus, leaving your body decaying in pits~of~locus/
The closest, you've come ta ferocious doses of rap potions was when ya hocus pocus'd yaself in atrocious lotions/

I bet the record companies hated your style, all it did was bore 'em/
Now you've realised you true dream is to own an internet forum/

Dude, Your Forever 'doomed to text', you'll never -rap on wax-/
And I'm leavin' this cat like Dale Earnhardt, -dead on tracks-!!/

Techinically and tactically proficient when spittin'...illicitly written provisions, testin' this is forbidden/
So sit back and listen as i destroy ya by verbal division..dismissing you for the simple fact that ya aint any competition!!/


HoLLa baCk YouNgIn..w00t w00t!
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Old 02-05-04, 03:54 AM   #5
.snap.
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damn man, nice spit..this'll be good

Good luck man
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Old 02-05-04, 04:09 AM   #6
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yeh u too i felt yours u'r structure kinda changed..but u kept the flow pretty consistent....good luck
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Old 02-05-04, 05:39 AM   #7
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Puches= cutastraphe- more direct, snap didn't hit hard enough
Wordplay=snap- used lots of good words in the same line, cut-ur direct style went against u on this
Flow=snap-some of cuts stuff didnt make sense till i'd read the explanation at the bottom, so it messed it up a little
Structure=cut-liked the direct style, snap-u mixed it up a little too much
Creativity=snap-got too go to snap cuz of the usage of words,it was interesting

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Old 02-05-04, 02:08 PM   #8
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okay, well...my shit was so direct i don't know how you couldn't understand it. anyways uppin for some more votes.
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Old 02-05-04, 03:39 PM   #9
LyRiCaL GeEnUs
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you don't even gotta check in, we all kno u'r verse is crap
my hands could be covered in pnb but your still the worst snap!!*
You mentioned peanut butter, in a rap, shame
a purse snatcher, that's the only way you get money
text is crummy, less then funny, flows like i intend it's sunny
whack
fifteen lines? i could beat you in two-let's not get carried away...
have ya lookin down like that dude in your sig u betta call it a day*
ehh ok
tryin to knock me out, give me a keg and a couple qualudes
see your a newbie, so take this truthfully, you'll .snap. and break loose!!
decent
nigga i payed my dues, you just wishin u been noticed...
fixin the votings-i'll get all up in your grill-like my dicks in a foreman
played, but ok
so just sit and listen, my shit dismisses to clock clowns
you so full of it, make like the quick forum box and drop down!!*
ok closer



Each time ya battle me, ya life's a little bit shorter/
Beatin you is like puttin M&M's in alphabetical order/
whack and played

This newb couldnt fool-me wit a muthafuckin uzie/
Sprayin shit like grass feeder leavin himself in a doozie/
blah..whackness emergency center kid
Poor cutastraphe, im spittin a masterpiece, of disaster so-please/
get on ya knees, an' realise i got the keys to your fuckin release/
whack, multis are useless if they aren't part of a good punch/personal
Your spits~are~hopeless, theses lips strip~your~focus, leaving your body decaying in pits~of~locus/
The closest, you've come ta ferocious doses of rap potions was when ya hocus pocus'd yaself in atrocious lotions/
I now have a headache. But that was ok. Owwww
I bet the record companies hated your style, all it did was bore 'em/
Now you've realised you true dream is to own an internet forum/
whack
Dude, Your Forever 'doomed to text', you'll never -rap on wax-/
And I'm leavin' this cat like Dale Earnhardt, -dead on tracks-!!/
played and whack
Techinically and tactically proficient when spittin'...illicitly written provisions, testin' this is forbidden/
So sit back and listen as i destroy ya by verbal division..dismissing you for the simple fact that ya aint any competition!!/
played, stretched, and a weak punch

Cutastraphe takes this battle. He had a ok verse, some good punches and personals in there. .snap. came with a weak verse, played lines and such. snap lose the multis until you can make them into witty metas/personals/ounches cause they are worthless on their own. Vote Cut

Please drop an honest vote here guys. please READ the verses, having a prob with that lately http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112157
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Old 02-05-04, 05:06 PM   #10
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Punches-snap
Flo-snap
Multies-snap
Metaphors-snap
Closure-snap
Personals-cut
Vote- Snap

Man U Got Mad Propz On That M&m Line Damn!!!!!!!

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Old 02-05-04, 05:08 PM   #11
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FUCK MY SISTER COPY N PASTED OFF HER A.I.M. SHIT AND PUT IT ON PASTE INSTEAD OF THE LINK BUT HERE IT GOES

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111056
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Old 02-07-04, 04:16 AM   #12
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aight this shit is getting slept on...

i thought it was a pretty good battle

can we get some more honest votes, ann we'll hit up any links, if snap don't i'll twist his neck and pop his head off like a bottlecap...aight!!
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Old 02-07-04, 04:23 AM   #13
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Yo, i'd hit up your threads, but I'm a newbie...cant poll vote..im more than willing to vote and give my input, but most people sont like it when you vote if u cant poll vote too...


Thanks for your votes

w00t~
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Old 02-07-04, 04:25 AM   #14
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snap giving your opinion is better then not giving it..you feel me? when i couldnt poll vote..i still voted regularly..i gave my opinion cuz i don't give ashit bout a poll...it's not like poll votes are a pasttime or anything...lol
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Old 02-08-04, 01:51 AM   #15
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Quote:
Originally Posted by .snap.
Each time ya battle me, ya life's a little bit shorter/
Beatin you is like puttin M&M's in alphabetical order/


This line was very clever and if i could vote i definitely would vote for snap. i liked the Jr. line too.
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