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07-18-04, 01:22 AM
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IP: 7113 B39E
uppin leave a link an i'll get back at you
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07-18-04, 11:52 PM
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IP: 7113 B39E
uppin...feedback plz
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07-19-04, 08:04 AM
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IP: 06D4 9403
alright. It was alright, the only line i didnt like was, you keep me together and without you i fall apart. It could have been said without the fall apart section. But besides that, this was pure straight human emotion with no thought put into it. I am not saying it as a bad thing, you just shared all of your emotions without coating it with big words or some crazy metaphors. 6.5/10
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07-20-04, 12:26 PM
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IP: 7C6F 690C
ay thanks fa the feedback...uppin
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07-25-04, 04:43 AM
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IP: D15F 1EE4
leave a link an i'll get back at ya...iight...uppin
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07-25-04, 04:50 AM
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IP: 5C34 09E4
I really liked this part:
I pray everyday but I just can’t seem 2 fa get it you took a risk on me n I appreciate it you helped me straitin up my life an now I have everything orchestrated Good work. Short but sweet.
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