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Old 05-16-04, 10:17 PM   #1
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illtalic vs. deadly visionz(hype match)

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deadlines:
battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm eastern
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 line min.
16 line max.
The Object of the match:you write your verse to
hype yourself up not to make fun of your oppenent
voting must be based on how well someone hypes themselves
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Old 05-16-04, 10:51 PM   #2
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Hype yourself up!! Wtf...........who made this shit??


-------Ooh Well................Mr IJL.....himself...hahaha
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Old 05-16-04, 10:52 PM   #3
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I No Man This Shit Is Whack Hegave Me Match Where I Got To Diss My Self An Dwhoever Diss Themself The Best Win This Shit Is Whack
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1. tha gilla teen :whooped that nigga
2. spiky 2k8 (2) :thats was a funny battle
3. da jazz :easy ass win also funny battle
4. young jigga :fun battles althought i won easyly
5. youndkd33: that bitch was a whiner about lines oh well i still win
 
Old 05-17-04, 09:44 PM   #4
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Yup. Where is my boi Talic?
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Old 05-17-04, 11:19 PM   #5
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I No Man This Shit Is Whack Hegave Me Match Where I Got To Diss My Self An Dwhoever Diss Themself The Best Win This Shit Is Whack

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Old 05-18-04, 06:58 AM   #6
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Yeah i`m here DV.
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Old 05-18-04, 09:42 AM   #7
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I rap Casual… but still remain Smarter than 99% of the board
Better than most…
Cos the other 1% are alias`… made when I was bored
See I would only have to use the minimum lines
To make impacts…
An kill more kids than Anti–Personnel mines
Creatin` a stir every time I type… y`all fuckin` love me
I love the hype…
Cos when net-thugs get busy it`s time to knock `em Casually
Got it down to a T… I provide more drama than Casualty rooms
Leave scripts scorched…
It`s like givin` work to Lara… the way I`m always fillin` Tombs.
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Old 05-18-04, 11:56 AM   #8
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Aight...............

Ok kids watch me' get hype N'Comin up in this function..
Get ready Relaunch' prepare for me to show yall somthin..
DeadlyV brings quality, fake Mcs suffering from homosexuality..
In reality there is no equality, I'm better then you so respect my faculty..
Rb Relaunch I already bar coded Mcs who need a G scan..
When i type i'm faster then a broadband that’s why your crew ran..
I'm hyped up,wish that everyone could read between the lines..
You got to be dope,you could post 100 times, and still get no replies..
Everyone have u ever seen an MC that do tricks with his lips?..
I guess am so talented' when i spit i make my tongue do backflips,
Wow..check and Don't neglect eclectic sources of my superb word play..
Dont ever fuck with me like Casual, and be careful about what you say..


Blah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! am hyped..........................UP.
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Old 05-18-04, 12:29 PM   #9
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I rap Casual… but still remain Smarter than 99% of the board
Better than most…
Cos the other 1% are alias`… made when I was bored

^^^ slick...good

An kill more kids than Anti–Personnel mines
Creatin` a stir every time I type… y`all fuckin` love me
I love the hype…


^^ not feelin..or jus dont get it

Ok kids watch me' get hype N'Comin up in this function..
Get ready Relaunch' prepare for me to show yall somthin..
DeadlyV brings quality, fake Mcs suffering from homosexuality..
In reality there is no equality, I'm better then you so respect my faculty..


^^ daz hot rhyme there..good

Everyone have u ever seen an MC that do tricks with his lips?..
I guess am so talented' when i spit i make my tongue do backflips,
Wow..check and Don't neglect eclectic sources of my superb word play..
Dont ever fuck with me like Casual, and be careful about what you say..

^^ yea..thats Hubris...lol..nice


Vote: Deadly...more complex..and wrote to the topic better
 
Old 05-18-04, 12:54 PM   #10
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"Got it down to a T… I provide more drama than Casualty rooms
Leave scripts scorched…
It`s like givin` work to Lara… the way I`m always fillin` Tombs."

That shit, and the opener from casual, won this shit. That was really tight, nice job, and I liked the way he snuck a lot of wordplay and shit in there like it was a regular battle.

v/ casual
 
Old 05-18-04, 02:14 PM   #11
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breakdown for illtalic: flow was working alright the structure took abit to get into but alright job. pretty good use of volcab for the type of verse too, some nice lines here also my fav,"I rap Casual… but still remain Smarter than 99% of the board
Better than most…" good line and great way to open the verse overall i'd give this verse 7/10

breakdown for deadly visionz:flowed well no off spots through the peice overall nice job there, volcab was a highlight from your verse really made your verse more readable,best line would be,"When i type i'm faster then a broadband that’s why your crew ran.." thought it was kinda different good job overall 7.5/10

vote-- deadly visionz takes this he just worked the match idea alot better and had his verse mechanics down too.
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Old 05-18-04, 07:28 PM   #12
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Up

1-2................
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Old 05-19-04, 02:09 AM   #13
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Here's My Vote....

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Casual: Opening was decent. Honestly man I really didn't start feeling your verse until it got near the end of the verse. Your flows and multi's was decent but you really didn't have any hard hitting punches until the end of the battle when you said the punch about Lara Croft and Tomb Raider. I liked that shit though. My mistake... I also liked the casualty rooms punch as well. Keep spitting kid.

DeadlyVision: Your verse had multi's and flowed pretty good but where was your punches at man? You trying to hype yourself up here? What better to hype yourself wit than a PUNCHLINE!!!! Thats the reason in my opinion you lost this battle. If you even would've snuck one punch in here you could've took this battle because your multi's were better.

Vote: Casual

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124731 (CLICK ON THIS LINK AND PLEASE VOTE ON MY LYRICAL LEAGUE BATTLE, GOOD LOOKING OUT)
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Old 05-19-04, 06:07 AM   #14
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2-2.

And of course N-Sight didn`t get it.. he broke it down into the wrong parts.

Idiot.
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Old 05-19-04, 11:15 AM   #15
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Punches?? dude..........this battle is hype yourself up and not diss yourself?


Dirtyboy should dq that dudes vote...lol he thaugh it was a regular battle..hahaha
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