deadlines:
battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm eastern
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 line min.
30 line max.

please show up this week

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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league

I plan on going 14 or so. Good luck.

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checkity check, i will be showin

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I had to get a new couch, but as you can see the fun continues!

A.I.

^ his last league verse…. wow…

Fact that you even here’s whack in the first place
… like the league’d be if you ever won, fucking disgrace
Don’t quite got my work cut out, but with you in the mix
My work got you cut out… get the fucking pic?
Kid, you ain’t a real artist, couldn’t even spell Van Gough
… course the “ugh” is provided by the crowd at all ya shows
Van think he up with the best, pound for pound
… but only cuz he weight less than his lines syllable count
Fucking retard, tryin to literally spitting the whole nine yards
Can’t fight destiny, clear from Kingz my win’s in the cards
Shit I could win without a single punch worthwhile
… but I wouldn’t want you to think I’m stealing your style


try to match my twelve

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I had to get a new couch, but as you can see the fun continues!

A.I.

This is the reason that ranking should be different....

Shadow was good. His opunches were hitting and personals were dope. His flow was on point and wordplay was witty. Good Job

Vango was horrible. What was that fake ass attempt at quoting before your verse? It didn't even need to be there. We all know he didn't post a mag this week, we didn't need a quote to tell us. Your lines were horribly stretched so your vlow suffered. I know I've seen better from you and quite frankly I was dissappointed. You didn't even spell half of your words correctly

Best line of the battle....
Kid, you ain’t a real artist, couldn’t even spell Van Gough
… course the “ugh” is provided by the crowd at all ya shows

Vote - Shadow

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Your An Idiot Enygma, Thanks For The Hate Vote, Did Shadow Have One Punch Even, Nada. Uppin

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I had to get a new couch, but as you can see the fun continues!

A.I.

^ actually, carefull reading of my verse would reveal that every bar had at least one punch. i especially like how i called your shit stretched, and then you came with stretched lines. good stuff. good personal on me not making a mag though. ouch.

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RIP SMOKAJOKA WE WILL MiSS YOU!!!!!!

nice spit vango...original...bringin it home to the blue

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damn this was a close fuckin match-up..my break down:

shadow: nice shit but i aint really feelin the style..but it was a hot verse no doubt...
i give your personals 8.5/10 cauese you jus came with the personals...your structure..luvin it...your punches...didnt see any :S...your flow...SICK..keep that up...this was a good verse for you..nice

vango: nice shit dawg.....i was luvin ur punches u had punches in this...ur structure was good but shadows was better....your personals were pretty sick i saw a few in there...the flow was good..every line matched..sept for the opener .....this was a reall good verse for you i was feelin it couple bars made me go oh....none made me fall off my chair..ive seen a few that were jus fire...but yeh

vote: Vango because he had punches and personals..shadow where the fucks your personals...i think thats what lost you this battle

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KiLlAh BwOy

Wha?? You say my whole verse is personals, then you ask where my personals are. Right.

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breakdown for shadow's edge:

flow:good job no problems with your flow it was workin 7/10

volcab:not the top in the league like you should be tryin to be but it gets the point of the verse across i guess doesn't hurt the rhyme at all so 6/10

punches:good job at personals, nothing really new best line,"Kid, you ain’t a real artist, couldn’t even spell Van Gough" and ive seen shit like that done against vango infact i had a line similar to that in my battle gainst him anyway alright job 7/10

overall:20/30 pretty good verse

breakdown for vango:

flow:workin alright some multis thrown around not too many though 7/10

volcab:edged out shadow i think still nothing too amazing 7/10

punches:alot of lines not too much was really harsh fav line,"Why did you call the Suicide Hotline and they said "YOUR DOING THE RIGHT THING"" some alright personals too 7/10

overall:21/30

vote--really close battle here glad to see both people showin up for the title match this week my vote is for vango though

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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league

BREAKDOWN:

Shadows edge
You came gud in this battle, ure flow was on form from start to finish as always cuz ure structure was top...kept shit together, nuthin too stretched. ure punches came strong and were hittin hard, some harder in places. ure wordplay was clever and funny and ure personals were just top quality.
OVERALL 9/10

VanGo
u came weak this week playa, i've seen u do so much better. the quote thing was pretty pathetic cuz it was unnecessary, but the same with shadow, his quote wasn't necessary either. ure flow was off cuz ure structure was fucked, ure bars were far too stretched, and the point of having ure words so large...i don't know. ure spelled half ure shit wrong and basically ure wordplay and punches were all average or weak, nuthin really hard hittin.
OVERALL 6/10

V/ - Shadows edge

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Fact that you even here’s whack in the first place
… like the league’d be if you ever won, fucking disgrace
Not that great of a punch but better than most of yours
Don’t quite got my work cut out, but with you in the mix
My work got you cut out… get the fucking pic?
If you don't get that, you must be fucking brain dead
Kid, you ain’t a real artist, couldn’t even spell Van Gough
… course the “ugh” is provided by the crowd at all ya shows
Best line in the battle by far......Cause you make people go "ugh"
Van think he up with the best, pound for pound
… but only cuz he weight less than his lines syllable count
Best personal of the battle since your retarded ass still came with some stretched ass lines right after he dissed you about it.....Fuckin Retard
Fucking retard, tryin to literally spitting the whole nine yards
Can’t fight destiny, clear from Kingz my win’s in the cards
Eh, kinda filler but Kingz did say that he'd probably win....
Shit I could win without a single punch worthwhile
… but I wouldn’t want you to think I’m stealing your style
Another good personal, cause you don't have any punches...

Now for your verse.....

See Shadow stopped writing the Mag, because half a Mag just wouldnt be complete
But why cant we keep it real man, "Who the Hell wants to Predict their own defeat"
I guess the concept is OK but you tried to hype up something that would have been better if you had just come out and said it instead of showing some quotes that your retarded ass doesn't know how to do properly....
And since your done writing the Mag, I'll guess I'll have to do this weeks review
I have to tell you Shadow the only difference between Champ and Chump is "U"
Gee.....another stretched out line. Why refer back to a punch that didn't even really hit hard in the first place?
You got the Championship by NO SHOWS, proof that miracles can happen
But Id suggest you stay at Burger King and forget your career in rappin
Filler......pretty weak too
How'd you ever get the misconception that your rhymes were nice
I heard you went to Mindreader the other day "But only paid half the PRICE"
Filler......and just plain stupid. Paid a mindreader half the price? What are you in first grade or something?
Simply put you aint even on my level,you dont deserve step inside my Ring
Why did you call the Suicide Hotline and they said "YOUR DOING THE RIGHT THING"
More filler.......just not a good punch, especially when you gotta stretch the shit out of it.....
Shadow your like the Madrapper of RB, maybe i can get LATINKITTEN TO GIVE U A HUG
See Shadows can only exist with Light, so heres Goodnight, "I GOTTA PULL THE PLUG"
Gay.....The only lights that have plugs are lamps. The majority of lights are ones that use light swithes and have no plugs at all. What are you just stupid, or is your little sister writing this for you?

I really didn't want to embarrass you this way, but you asked for it. There is no hate here, I just can't believe that you think you are good......

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