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Old 03-29-04, 10:51 AM   #1
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adebisi vs. lock

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deadlines:
battles go up monday
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by sunday
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 bar min.
16 bar max.
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and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league
 
Old 03-30-04, 03:11 PM   #2
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4 bars?

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Old 03-30-04, 03:34 PM   #3
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checkin in!
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Old 03-30-04, 03:58 PM   #4
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Kill this dick, piss off voters, they love the cock
And marvel in amazement of how I master lock
So quick to jock and love me as I take the throne
Whiel you're left feeling funny, impaled with ya funny bone


Woot, 4 bars!
 
Old 03-30-04, 05:02 PM   #5
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^^^ What a retard...........Thats only two bars, four lines.........LMFAO
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Old 03-30-04, 05:05 PM   #6
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I punish with impunity/
cut you slack if you cool with me/
but if you aint, Ill piss on you like you was my private toilet seat/
Yous the type that think yous a g born and raised in malibu/
Ill put the red liquid on ya body and I aint talkin bout body tattoos/
Ill put the knife to ya structure with so many slices cops gotta count by two's/
If someone say Adebisi's the best.. I'll just be like.......WHO.
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Old 03-30-04, 10:35 PM   #7
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yo lock has to get he's the only one that actually spit somethin', adebisi had a nice line but they were only 2 bars. But lock had good flow, decent punches, fair vocab, ok structure and that is still enough to beat adebisi.
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Old 03-30-04, 10:43 PM   #8
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lock gets this for the fact that he followed the rules with the amount of bars......
and adedsi didnt follow the rules......
so thats how i'm voting.....

vote=lock

one love.........
 
Old 03-30-04, 11:33 PM   #9
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Both Sucked But Vote: Lock.. 4 Having Punches In This Verus. Flow Was The Same. Anyways.. V- Lock, Overall Better Verus
 
Old 03-31-04, 10:22 AM   #10
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short ass battle

breakdown for adebsi:

flow:nothing great and for only four lines that ain't good 5/10

volcab:average nothing special 5/10

punches:best line,"And marvel in amazement of how I master lock" for four lines i would of atleast thrown a couple of strong punches 5/10

overall:15/30 really try harder next time this wasn't great

breakdown for lock:

flow:i know it's only four lines but shit you guys both didn't really try on the mechanics here 5/10

volcab:average 5/10

punches:atleast you threw a couple instead of one like your oppenent my fav was,"but if you aint, Ill piss on you like you was my private toilet seat/" funny 7/10

overall:17/30

vote--i really expected alittle more but lock gets my vote for what was here
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Old 03-31-04, 11:32 AM   #11
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^^^
I see none of you catch wordplay... or know what a bar is

A bar is an audio term... it has nothing to do with lines
Morons
 
Old 03-31-04, 04:07 PM   #12
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LoL...Herb Battle Fasho..

Check It...

Lock Took This...He Actually Had Punches and I Actually Took Interest In His 2 Bar Spit....LOL..Battles Like This Ruin Leagues..

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Old 03-31-04, 06:53 PM   #13
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Adebisi
^^^
I see none of you catch wordplay... or know what a bar is

A bar is an audio term... it has nothing to do with lines
Morons



Its too bad this isn't an audio battle, you might have stood more of a chance..... This battle was easily won by Lock. Forget the bars, he just had better punches.
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Old 03-31-04, 06:59 PM   #14
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^^^Vote:Lock
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Old 04-01-04, 12:05 PM   #15
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wtf is this this was a wasted thread and a bar was orginally a term used to descibe the connection of musicical notes with lyrics to pinpoint loops and other shit but anyways herb battle dirty shouldnt let this shit go on any more
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