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Old 02-09-04, 08:22 PM   #1
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Aisle 5 (5-2) vs. Fue-Xion(2-1)

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check in's by: wednesday.
verses due: friday, 12 am Eastern Time.
Read LLL rules. Read LLL announcement.
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Old 02-09-04, 08:24 PM   #2
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In.......








sanely ill.


Umm, I'll match whatever you post.

Let's make it good.
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Old 02-09-04, 11:26 PM   #3
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Old 02-12-04, 09:33 PM   #4
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We don't call you a newbie, and here's why - bitch
.. We know you ain't rocking a battle record in your sig
The irony bitch; n' Smoka this is your one shot at fame..
.. Now shut the fuck up and be glad I even mentioned your name
You gotta' be jokin' - but honestly who who woulda knew
.. That I suck so bad; I'm really only better than a FuE
Be glad if you live dude; I'll rip through that bland verse
Then I'll kill Smoka, like I was fucking lung cancer
Kid your lame and I'm nice - but dogg I don't stay boastin
Cuz there's really two no names in the thread - FuE-Xion n' SmokaJoka

Sorry this is extremely rushed, I won't be here tomorrow or at all till Sunday. I only went 10, sorry. Good luck
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Old 02-12-04, 11:32 PM   #5
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....you should of just no showed....instead of making me putting forth effort

WHO?!?! Aisle 5? the missing limb of Deja Vu??....nobody's seen this fag
Remember Mc81, you loved my dick so much...i asked for my penis back!
I'll leave Aisle toothless, you beating me?? I'll have you talkin no such
Put ya money where ya mouth is, too bad Aisle's wallets on his nuts!
You've fallen to dust, and for you to even say Smokas wack...

^^^^^All you had to do was state the clear facts!^^^^^
I'll split this asscrack cheek to cheek....and call this battle a double header!
Aisle's a bitch, Leth gave his prediction......now Smokas a Go Get Her!!
My sickness leaves Aisle bedridden on his back, this is your loss, cough up!
Because the only thing Aisle's good for.......is holding food products!!

i matched yours...and cut two lines off......this was already done before you dropped...which is why i had to do that......

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Old 02-13-04, 06:56 AM   #6
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I can't believe you played off my name with that flip.

Uppin.
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Old 02-13-04, 09:57 AM   #7
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Aisle-seemed like ya dint try as hard, there wasnt
as much creativity as there usually is in ya verse
I did like this line tho--

You gotta' be jokin' - but honestly who who woulda knew
.. That I suck so bad; I'm really only better than a FuE


apart from the typo needed it was funny

Feu-Xion/Smoka-ya had a nice verse that had good personals
,name flips, and some good creativity. some of ya punches dint
hit that hard but ya did make a good effort in persuing them

V/Smoka

jus for a betta thought of verse
Aisle Underestimated him
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Old 02-13-04, 10:40 AM   #8
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Well...

Ya'll both played off the name...so what?
(Aisle/Food products...Smoka/Lung Cancer)

Both were decent, what's the problem with that?

Smoka pushed the boundaries as far a he could get away with it...
Where stretched lines are concerned.
Almost fucked yaself up, keep em shorter.

But, I dunno...

I see what B.I.'s sayin...

There wasn't much effort in Aisle's, he even admits that.

But I still think he came harder pound for pound...
(I say lb. for lb., cuz Smoka's is so much longer)

Cuz I really think almost every bar, maybe leave one out (the opener)...
Was quotable.

Joka's wasn't like that.

I didn't vibe with the "wallets/nuts" and the "go get her" lines.

So, 5.

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Old 02-13-04, 10:58 AM   #9
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Umm... Honestly.... Aisle came like ass
Smoka came average

Average > Ass

Sorry Aisle... please put some effort in it
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Old 02-13-04, 11:41 AM   #10
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I can't believe you played off my name with that flip.

Uppin.
^I cant believe you posted after saying you wouldnt be here today ....2-1

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fue xion won it,
aisle, if your going to half ass verses
then what's the point of being in the
league? you would have been better
off being cocky about it, instead of
attempting to justify the sketchiness
in your verse, cuz it really wasn't too
horrible. as for smoka, you came sort
of average, but you still get my vote
for some reason .

v. smokecock .
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Old 02-13-04, 02:56 PM   #12
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That verse took me like 10 minutes, I had to rush it.

I wish I could sway, but I'm a good man and I won't.
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Old 02-13-04, 03:14 PM   #13
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This battle was ok. Smoka came with hard punches and stayed somewhat consistent. Aisle on the other hand.. that was more like quarter assed. I know you are capable of coming dope but in this battle you only came decent. It was somewhat close though. Both were decent.

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Old 02-13-04, 03:18 PM   #14
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You gotta' be jokin' - but honestly who who woulda knew
.. That I suck so bad; I'm really only better than a FuE

^summed up the battle

you both sucked ass

Aisle keeps beggin for a title shot
but is closer to probation at this point
Either stop "rushing verses"
Or just start being dope

Smoka.........S T O P W I T H T H E S T R E T C H E D L I N E S F O O L !
I didn't enjoy any of your verse

Aisle takes this with the punch I quoted earlier being the only good punch here

Part of me wants to give this to Smoka for actually trying, but

Vote - Aisle
 
Old 02-13-04, 03:28 PM   #15
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BI, I'm not allowing that vote, it was a hate vote. Ever since I called him wack he's been mad, go the fuck away.


3-2.

And if you're voting for Smoka because I didn't try, then don't fucking vote. Jesus.

FEEBLE, I'LL TRY ONCE YOU GIVE ME SOME FUCKIN COMPETITION.

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