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Old 04-30-04, 10:16 AM   #16
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Kingz - I was feeling your flow, it was off in some spots, but you came hard with some sweet punches, and liked your wordplay.

Best Line - Im bout to lyrically torture you…but aint gunna kill-ya-yet
When im done with you…there be nuttin left but a ‘Silhouette’

he thinks his verse has got the crowd at the ‘edge’ of their seat
I suppose that could be true…cos we are all falling asleep!

Worst Line - This kids says he is ‘sick’….yeh dog you look like it
Rapping like some1 tampered with ya drink…did someone spike it?

Shadow - Good spit man, had a better flow goin, thought you had some good punches in there and good wordplay.

Best Line - Crack head father, dropped you so many times like your avvy
Now all Kingz say is “I wanna drop shit.. just like my daddy”

Worst Line - NONE

OVERALL - I gotta give this battle to Kingz, he had better flow going was liking his style more and his punches hit harder. Shadow, your shit was tight to.. but I wasnt feeling it as much, I thought Kingz punches were harder, step up on the punches next time man, and maybe some more multi's.

VOTE - Kingz

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Old 04-30-04, 10:38 AM   #17
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Wow... 2 explained votes. Good job people. Next time don't bother voting.
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Old 04-30-04, 10:44 AM   #18
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Anyway, its:

Shadow - 1, Kingz - 1 or 2, if you count Buzz
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Old 04-30-04, 10:53 AM   #19
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ur free posting now. u gunna get disqualifed.

by the way its upto dirtboy69 to count the votes
 
Old 04-30-04, 10:54 AM   #20
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^^ I'm not freeposting, I'm upping for some votes with feedback.
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Old 04-30-04, 10:59 AM   #21
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yes
Kingz got this in a weak battle
it was pretty close
but Kingz used his forced words better
so
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Old 04-30-04, 11:07 AM   #22
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^^ wow. low blow.

Kingz -3 Shadow - 1
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Old 04-30-04, 11:13 AM   #23
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all round tight ass battle
i do think both y'all cud have done better cuz u both got skillz

flow and structure was excellent from both playas
both y'all hit wit hard punches and both had gud connection but i felt that kingz was hittin a little harder and i cud get into his verse more. some gud use of vocabs, gud wordplay u know it. both y'all opened strong and ended strong and i'd say it was a tight even battle hard to call.

i pick kingz cuz like i said i was feelin his verse more and he hit harder in my opinion
plus he had my favourite line:
this dog can’t even defend his self, with weak punches and sad flows
but jus remember that after dark…there are no shadows!
funny shit!!

My vote goes to Kingz
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Old 04-30-04, 11:20 AM   #24
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wow
thats another person votin against you for Kingz
do you get the hint yet?
he beat you
and this match should have been over with 5-0
but, ehh..Kingz was bullshitted out of one vote
so..it doesnt matter
he's gonna win regardless
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Old 04-30-04, 11:22 AM   #25
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^^ I didn't say his verse was whack. It was good. I just don't like unexplained votes and hate voters. Now stop freeposting.
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Old 04-30-04, 11:28 AM   #26
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Wait hold on, I'm the only person who voted for Shadow's Edge, and I gave the most complete explanation out of anyone, so don't say I bullshitted my shit, just 'cause I have a different opinion, cause I always vote honestly, not like the rest of the dick-ridin' and hatin' bytchez on this site. So watch whoz fuckin' honesty you quetionin' nigga.
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Old 04-30-04, 11:49 AM   #27
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nice battle. lyrically both you guys take the cake. nice punches by Kingz also nice mental attack by Shadow. all in all this was a nice battle. but i give my vote to KIngz because his verse rhymed more and made alot more sence. Shadow i had to really sick back for aminute and read your shit over and over until i got it.

vote=Kingz
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Old 04-30-04, 01:20 PM   #28
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Aight man. Thanks for the feedback ^^ I know I got that problem sometimes.
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Old 05-02-04, 04:20 PM   #29
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breakdown for kingz:

flow:no off spots solid all the way through good job 7/10

volcab:nice for the most part again no problems here 7/10

punches:some real good lines good job at addressing shadow through the whole peice best line,"You could even reach ‘my level’ if you ‘used’ or ‘stood on’ an encyclopedia" 7/10

overall:21/30

breakdown for shadow's edge:

flow:nice job no problems here 7/10

volcab:kinda below kingz i thought still alright just down abit 6/10

punches:nothing too much no use of the words in the punches and really nothing but played topcis and shit that just wasn't seeming to be hitting try harder next week 5/10

overall:18/30

vote--kingz ran away with this good verse you surprised me
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Old 05-03-04, 09:35 AM   #30
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7-2 kingz wins
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