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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


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allright sorry dirtboy69 i got sick and crashed my computerso ill drop in a few thanks for the scond try

2bad hope your good enough

here i go

this rap game aint a game\
no more with me up in it\

cause with me in the game\
someones goina end up like biggie or pac\

cause im turnin back time with this lyrical battles\
cause little boys and girls who died back in the day\

now there all jumpin up out of there grave\
and goin to collage Raves and partyin it up\

even though they were once befor all dead\
the little girls are now givin the anarchist all head\

now to get on the subject of this fool 2bad\
been on here less then a month
and already started a crew now thats perrty fuckin sad\

a little hint you may want to get a little bit of a rep\
startin a crew after less then a month on this site

the only people you will get are the noobs who think there bad\
when really there ass are sad\

allright im ready for ya so now you can drop for me

2BAD.. .CHECKETY CHECKTY CHECKIN IN MAR'FUCKA



I'd rather wipe my ass with broken glass// or choke on gas//
than lose 2 you// 2 be true im in a different class//
so think fast// make sure u spit dope//
I drop flows like foes// while u just hit and hope//

like the pope// im a preacher// here 2 teach ya//
tho we both stand here// u know that im the main feature//
your like a creature// out the blue lagoon//
your moma wish she saw a picture// wen u were in the womb//
she wud not of resumed// with the pregnancy//
she'd of took a vacum// between her legs u see//
and instead of growin up 2 be retarded// thinkin that he know's it all//
he wud of been discarded// at the hospital disposal//

but wait.. let me give credit where credit is due//
he's right// i need 2 build respect// b 4 i build a crew//
but this dudes a CREW FILLER and u know that it's true//
how the fuck can i elevate battlin bitches like u!!!

allright lets up this
man no hate on the crew thing holla at me

average battle but aight spit from two newbies.
2bad had sum gud flow and he had gud structure in his spit. his punches were cool wit some gud connections but u need to elevate if u hope to win against experinced rappers. ure shit was pretty basic and ure lines were way too short in places.
crazy had aight flow and structure and his punches were fairly weak and didnt connect aswell as 2bads. u had a nice multi at the end but really u need to elevate and get sum more multis and sum personals in ure spit.

Overall my vote goes to 2Bad!!

2bad definately takes this one hands down........... One's shit didn't even rhyme half the time. 2Bad hit wit some good punches and that is what gets wins................

Vote - 2bad

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good battle...pretty one sided though this was my break down....

the crazy one...( these are grades for pairs of lines...)
1.5 come on
2.5 what is this?
3.5 wheres the personal??? no punch!
4.5 how does talking about college raves...win a battle?
5.5.5 finally something that rhymed...but where is the personal or punch
6.8 finally something...that was pretty good...bad structure though
7.6 kind of a punch
8.6.5 fine...whateva though

now 2 bad

1.7.5 pretty tight...nice multi...good shit...weak punch though
2.8 haha that was pretty good...i like your structure...
3.9 oh shit...clever...pope...funny shit...good line
4.9 damn....blue lagoon...original i like it
5.5 what...ya lost me...not good...disgarded...nope not good...so played
6.5 you can't comeback to what he says....read the rules
7.9 nice closer...you can't elevate...against guys like this...but he'll get better...

v-2bad

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too bad took this quite easy.

like the pope// im a preacher// here 2 teach ya//
tho we both stand here// u know that im the main feature//
your like a creature// out the blue lagoon//
your moma wish she saw a picture// wen u were in the womb//
she wud not of resumed// with the pregnancy//
she'd of took a vacum// between her legs u see//

nice lines. werent great but enough to beat crazy1 easliy

he had better flow with some nice multi's

crazy some of ya bars didnt even rhyme
come dog this is da league - step it up next time, nice try tho

v/2bad

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You both suck horribly...
Learn what wordplay is... learn what metas are... learn what wit is..

Blah... the second kid took it...
And still sucked

breakdown for the_crazy_one:

flow:it flowed alright i guess kinda on a basic tip though 6/10

volcab:average if not below average really basic 5/10

punches:nothing really alot of describing how your better then him and not enough of making fun of him 4/10

overall:15/30 you got alot of improving to do but keep trying

breakdown for 2bad:

flow:alright some good internal rhyming to tighten it up 7/10

volcab:basic try uppin this next week 5/10

punches:not much the was really direct your opener probably the best,"I'd rather wipe my ass with broken glass// or choke on gas//than lose 2 you// 2 be true im in a different class//" better then your oppenent though 6/10

overall:18/30 good job

vote--2bar wins this in my eyes just on a whole other level then that of the_crazy_one keep posting though and you two can both improve

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Wow... 2bads closer alone took this one.. nice punch, much better flow than crazy.. better rhyming, better punches.. crazy: it's pretty bad when only 3 bars in your verse is actually about your opponent. you had a decent personal in there... but seriously this is a battle, you should be going out punching

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