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Old 04-16-04, 09:59 AM   #16
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I'm with enygma. Duke.. I know he's good man, but don't pay him respect in your verse. Nothing good with using his record, getting a punch in about his first loss or something, but it seemed like half your verse was just how good he was. You gotta come straight with the punches, and I just saw very few. I've seen you drop better verses. Restricted had good punches, certainly not the best I've seen but good enough to take this.
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Old 04-16-04, 10:22 AM   #17
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hey man.. didn't realize there were no crew votes.. but these guys are both in my crew, so does it still count?... my bad.
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Old 04-16-04, 01:30 PM   #18
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breakdown for young duke:

flow:good flow no off spots this was solid 8/10

volcab:nice nothing special but difenatly not basic 7/10

punches:some good lines not quite what i'd of tried to do in that size of battle best line,My intellect is higher than yours, it's like I'm the road runner and you're Wiley" i laughed 8/10

overall:23/30 one of the best verses of the week probably

breakdown for restrcited:

flow:slick flow working well this week 8/10

volcab:good use as always you got the best in the league thus far 8/10

punches:not much this week really i was expecting more from you my fav,"Re$tricted Would Blow This Kid Away, Like An Intergalactic Star/" aside from that nothing real great 6/10

overall:22/30

vote--i gotta give this to young duke, one hell of a match though
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Old 04-16-04, 04:22 PM   #19
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Aight Check It....

.::Re$tricted=2 and Yung Duke=0::.

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Old 04-16-04, 07:38 PM   #20
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ok thats restricted 2 Duke 1. I fell ya'll when ya'll said i was glorifyin him but everyone know he is argiably the best on the site. I'm Just sayin he could be Pac for all I care. but i did hammer on it for too long
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Old 04-17-04, 11:01 AM   #21
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Re$tricted-Ill verse, outstanding punches, nice vocabulary, and metaphors, great verse.

Young Duke-Good verse, liked the smiley line,but you DID state how good he was TOO MUCH, and you forced some words in there, like that toby line.

Punches-Restricted, he had nice punches, couldn't really see any diss duke threw.
Multies-To be honest, I didn't really see any in both verses.
Metaphors-Restricted, he just had more.
Vocabulary-Restricted again, he used big words and everything.
Flow/Structure-Restricted, his verse was like all in line and easy to read.


vote-Restricted, his verse was just all out better
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Old 04-17-04, 09:38 PM   #22
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breakdown forduke:
rymes8/10
flow 6/10
punches4?/10
you need to elevate your capable of way better
your best line:This shit should be in sacred scriptures, cause I'm re wtittin the Ten Commandments,
Thy shall not win this battle, and Duke shall be the last man standin,
restricted:
rymes:9/10
style: 9/10
punches 8/10
your best line:Your Worst Mistake Was Actually Posting A Verse In Dis Thread,
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Old 04-17-04, 09:39 PM   #23
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Quote:
Originally Posted by streetsweepa
breakdown forduke:
rymes8/10
flow 6/10
punches4?/10
you need to elevate your capable of way better
your best line:This shit should be in sacred scriptures, cause I'm re wtittin the Ten Commandments,
Thy shall not win this battle, and Duke shall be the last man standin,
restricted:
rymes:9/10
style: 9/10
punches 8/10
your best line:Your Worst Mistake Was Actually Posting A Verse In Dis Thread,
Shoulda Forfitted This Match, You Could've Had Your Dignity, Instead../

my vote goes to retricted
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Old 04-19-04, 07:57 AM   #24
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4-1 restricted wins
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