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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


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This fag gets no love from me! I constantly boot gays
Folks thought I was Jordan,The way I promptly Shoot J's!
Engyma beat him before,and now he's about to get beat again
Cause if J-Poll has a Shoe In for the win...Im Ampitating Limbs
You are just a wack newbie...so damnit.....you play the roll
This kid claims he's manly,but ONLY GAYS want to see J's Poll!
JPoll is weak as fuck!..HEY!..Im just keeping shit real though
Cause although he's Nice with a Mic..he's even better with a dildo!
Im hell sent..let JPoll act tough...I will leave this dude bent
Cause like Clumsy Architects....I destroy BluePrints!!!


Im posting this now because I have finals and will not have alot of time to do it later.
And if you dont understand all of my punches...then dont vote!!

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R.I.P. Bodie

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JPoll - Good battle man, hott flow.. hard hitten punches, and your personals were on FIRE.

Best Line - Now that ur merked...please listen again stunned...
Yur the trick clowned off every rap site...especially this one!...

Worst Line - Only spit gay jokes...seriously Kryo is it still 95'

Kyro - Good spit man, you had a good flow.. and your punches were hitten hard.

Best Line - JPoll is weak as fuck!..HEY!..Im just keeping shit real though
Cause although he's Nice with a Mic..he's even better with a dildo!

Worst Line - Im hell sent..let JPoll act tough...I will leave this dude bent
Cause like Clumsy Architects....I destroy BluePrints!!!

OVERALL - Good battle boys, but I gotta give it to the guy wit harder personals and that is... JPoll.. he came wit some niice personals and some tight punches, and his flow was hott. Kyro.. your flow was good to, and your punches were pretty tight.. but you didnt have good personals. Work on some hott personals and then you can beat this dude.

VOTE - JPoll

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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124689

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TAKE MY ADVICE FROM PEOPLE FROM CANADA nd FUCK YA LYFE

okay here is a bar for bar breakdown....

This fag gets no love from me! I constantly boot gays
Folks thought I was Jordan,The way I promptly Shoot J's!
Good punch and meta...nice wordplay...good opener...8/10
Engyma beat him before,and now he's about to get beat again
Cause if J-Poll has a Shoe In for the win...Im Ampitating Limbs
Good meta...good punch...1st line coulda been better....7/10
You are just a wack newbie...so damnit.....you play the roll
This kid claims he's manly,but ONLY GAYS want to see J's Poll!
Haha...good punch...waitin for an insane one...8/10
JPoll is weak as fuck!..HEY!..Im just keeping shit real though
Cause although he's Nice with a Mic..he's even better with a dildo!
Weak...6/10
Im hell sent..let JPoll act tough...I will leave this dude bent
Cause like Clumsy Architects....I destroy BluePrints!!!
Nice personal and punch....good closer....8/10

Verse Score - 37/50 = 74%

Well your verse was decent....i mean you had punches but nothing that had me laughing or sayin DAMN!....fourth bar fucked up your sustainment....decent verse....nice flow....good meta's...only a couple personals....expected a better verse....

Cryogenics...ahhh the art of making things cold...
so retarded...for best rapper...lil jon he polled..
hahaha....good punch....semmed wack at first....but the punch landed hard....8/10
Yur just like Ja rule..you hold no wait with wack text...
Before U talk to Jpoll...remember who's the Old RB reject...
Damn...another hard hitter....9/10
Got laughed outta the LLL...and it's soon to occure again...
leave battles...head back to the lounge and make another wack top ten...
Nice personal and punch...comin really hard at him....8/10
Cause having you on the list is like having Gunit101 in first...
The only chance you have is if the mods have our text reversed...
Nice punch...8/10
Only spit gay jokes...seriously Kryo is it still 95'...
You're the worst thing to happen to battling since 'White Out' arrived...
Good meta...okay punch....7/10
Where's your 'mom' and 'fat' jokes...i know you think that's street...
Brag about your 17 wins...but won't show all your defeits...
lol nice punch and personal...8/10
Now that ur merked...please listen again stunned...
Yur the trick clowned off every rap site...especially this one!...
Nice punch and closer...decent...7/10

Verse Score - 55/70 = 79%

Well you topped his verse...you had better punches...they were more direct...u had more and better personals....flow was nice.....wordplay was good...but ur punches won u this battle.....good verse...

Vote - JPoll

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ok honest vote
j-poll- nice drop good flow punches and personals
good structure
Yur just like Ja rule..you hold no wait with wack text...
Before U talk to Jpoll...remember who's the Old RB reject...
^^^ good punch but needs work^^^
Now that ur merked...please listen again stunned...
Yur the trick clowned off every rap site...especially this one!...
^^^ god personal and punch
overall*8*
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kyro
kinda wack and weak
bad flow weak punches not great personals
This fag gets no love from me! I constantly boot gays
Folks thought I was Jordan,The way I promptly Shoot J's!
^^here u go carrying on with the gay lines^^
not helping you at all^^ VERY WACK!!
terrible flow
just overall weak
*5*
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my vote- j-poll

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stop free posting next time i gotta delete it someone's being dq'd.

breakdown for kryogenix:

flow:worked well here i saw no off spots 7/10

volcab:not much to say nothing special but it was working 6/10

punches:some good personals mainly played topics but they seemed to raise beef and bother j-poll so good job best line,"This kid claims he's manly,but ONLY GAYS want to see J's Poll!" 8/10

overall:21/30 best part of your verse was the punches

breakdown for j-poll:

flow:worked but nothing too compelx 6/10

volcab:good job here pretty much on par with your oppenent 6/10

punches:not too many lines here hittin on a personal level your usually array of he's wack i'm good best line,"Only spit gay jokes...seriously Kryo is it still 95'..." try harder here 6/10

overall:18/30 good verse but really i don't see it being better then kryogenix

vote--kryogenix

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Jpoll Was sikk his battle was very good his flow was nice i liked the way u did this battle

Kyro Genetix did good but ur structure wasmessed up so u need to work on that

Break DOwn

Kyro Genetix

Flow 7/10
Rhymes 7/10
Structure 5/10
punches 8/10
27/40

Jpoll

Flow 8/10
Rhymes 9/10
Structure 8/10
Punches 9/10
34/40

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wtf^
Im tired of these votes from people thats not in the league
the score is
JPoll-2
Me-1

if just anyone can come and vote
then these should just be regular frontline battles
right?

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this battle was ok i guess. punches were gernally weak and hte flow was pretty boring. ill breka it down.

Kryo
This fag gets no love from me! I constantly boot gays
Folks thought I was Jordan,The way I promptly Shoot J's!
meh, u know, its ok. it's a punch at least. not saying anything that great though. flow was good, rhyme scheme average. 6.5/10

Engyma beat him before,and now he's about to get beat again
Cause if J-Poll has a Shoe In for the win...Im Ampitating Limbs
Didn't really rhyme here. Just saying someone lost before without any other sort of punc is pretty weak. Nothing special. flow ok, but it didn't really rhyme. 5.5/10

You are just a wack newbie...so damnit.....you play the roll
This kid claims he's manly,but ONLY GAYS want to see J's Poll!
first line was stupid, but the second one was OK. would have been really wack, since it was just a gay punch, but u used his name which made it ok. flow was ok again, not great. rhyme scheme was once again average. 6.5/10

JPoll is weak as fuck!..HEY!..Im just keeping shit real though
Cause although he's Nice with a Mic..he's even better with a dildo!
not bad ere actually. Using his subnic. You could have used it better though i think. not too bad though. flow ok, rhyme scheme ok. 7.5/10

Im hell sent..let JPoll act tough...I will leave this dude bent
Cause like Clumsy Architects....I destroy BluePrints!!!
This didn't really rhyme very well again. But the last line had some nice wordplay, good punch. flow was a bit off and the rhyme scheme wasn't good. 7.5/10


J-Poll

Cryogenics...ahhh the art of making things cold...
so retarded...for best rapper...lil jon he polled..
sounded very contrived. wans't smooth at all. not a good opener i dont think. didn't do anything for me at all. flow was pretty off and rhyme scheme was weak. 4.5/10

Yur just like Ja rule..you hold no wait with wack text...
Before U talk to Jpoll...remember who's the Old RB reject...
OK I guess. not bad. flow was ok, rhyme scheme was off again. 5/10

Got laughed outta the LLL...and it's soon to occure again...
leave battles...head back to the lounge and make another wack top ten...
not bad. at least its a personal. other than that, nothing special. flow was off and rhyme scheme was weak. 5/10

Cause having you on the list is like having Gunit101 in first...
The only chance you have is if the mods have our text reversed...
nothing special once again. yeah, it's a punch, but not the greatest. flow was ok, rhyme scheme ok, pretty weak though. 5.5/10

Only spit gay jokes...seriously Kryo is it still 95'...
You're the worst thing to happen to battling since 'White Out' arrived...
getting better here. nice personal stuff. punch was ok, could have made it better. i dunno, more complex or something. floww as a bit off, rhyme scheme was ok. 6.5/10

Where's your 'mom' and 'fat' jokes...i know you think that's street...
Brag about your 17 wins...but won't show all your defeits...
not bad. once again, nothing really special. need some mroe complexity though. flow was ok, rhyme scheme was ok. 7/10

Now that ur merked...please listen again stunned...
Yur the trick clowned off every rap site...especially this one!...
not bad. pretty weak for a finisher though. flow was good, rhyme scheme was good. 7.5/10

Kryo
Line by Line - 67
Complexity - 10
Vocab - 8
Total - 85

J-Poll
Line By Line - 59
Complexity - 12
Vocab - 11
Total - 82

Therefore, Kryogenix just got this.

no actually it's 4 to 2...but good try... uppin

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that was a good battle, kryo you had good punches, but i think j-poll hit harder.

vote=J-Poll

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Cryogenics...ahhh the art of making things cold...
so retarded...for best rapper...lil jon he polled..
OK..TAILED OFF off 7/10
Yur just like Ja rule..you hold no wait with wack text...
Before U talk to Jpoll...remember who's the Old RB reject...
NICE PERSONAL...8/10
Got laughed outta the LLL...and it's soon to occure again...
leave battles...head back to the lounge and make another wack top ten...
AGAIN HIT PERSONALLY...7/10
Cause having you on the list is like having Gunit101 in first...
The only chance you have is if the mods have our text reversed...
PERSONAL...CUD B HARDER...7/10
Only spit gay jokes...seriously Kryo is it still 95'...
You're the worst thing to happen to battling since 'White Out' arrived...
GUD PUNCH 7/10
Where's your 'mom' and 'fat' jokes...i know you think that's street...
Brag about your 17 wins...but won't show all your defeits...
OK....6/10
Now that ur merked...please listen again stunned...
Yur the trick clowned off every rap site...especially this one!...
DECENT PERSON AND PUNCH...7/10

JPOLL-49/70-lots of personals cuda bin a bit harder...nice spit
___This fag gets no love from me! I constantly boot gays
Folks thought I was Jordan,The way I promptly Shoot J's!
NICE..PUNCH..8/10
Engyma beat him before,and now he's about to get beat again
Cause if J-Poll has a Shoe In for the win...Im Ampitating Limbs
PLAYED...6/10
You are just a wack newbie...so damnit.....you play the roll
This kid claims he's manly,but ONLY GAYS want to see J's Poll!
NOT FEELIN GAY JOKES...PLAYED6/10
JPoll is weak as fuck!..HEY!..Im just keeping shit real though
Cause although he's Nice with a Mic..he's even better with a dildo!
OK PUNCH 7/10
Im hell sent..let JPoll act tough...I will leave this dude bent
Cause like Clumsy Architects....I destroy BluePrints!!!
NOT HARD BUT GUD WORDPLAY 7/10

kryo-shuda cum harder,gud word play...but no personals32/50_______________


my vote goes to j poll....if kryo had hit harder hed have won...jpoll won coz he hit wit decent punches that were personal both had gud structure n flow n i did like kryo`s wordplay beta

vote-jpoll