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Old 05-23-04, 07:03 PM   #1
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Old 05-23-04, 07:07 PM   #2
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don't say the tops down say them titties is out.. haha checkin
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Old 05-24-04, 03:21 PM   #3
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aiight, checkin' in. Good luck, Accomp. This should be a tight battle.
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Old 05-26-04, 03:38 PM   #4
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aiight, let's do this:

Yo, you’re known for killin’ cats, and I’m known for killin’ dogs, gee
Oh, but dogs are notorious for killin’ cats, so I guess that makes ME “godly”
U think you’re great like Lloyd Banks. Man, please, you’re a liar
Jus like Gunit101, you ain’t a “Warrior”, and your verse ain’t “On Fire”
Understand, when I peep yo verse, I remember “sticks and stones”
So do you…… but then you begin to fuckin’ bone (lol)
Like Biggie is in yo sig, you’ll never be a G, knock on wood
Only way you ever get close to bein’ one, is by drinkin’ a glass of Hood
See, I’ll destroy you completely, so it’ll be acknowledged as an abolishment
Tally it my win, 5-0… now THAT’s an Accomplishment

CLARIFICATION FOR STICKS AND STONES PUNCH:
Sticks and stones aka Dick and balls. A lot of people might not get that, so I had to explian it. PEACE
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Old 05-26-04, 03:53 PM   #5
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Old 05-26-04, 03:56 PM   #6
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Old 05-26-04, 07:14 PM   #7
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yea, what Flash said. I made this verse the same day I found out I was battlin' him. I'm not gonna post my verse early and let him examine it, not sayin' he would, and make his verse better. I'm not that dumb. Seriously, back off, man.
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Old 05-26-04, 07:27 PM   #8
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There's no rules about prewrite's quit starting beef . .
infact if someone prewrite's & they change there sig there just making themselve look stupid please dont comment on his verse again.
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Old 05-26-04, 09:58 PM   #9
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Whats with D.R. haha Fuck it, sorry i been gone... bitch

Spit abreast bu this shitty -vet- will get his turn...
ya verses like -unattented ciggarettes-, just let it burn.../
late punches, leave ya jaw and face abruised...
-no dro- but theese blows leave ya -dazed and confused-.../
yo body relapse as i laugh like ya o.d. on extacy capsules...
this kid is phony, thats why its praised when ya'll checkin me -cap-spul-.../
I'm much respected, and this kid still hates-whats-ill-wit-me...
no pre-write and this kid still can't handle my capabilities.../
ten line limit so da killin is only able to extend whats said...
remain in ya closet with flash, so stoppit, and keep the d.r.s out of my thread.../

check the league in a lil bit bout to kill your b.f. L.I.
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Old 05-26-04, 10:02 PM   #10
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aiight, uppin'
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Old 05-26-04, 10:22 PM   #11
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yea, "Hood" is a type of milk that is popular in the east coast. If you don't kno, now you kno.
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Old 05-26-04, 10:56 PM   #12
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Spul:

Yo, you’re known for killin’ cats, and I’m known for killin’ dogs, gee
Oh, but dogs are notorious for killin’ cats, so I guess that makes ME “godly”
^^hott ass opener good shyt 8/10
U think you’re great like Lloyd Banks. Man, please, you’re a liar
Jus like Gunit101, you ain’t a “Warrior”, and your verse ain’t “On Fire”
^^str8 shyt good punch 5/10
Understand, when I peep yo verse, I remember “sticks and stones”
So do you…… but then you begin to fuckin’ bone (lol)
^^why did you LOL wasnt funny stre8 bar 5/10
Like Biggie is in yo sig, you’ll never be a G, knock on wood
Only way you ever get close to bein’ one, is by drinkin’ a glass of Hood
^^hott shyt feelin this 7/10
See, I’ll destroy you completely, so it’ll be acknowledged as an abolishment
Tally it my win, 5-0… now THAT’s an Accomplishment
^^1st bar stretched but still a hott ass finisher 8/10

overall: 33/50 (66%)

accomplishment:

Spit abreast bu this shitty -vet- will get his turn...
ya verses like -unattented ciggarettes-, just let it burn.../
^^hott opener good shyt 8/10
late punches, leave ya jaw and face abruised...
-no dro- but theese blows leave ya -dazed and confused-.../
^^hot shyt stayin consistent 7/10
yo body relapse as i laugh like ya o.d. on extacy capsules...
this kid is phony, thats why its praised when ya'll checkin me -cap-spul-.../
^^hott shyt 2nd line a lil stretched 7/10
I'm much respected, and this kid still hates-whats-ill-wit-me...
no pre-write and this kid still can't handle my capabilities.../
^^good bar str8 punch 6/10
ten line limit so da killin is only able to extend whats said...
remain in ya closet with flash, so stoppit, and keep the d.r.s out of my thread.../
^^weak finisher 2nd line stretched again 4/10

overall: 32/50 (64%)

vote : Spul

i think his punches hit harder than accomplishments and the opener was so sick it took this battle for him and i think the opener was the difference maker hott battle tho...rematch maybe...???

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Old 05-26-04, 11:14 PM   #13
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none of his shit made sense so how are they punches i dont have biggy in my sig i dont got fuckin loyde banks iin my sig this kid is remedial..

can i gett dickryder
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Old 05-26-04, 11:16 PM   #14
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you did have them in your sig tho ujus got a new one he coulda prewrote it when u did have that one
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Old 05-27-04, 08:09 AM   #15
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honest vote

flow-Spul
closer-Spul but only cause accomplish was stretched like crazy
opener-TIE
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creativity-TIE
enjoyment-Spul

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Yo, you’re known for killin’ cats, and I’m known for killin’ dogs, gee
Oh, but dogs are notorious for killin’ cats, so I guess that makes ME “godly”
Like Biggie is in yo sig, you’ll never be a G, knock on wood
Only way you ever get close to bein’ one, is by drinkin’ a glass of Hood

your verse wasnt bad.....
your flow was good but i didnt like how you had some of your lines stretched because it just takes away from your flow and makes it loook bad....your punches was onpoint and i enjoyed three outa the five that was there.......some of them was kinda lame though.....if people dont et your verse then they must be stupid as fuck cause it was a pretty simple verse to follow......all in all man you had the punches along with the personals and metas......good job man


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Spit abreast bu this shitty -vet- will get his turn...
ya verses like -unattented ciggarettes-, just let it burn.../
late punches, leave ya jaw and face abruised...
-no dro- but theese blows leave ya -dazed and confused-.../

good verse man.....
this was a good verse....alot better then when you came against me.....only thing i gotta tell you is take the /// outa your verse......that is an eyesoar and it makes me look down of your verse becuse that is so newbish.........i like that you didnt use that same lame ass reaching for lines structure you used to.......your punches was good you had three good punches aswell althought your lines was stretched your flow was still good and you had some good personals.....keep elevating man

close battle but gotta give it to
v/Spul
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