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Old 05-25-04, 01:57 AM   #1
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If Your New on The site Click HEre

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Yo If ur new come spit like 4 lines so every 1 can Give u some Feed Back tell u if ur gonna be good or need 2 Elavate 1
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Old 05-25-04, 02:28 AM   #2
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Drastik Measures Diss(sixshot)

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Here a recent diss i did on another site, i was only asked for 6-8 bars

/Verb Tearin Up Tha Scene As This Runts Gut Breaks The Seam/ Scarin Ya Wack Team 'n' Shut Ya Nuts In Doors To Hear Ya Scream/1
//Lacerate Cuts 'n' Expose Ya Lower'd Self Esteem// Cuz Even Tha Sluts In Ya Sleep Won't Be Part Of Ya Wet Dream//2

/Ya Gleam Of Fame Crushed Like Broken Bone Marrow/ Ya Rhymin Scheme Is Flushed wit Ya Bars That Aint No Aero/3
//These Ciggarettes Tip Their Anal Shaped Sombero's// Smoke These Fags 'n' Destory Like The Cape Passero//(wordplay)4

/Like Will Farrell I got Peeps Laughin At Ya Crews Abnormalities/ No Hitler But Terrorizin Like yall Jews Waitin For Ya Fatalities/5
//Ya Diss Filled Wit General Technicalities 'n' Dats Playin Wit Raw Fiya//Bring Ya Back To Reality As We Make Ya Clique Retire//6

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line 4- in britian cigarrettes are called fags/ cape passero was a ship that got destoried in attemp to take over sicily
line 5- no discrimination towards jewish people
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Old 05-25-04, 06:13 AM   #3
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^^ potential.......
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Old 05-25-04, 08:53 AM   #4
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i am still 17.......... so hid your daughter,
cuz i pull up in a navgation...
.... the same color as water,
my flow is nice.... plus my text is mean,
when i drop on r and be.....
..... the elite turnm envyous green.
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Old 05-25-04, 04:11 PM   #5
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^^Yo We Shud Battle Some Time@ BK
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Old 05-25-04, 05:39 PM   #6
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That shit was cold as hell I was really feelin' the whole apendix bustin' shit that was some hot shit...

From, Young Smirf

Squad Or Die Nigga let's go!!!

P.S. sike that shit was wack nigga get some better flow so you can be more like Young Smirf.

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Old 05-25-04, 05:42 PM   #7
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hahaha...Shut Up Pussy Before I Merk Ya Unorginal Hatin Ass
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Old 05-25-04, 06:34 PM   #8
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Makin ya self look cool talkin bout heaters n' techs / All this jealousy and envy cause I'm seein success / I aint neva been locked in the penitetnaty / I'm the past, I'm the future, I'm what you hopin to be / Sayin youz a hustla but neva made a brick flip / Talkin bout gatz but neva held the biscuit
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Old 05-26-04, 08:57 AM   #9
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Some Catz May Know Me, Ive Released A Few Bits Of Underground Material, But Anywayz, Ill Post A Few Of My Battle Lyrics Here Just So You Get The Idea Of How I Spit.
Snapshot Vs Silence (Round 1)

He Named Himself 'Silence', Because The Boys Never Heard,
Only Time He Produced 'Violence', Was When He Tripped On His Own Words,
Im Rippin' His Cloned Verbs, I Got Secrets To Unravel,
He's Gaining Less Points Than A 4 Letter Word In Scrabble,
Im 'Packed' Like I Travel, I Keep My Attacks Urban,
Attacking Back Against His Pack Quickly Strapped Like A Turban,
Im Getting On His Nerves, Im Wrecking His Game Well,
Im Like A Small Dose Of Mersh, Im Burning His Brain Cell,
Im Making My Name Sell, And I Think That He Knows That,
He Hangs Around More 'Pussys' Than A Full Time Bowcat,
I Dont Need To Show Stats, I Should Really Just Laugh,
His Girls Been Used More Times Than My Monthly Bus Pass,
Snapshot's Big By Himself, I Dont Need No Appliance,
Coz You'll Reply With Your Name, No Words Just 'Silence'!

Snapshot Vs Silence (Round 2)

When I Read Your Lyrics The Only Thing I Think Is 'Greed',
Coz You Sat And Read My Bars Then Used Them To Feed,
If Snap Spat 2nd, You'd Be Starving Like Its Eid,
Deprived Of Lifes Lines, Like A Kid With No Sleep,
You Act Like A 'Home Creep', You're A Well Known Fag,
I Could Beat You With Accapellas With No Need For A Note Pad,
Now Im Making You 'Gloat Sad', And You're Scared I Might Catch You,
Im Making You Stand Still Like Your Avatar - A Statue,
There's Knowone To Back You, You Use My Verbs To Copy,
Trippin' On The Ice, Like A Beginner Playing Hockey,
You're Flows Were Too Sloppy, This Guys Just A Joke,
Im Devouring Your Body Like Your Nose Snortin Coke,
You're Left With No Hope, Best Keep Your Lines Clean,
Coz I Got 16 Lines To Kill You And Im Only On 14,
He Dropped Late, Tryna Debate Over A State Of Hate,
So I Couldnt Feed Off His Lines, I Had To Use Knowledge To Create.

Snapshot Vs OG

O-G, Copying Verses, Then Try Keep It 'Low Key',
Might Be Number '1', But He Aint No 'Kanobe',
Gangsta? Then Show Me, 'I Aint Afraid',
You Just Rip Like Paper Until The Verse 'Is Decayed',
A Bit Like Your Teeth, Prepare To 'Be Sprayed',
I Dont Know Where He Stayed, But OG Went For A While,
Probably Went Out On A Ripping Spree Short Of A File,
Ill Distort The Look Of Your Smile, You Aint A Big Man,
About To Be Buried From Audio Off Me And Big Skan (For Real!),
Im A Lyrical Hit Man, 'Holding It Up', Like Hostels,
OG'll Be 'Taken Out' Soon Like His Girlfriends Tonsils,
Leave You With Two Holes Like Nostrils, Im Ready To Bury,
Feel Like A 'G', Coz You Moveed To 'Intelli',
Im Keepin It Steady, Setting The Place,
Try Copying A Verse Again And Ill Be Wrecking Your Face,
Fuck 'Counting Bars', Snap Needs To Destroy,
Like 'Father And Son', Im The Man You're The Boy,
You Expected 'Open Arms', But Rewind 'Gave No Smile',
Due To Copying Verses, Best Change Your 'Name And Profile',
My 'Game Is So Vile', Im 'Stoppin Heat To Give Flows',
I Never Knew Boys From The Hood, Were 'Rockin' Beats On Windows',
Im 'Choppin What This Theif Chose', Your Flows Dont 'Hurt At All',
It Might Be Due To The Fact This Cat Dont Use 'Personals'.
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Old 05-26-04, 09:07 AM   #10
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Now I'm a newbie, but that kid is sick ^^^ Fa sho'.
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Old 05-26-04, 09:14 AM   #11
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Check Me Owt Homies....

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o shyt... tha kid is hot.. peep...

yall dont want it/the textcee wit dead-ly verses packin harder puches than jet-li/yall sub-par at best so none of yall can get-me/its ya boi SixX back at tha game/heard tha name/spittin ill so bytches drop on knees n give brain/

its the devil's son himself re-incarnated to spread hell/ i make hits spit hot shit n pop shells/yall can ack like ya kill me all ya want n im reborn/ pull a hell-boy n stab ya wit my devil-boy hell-horns/(devil horns)

stop cuz all ya rhymes r element-ary/im back so yall can stop lamentin-me/ yall soft like ya names was bobby b(rown)/yall wont find anotha brotha near as hot-as-me/haha!

holla atcha boi
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Old 05-26-04, 09:16 AM   #12
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Yo Peeps. Yo Sixx - I Like Tha Way You Flow Man.
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Old 05-26-04, 10:46 AM   #13
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Im New, Whatup!
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Old 05-26-04, 12:54 PM   #14
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Yo What Up Im New In Here U Say Drop 4 Lines So..

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Old 05-26-04, 08:29 PM   #15
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young dE has to do it HoLLa

letz get to the point the fact iz
my fLow like ya lookz quite unnatractive
like a gun ya skiLLz mite malfunction
dont make an ass outta yaseLf wit dat assupmtion
my life was supposingLy prewritten
but i aint pLayin wit da cards i was given
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