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Old 05-23-04, 06:57 PM   #1
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Killah Bwoy Vs L.I.

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Old 05-23-04, 10:50 PM   #2
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Old 05-24-04, 09:18 AM   #3
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thats gay...i had a gut feelin i was gon' face you but like i said on aim im pullin out my best shit so dont expect somethin soft good luck fam...let the best MT member WIN!
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Old 05-25-04, 01:06 PM   #4
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aiight im finna drop now..no time too waste..but fuck it im jus str8 spittin i aint gon waste my time lookin up his profile diggin out shit....like yall katz be doin imma keep it real n show yall i dont need all that too battle....jea
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Old 05-25-04, 01:59 PM   #5
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Comin' Out Scorchin..Like The Raptors, the Co-Leader Jus' Got "Fired"-
Like The Bitch That Fucked Dr.J My "sickness" Is Forcin You To Retire-
We All Know You Losin In The First Round Like The Detroit Pistons-
Re$tricted Said U Mos' "def" Gonna Lose But U Didn't Wanna "Listen"-
Like A Cerial Killer In A Parrot Cage Your "bars" Arent Effectin Me-
Like Nicholas Cage One Line And You'll Be Gon In 60 Seconds, G-
Left His Ol Crew Cause He Realized He Had No Murderous Methods-
Knew He Was Gettin Merked So he lay dere silently in his death-bed-
Raps are Real small gotta move the dust bunnies to see your shit-
Now He Has No Front Teeth Didnt Know That Was Metal That He Bit-



yall get the point
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Old 05-25-04, 04:13 PM   #6
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^^lol yeah but i will spit mine later......
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Old 05-26-04, 06:25 PM   #7
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Mirrors don’t talk and luckily for this kid they don’t laugh either
Said he was taught how to rap, damn must’ve been a wack teacher…
Sticks to frontlines, battling herbs but can barely propel wins…
Your rhymes are crap, put shit next to them and a fan yelled TWINS!...
Even on the team, he’s third string more than a D note on a guitar…
Foreshadowing, he’s out in the first round just like his avatar!...
If you knew anything about Magic no symptoms have come in sight…
So next time before spittin those wack lines, get your facts right…
Pissed off you had to battle me, cry me a river, boo hoo…
You even stated it yourself, you have elevation to do
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Old 05-26-04, 06:29 PM   #8
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damn hoped you didnt drop..aiight koo sick verse..UPPIN THIS SHIT..

oh and for you crack heads when i said the DETROIT LINE I MEANT THEY LOST THE FIRST ROUND IN THE EASTERN CONFERENCE FINALS NOT FIRST ROUND IN THE PLAY OFFS and the dr.j thing was a mistake i didnt want to correct it cause thaz cheap...i thought magic johnson was dr.j...too old school for me but uppin
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Old 05-26-04, 09:45 PM   #9
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Lmao

Killah Bwoy
You verse was good some of the line`s i dint not understand maybe because i`m english or they dint make sense anyway you had good punches you`re flow was decent you`re rhyme scheme was good apart from the Method and death-bed was preety laim but anyway they we`re a few good lines not the best i`ve seen but still good THAT MURDEOURS METHOD LINE WAS WACK! just letting you know.

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Hey Mirror's in verses rock . . anyway i think you had the uper hands in WORDPLAY and good personals espically the AVATAR line . . ERM you`re verse was pretty cool auctually a few funny witty lins DAMN THAT LAST LINE WAS WACK but the avatar line pretty much somed things up.

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Old 05-26-04, 09:52 PM   #10
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alright here is my opinion.....
Ithought killah's verse was full of regular everyday punches.....
he didnt have any real personals....he had an good flow......
he didnt have any multies or anything else except those punches......

and LI......
Li had some good punches good personals I like that wak teacher openner.......
ummmmm....he didnt have any multies or anything either.......
but I really thought he had stronger hard hitting punches and personals.....
so obviosly my votes going to him........

vote..........L.I.................

one love..............
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Old 05-26-04, 10:07 PM   #11
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i dont think my vote counts, because im not in the league as of now... but L.I., you have elevated since the days of our award winning battle (YEAH!!) you rocked him... I got respect for Killah also, but gotta give credit where it is deserved...

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Old 05-26-04, 11:15 PM   #12
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killah bwoy:

Comin' Out Scorchin..Like The Raptors, the Co-Leader Jus' Got "Fired"-
Like The Bitch That Fucked Dr.J My "sickness" Is Forcin You To Retire-
^^hott shyt if u got the name right woulda been better but still good 7/10
We All Know You Losin In The First Round Like The Detroit Pistons-
Re$tricted Said U Mos' "def" Gonna Lose But U Didn't Wanna "Listen"-
^^good personal and punch decent bar 6/10
Like A Cerial Killer In A Parrot Cage Your "bars" Arent Effectin Me-
Like Nicholas Cage One Line And You'll Be Gon In 60 Seconds, G-
^^nice shyt here good meta 7/10
Left His Ol Crew Cause He Realized He Had No Murderous Methods-
Knew He Was Gettin Merked So he lay dere silently in his death-bed-
^^wasnt feelin this at all 4/10
Raps are Real small gotta move the dust bunnies to see your shit-
Now He Has No Front Teeth Didnt Know That Was Metal That He Bit-
^^lol good shyt feelin the first line alot second was good 8/10

overall: 32/50 (64%)

L.I:

Mirrors don’t talk and luckily for this kid they don’t laugh either…
Said he was taught how to rap, damn must’ve been a wack teacher…
^^fire ass opener hottness 9/10
Sticks to frontlines, battling herbs but can barely propel wins…
Your rhymes are crap, put shit next to them and a fan yelled TWINS!...
^^ first line straight 2nd line hott 8/10
Even on the team, he’s third string more than a D note on a guitar…
Foreshadowing, he’s out in the first round just like his avatar!...
^^good play off his avy and good punch 6/10
If you knew anything about Magic no symptoms have come in sight…
So next time before spittin those wack lines, get your facts right…
^^good feed off his verse hott 7/10
Pissed off you had to battle me, cry me a river, boo hoo…
You even stated it yourself, you have elevation to do…
^^ decent personal weak finisher 4/10

overall: 34/50 (68%)

vote: L.I

i would have to say his first 2 bars took this win for him they were str8 fire hott shyt from L.I hott shyt from you too killah but i think we all know you didnt show your tru skill in this battle wasnt as hott as what u usually spit good battle

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Old 05-26-04, 11:18 PM   #13
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2-0 LI Nice Drop LI...but i can never win a fuckin text battle because I AM NOT A FUCKIN LYRICAL TEXTCEE i refuse too rap about mirrors backwards on that intelligent shit but honestly..if you took this too the streets i would of won this but because we on a rap board full of university Students He has the upper hand..this is tru i still think LI had the upper hand a bit..but yall is tryin to change me into somethin im not tryin to change me into sum einstein ass ma fucka

AND IF YALL PUT THIS IN THE AUDIO YOU WOULD GET NOOOO RESPECT NO ONE WANTS TO HEAR THAT ISH..IF THIS WAS AUDIO I WULD MERK CAUSE RAP THESE DAYS ARE ABOUT GUN CLAPPIN AND ALL THAT...thats if u wanna make the big bux u feel me....i agree LI has beatin me on the lyrical tip but if this was in the streets and u rapped about this in the hood U WULD GET CLOWNED...and thats where the real hiphop is..if ur gonna tell me thats not hiphop then yall fucked in the head cause hiphop came from the streets..the streets made hiphop..im not mad or anythin but thats the truth and yall know it...the heart of hiphop is in the streets so i would win rap wise- im signed to a record label im on tours ive performed live and ive seen peoples like yall gettin clowned for that lyrical shit..yall is on ur own level makin no doe but hiphop is up here in the streets..jus thought i had to let yall know..and yall know im tru so do not deny it....yall katz is like the RB industry cuz u tryin to change us into somethin u not....go freestlye with niggaz in the block bout that..niggaz wuld jus laugh at ya...im a real kat i know these things im tellin u for ur own good
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Old 05-26-04, 11:26 PM   #14
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killah you is right but this aint the streets you can rap however you want here but its about text and all that gun shyt dont look right in text its better in audio or freestylin in person...you got text skills so i dont know why you bitchin if you lose at least you lose to someone whos nice and not some newb...and believe me aint no one trying to change you...but if you do the whole gangsta shyt in text we all know it dont look right
so how L.I raps and everyone else who raps the smae way its right cuz it aint no gangsta rap shyt its text...but hiphop originated with run DMC and they was never about guns and shyt...NWA was but thats later on in the rap industry..so your right but your wrong
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Old 05-26-04, 11:32 PM   #15
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You have a point ba but isnt the whole point in text to improve your lyrics So you can be better at audio...and if they change you into that lyrical tip and then you go back to audio..you will not be respected i mean you will too maybe people who are on that level but 80 % will not feel that shit you know....and i feel you bout the Run DMC but they are black so they had to go through struggles and when jam master jay died I KNOW SHOOTIN THE FUCKER WHO SHOT HIM IN THE HEAD SLIPPED THEIR MIND...but u have a point but i came here to improve my lyrics in text so i can be better at audio but its hard when they tryin to have me rap about mirrors n shit lol..and im not bitchin i jus wanted to prove my point before i get whipped 10-0 LOL
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