Yo thisis my 1st battle... its v.s. Big Maze
Gud Luk bro ima spit within 1/2 hour so plz try to aswell!!!
no verse flippin n it dont matter hu spits first!

Peace...

A-Cubed

10/20 lines wil do...soz bout dis pos i jus 4got da lines amount...

peace

A-Cubed

soz i tuk so long bro my mum kicked me off LOL

CROP FAILURES

warm up
*******
Its Game over you might aswell take the suicide pill cuz a-cubeds here and its hes gonna win FIVE NIL//
My albums always played...urs can b found on the windowsill, like Uma Therman ur still trying to KILL BILL//
My verse may b sleezy, cheezy and easy to b be seen as disfunctional,so what if i aint punctual//
its legible n this guy cudnt reply with illness if u slapped him with aids and classed him as clinical//
i klass myself as cynikal but this guy sez im gonna lose...dats da definition of hypocritical//
hes got a mental problem hes as born fuckin niaeve,i thort my style was bad but his is dispicable//
now im warmed up but calmed down ready for destruction,failing endless crops of
MA(I)ZE//
your gonna have to settle to GRAZE on grass tending fields of clover like conjoined twin slaves//

Hu needs to try???
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Let me give u couple of fingerTIPS no need to be throwin handfuls of intellectual hints//
I shine in battles...if we were a wig u'd b there hair... i'd catch attention like silver tints//
My nervousness causes me to follow in the footsteps of a BAD INFLUENCE,but im not slim shady//
its not MY FAULT its your GUILTY CONSCIENCE,i found out MAZE is your day off rom bein Paul O' Grady//
Give up you bitch just retire youve lost, ur gonna burn like Diana Gabaldon explains in the fiery cross//
This is ur loss, i ''Payed The cost To Be The Boss'',i hope ur gud at maths cuz u can COUNT this as you next LOSS//

Peace out bro...

A-Cubed

You need to get at the end of the line dawg and wait your turn/
My lyrics are more worster than the common aid bacterial germ
If there was a college for rappers then I would be the number 1 scholar/
While I'm living big you'll be on a sidewalk yelling "I'll rap for a dollar"
Theres no testing my nuts right now I haven't made out the exam/
But it gone hit harder than the bat being swung by the adopted child BAM-BAM
Run around two miles put your finger to your neck and firmly press/
That's how fast your heart gone be pumping when the barrel is at your chest
I'm a demon through the night, your a child asleep in the bed/
Your like the mortician, can't get pussy so you fuck around with the dead
If you was in the hospital and I was the green line that kept you alive/
I would suddenly go flat and laugh at your ass while you die
All those lines that you spit you should've saved for your next match/
Or better yet you should'nt have wrote cause it isn't no where near rap
Have you ever heard of a statistic, well that's what you just became/
You never know how I'm gone come, like a chamelon I got change

In the words of lil flip "GAME OVER"

A-cubed: i know this was ya first time, and ya punches were good but i felt like i was reading a book or somethin try to shortin down ya bars overall kinda good 3/10

big maze: man, ya punches hit hard, and it all flowed good not really anything i can dog on so congrats 8/10

win: big maze

since i checked out ya battles come one over and lay ya votes down
baller vs. murder phreak
baller vs. mic-wrecker

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"SAY HELLO TO MY LITTLE FRIEND"

big maze and cubed your stuff was too stretched
big maze, good line "If you was in the hospital and I was the green line that kept you alive/
I would suddenly go flat and laugh at your ass while you die
but stretch and shoulda been set up as a meta, u sound to new doin it like this.

cubed: u had more punches and wordplay, but stretched and not all that cool, both of ya'll need to put in multies and shorten up your lines. us like or as when doin similies(meta's) make it flow some. peace get at my battles like crazy tell me what u think

vote: cubed, more punches and actual wordplay or close.

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uppin peeps...
plz hit this up i need to no wat y'all think.

Peace...

A-cubed

uppin agen plz dont sleep on this y'all!
i'll hit urs up honestly afterwards if u leave a link!

Peace...

A-Cubed

cubed takes this one

Punches cube
Struc Cube
Flow cube
Metas cub
multies cube

this was his easily yo return da favor

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thanx for da vote bro...plz keep hittin this up!
holla at this honestly n i'll return da favour!

Peace...

A-Cubed

im give this to cube- good wordplay - a nice first effort. U need to shorten ya libes and get str8 to the point. otherwise it gets borin and doesnt flow

maze's verse was stretched too but he lack the wordplay that cude had

vote cube

hit these battles pls
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117485
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117127

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yo kingz ur vote wasnt counted so i dnt no wat happened but can u plz hit it up agen.
cuz i really need da vote!LOL
im just bout to hit some of urs up hponestly ...

Peace...

A-Cubed

i like both mcees in this battle but i got to pic a winner and the way i judge battles is mainly who had the hardest punchlines so here it is:

A-Cubed:u nice on the mic ecspecially this being yo first battle and i like yo flow cuz u got mad skills, my favorite punchline wuz "its legible n this guy cudnt reply with illness if u slapped him with aids and classed him as clinical", that wuz nice,boi u sick wit it

big maze:u got mad flow and i like the way u attack showin no mercy,actually seemin like u face to face wit yo opponent,grimmy.....u had some lines that caught my attention wit these lines "Your like the mortician, can't get pussy so you fuck around with the dead
If you was in the hospital and I was the green line that kept you alive/
I would suddenly go flat and laugh at your ass while you die",that wuz tight compare yoself to the life line and the last line u hit "You never know how I'm gone come, like a chamelon I got change", that wuz nice too

so wit that bein said my vote goes to: big maze

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THE TRUTH,THE WHOLE TRUTH, AND NOTHIN BUT THE THE TRUTH......SO TRUST ME IT AIN'T WORTH IT FAM...NO,NO,NO

4th uppin come on peeps plz lets jus get this ova n finished with!
jus a couple of votes n this shit wil b ova...plz hit it up n i'll vote on urs as honest as shit bro'z.

Peace...

A-Cubed