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Re$TricTed 5 71.43%
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Old 07-06-04, 01:01 PM   #31
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i voted....can yall return the favor....in the sig.......
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Old 07-06-04, 04:28 PM   #32
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Uppin....Please Vote On Dis Battle..

~R~
 
Old 07-06-04, 04:31 PM   #33
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No homo...lol uppin........
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Old 07-06-04, 04:47 PM   #34
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Restricted-You actually had punches but your came
aight but mainly none really made me laugh that much
but you did have similies and metaphores though, Structure
was decent and aight

DaClassic-You had nice complexity like a Topical or something
but it was like you mainly wrote a spit mainly like as if
it was a topical more then ~R~, Had some nice punches but
Restricted in my opinion I thought came harder

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Old 07-06-04, 04:55 PM   #35
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i can't vote anymore because Re$ joined A.I. so I'll just say this.

daclassic, if you come like that against me, i will drop 4 lines. and win.
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Old 07-06-04, 05:06 PM   #36
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hmm .. this was a decent battle..

daclassic:meta skripts had a good point.. it seemed like you were trying to get to much vocab into that verse.. it was out of place no what i mean ? it was still a nice drop, but all that voocab made your verse a lil soft..

res:yours was a a decent verse also..had some metas..good enuff flow.. good job

final disscusion:what made my decision to me, is the excessive use of vocab in classics verse.. big ups to both of you ..no hate..

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Old 07-06-04, 09:26 PM   #37
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Both cats came real tight - this is the best text battle I read in.... well - since I been here. Vocab on both was nice - I don't think Classic brought too much vocab, it was on point for a text match. Flow was a little off on both as I'm big on syllable count, but it was equal. Restricted had a few more multis, and punches were harder. Personals: was close - but classic had a few more of them.

Classic: 9/10
Restricted: 9.5/10

Both good drops, but vote: Restricted.
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Old 07-07-04, 02:29 PM   #38
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I see you insisted to be persistent to destroy my existence
My senses predicted you a herb to leave me highly addicted
So I slightly inflicted some limits, Just to leave you restricted
Like inmates in jail cells, Placed in court and convicted
Listen, I think I know what's your problem, It's cuz I'm dissin
You upset Like someones parents when their children is missin
You Itchin to get evicted for your winning battle predictions
I spit water resistent, Your flow can't affect my precision
UP TO HERE ITS ALL MULTIES...JUST FILLER
You dopey, Blockheaded, To confused and moronic to tell
That your brain is like the prison system, Not enough cells
THATS A NICE LINE
A drop of a genius, Why you don't know how big is your penis

RRRRRRRROOOOOOOOOOFFFFFFFFFFFFFLLLLLLLLL,THOSE QUOTES SHOULD HAVE GONE HERE FROM THE BOTTOM
Dml couldnt tell from the smell, You couldn't keep with the cleanness
I mean this and this the truth, Why did you have to drop shit
I think you on my dick, This my plane, get the fuck out the cockpit
LOL I LIKE THIS
You showin, So is your favorite word, yes we already knowin
Your like a needle in my thread, I'm a use you for sowin
HMMM NOT FEELIN IT
Never a text champ, Your names Restricted to even go so far
Your like a kid that's on a bike that can't handle bars
NICE

I'm leavin you madd scars, So let get drunk together so I can show you a couple bars...lol
THIS TYPE OF CONTENT BEEN USED BEFORE BUT NOT EXACTLY LIKE THIS...






I'd Applaude Your Verse But That Would Be Hypicritical..
Just To Ridicule Verbal Assets Of Ritual Visual Critical..
NOTHIN THERE BUT MULTIES
I Free-Dissed You Twice You Gave No Response..Heres A Hint..
Want Hot Spits? Coping My Shit Only Time You Have Hot Blueprints..
WEAK
Like A Glitch In A Disc Your Existence Is Less Than A Niche..
SwtichHit But I Don't Wanna Get Convicted Of Assualtin A Bitch..
HMMM...NOT HARD HITTING
Yea It's Been A Long Time Coming Like Men With Brass Balls..
Expose This Kid..Like Nerds Beating Off In Glass Stalls..
U'RE TRYNA BE CREATIVE,BUT THIS CAME OUT WACK...U COULD'VE SAID SOMETHING WAY BETTER FOR "EXPOSIN THSI KID"
I Intise Brawls To Haul Fake Mc's and Crack Skulls..
This Kids Loaded..With Double D Tits Hidden In A Black Bra..
THIS IS UR BEST LINE
You Don't Give A Fuck..Yea Cause Dog You Lack Dick..
Ya Crew AIDS Ya Whore Trick..Only Time You Wrap Sick..
WORDPLAY BUT WEAK CUZ ANY AIDS LINES ARE PLAID..EVEN WITH THAT MEANING OF AIDS ITS STILL PLAYED ...ANY LINES WITH "SICK" ARE PLAYED
Your Notice of Eviction Has Risen So Get The Fuck Out..
You In A Drought? Your Flow Has Fallen Without A Doubt..
DROUGHT/FLOW LINES ARE PLAYED
You Talk Shit Since I Haven't Logged On In A Few Long Weaks..
Seen You'Ve Been Kissing Alot Of Ass So Heres Two More Cheeks..
HMMMM...A BIT HUMOROUS BUT NOT A PUNCH
Your Passions Week While I'm At My Widows Peek Solem To Speak..
I've Seen Fresher Styles From Rakim..Face It..Your Just Antique..
WACK

OK,I'VE ALWAYS THOUGHT RESTRICED WAS WAY OVERRATED...BUT ANY MORON CAN SEE HE LOST THIS..........U HAD ONE OK LINE,ABOUT THE LOADED/BRA...EVERY OTHER ATTEMPT AT A PUNCH EITHER FAILED OR WAS PLAYED...A LOT OF UR LINES WERE FILLER WITH JUST MULTIES...........DACLASSIC,THE BEGINNIN OF UR WERE WAS FILLER TOO CUZ U HAD TOO MANY MULTIES N NO PUNCHES...BUT U DID HAVE A FEW GOOD LINES...BUT THE BEST LINE IN THIS BATTLE WAS....DROP OF A GENIUS WHY U DONT KNOW HOW BIG IS UR PENIS....ROOOOOOOOOOOOFFFFFFFFFFLLLLLLL THAT TOOK IT....IF U JUST POSTED THAT ONE LINE...U WOULD'VE WON...THATS PERSONAL TOO..RESTRICTED DIDNT HAVE ANY PERSONALS IN MY OPINION.........N TAKIN THIS LONG TO DROP THAT WEAK VERSE,WAS EVEN WEAKER..................SO VOTE...DACLASSIC

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Old 07-07-04, 03:09 PM   #39
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Always Hating...I Knew I Should'vd Had You On My Blacklist.

If You Knew Shit About DaClassic Like I Do.....You Would've Gott'n The Personals...

I Ain't Worried I Know The Personals...

Uppin

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Old 07-07-04, 07:19 PM   #40
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uppin.....aaaaahh lol
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Old 07-07-04, 08:23 PM   #41
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restricted..
you came much harder with harder punches better personals you had sick flow
you had solid punches
example:
I'd Applaude Your Verse But That Would Be Hypicritical..
Just To Ridicule Verbal Assets Of Ritual Visual Critical..
good multies and shit ^ 8.9/10

overall8.5/10

daclassic
ur verse was also sick u had bad structure though..
u had pretty good flow u would have had better if not for your strucuture
u had some bad punches that ruined it for u..
example:
You showin, So is your favorite word, yes we already knowin
Your like a needle in my thread, I'm a use you for sowin
without ur couple weak barz like that u woulda won no-doubt
overall 8.0/10 my vote
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Old 07-07-04, 10:57 PM   #42
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I see you insisted to be persistent to destroy my existence
My senses predicted you a herb to leave me highly addicted
holy shit...fuckin ill wordplay and SICK multi's and SICK VOCAB 9.5/10 HOT OPENER
So I slightly inflicted some limits, Just to leave you restricted
Like inmates in jail cells, Placed in court and convicted
whoa its gettin hot in hur....sick multi's again good Meta 8.5/10
Listen, I think I know what's your problem, It's cuz I'm dissin
You upset Like someones parents when their children is missin
no...this wasnt good at all...weak punch 6/10
You Itchin to get evicted for your winning battle predictions
I spit water resistent, Your flow can't affect my precision
dont self glorify yourself..good punch..good multi's ok...7.5/10
You dopey, Blockheaded, To confused and moronic to tell
That your brain is like the prison system, Not enough cells
this was a pretty sick punch and good meta'' 8/10
A drop of a genius, Why you don't know how big is your penis
Dml couldnt tell from the smell, You couldn't keep with the cleanness
no...this was a bad personal and punch..bad wordplay 6/10
I mean this and this the truth, Why did you have to drop shit
I think you on my dick, This my plane, get the fuck out the cockpit
no....your shits gettin worse...i aint feelin this 6.5/10
You showin, So is your favorite word, yes we already knowin
Your like a needle in my thread, I'm a use you for sowin
no...another bad punch....ok meta 6.5/10
Never a text champ, Your names Restricted to even go so far
Your like a kid that's on a bike that can't handle bars
I'm leavin you madd scars, So let get drunk together so I can show you a couple bars...lol
umm....this was alright...ok punch.....ok personal..ok 7/10

overall: score of 83

Quote:
Originally Posted by Re$TricTed
LoL How Many Inches You Think Honestly?

~R~
Quote:
Originally Posted by Re$TricTed
LoL...See Scared To Answer Honestly Due To The Fact That DaClassic Will Get Pissed...

Restricted:
I'd Applaude Your Verse But That Would Be Hypicritical..
Just To Ridicule Verbal Assets Of Ritual Visual Critical..
WHOA FUCK..LOL....multi's is crazy...good punch nice 9.5/10
I Free-Dissed You Twice You Gave No Response..Heres A Hint..
Want Hot Spits? Coping My Shit Only Time You Have Hot Blueprints..
naww wasnt feelin this line 6.5/10
Like A Glitch In A Disc Your Existence Is Less Than A Niche..
SwtichHit But I Don't Wanna Get Convicted Of Assualtin A Bitch..
this was an aiight punch.personal..pretty good 7/10
Yea It's Been A Long Time Coming Like Men With Brass Balls..
Expose This Kid..Like Nerds Beating Off In Glass Stalls..
LOL 2nd line was sick and funny haha..8/10
I Intise Brawls To Haul Fake Mc's and Crack Skulls..
This Kids Loaded..With Double D Tits Hidden In A Black Bra..
was this pos' to rhyme? cause it didn't good multi and ok punch good meta 6.5/10
You Don't Give A Fuck..Yea Cause Dog You Lack Dick..
Ya Crew AIDS Ya Whore Trick..Only Time You Wrap Sick..
LOL...pretty good .... 7/10
Your Notice of Eviction Has Risen So Get The Fuck Out..
You In A Drought? Your Flow Has Fallen Without A Doubt..
naww asnt feelin this 6.5/10
You Talk Shit Since I Haven't Logged On In A Few Long Weaks..
Seen You'Ve Been Kissing Alot Of Ass So Heres Two More Cheeks..
LOL !! good personal and funny punch hahah 8/10
Your Passions Week While I'm At My Widows Peek Solem To Speak..
I've Seen Fresher Styles From Rakim..Face It..Your Just Antique..
this was alright..not a good closer but ok 7/10


score: 66

vote: da classic
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Old 07-07-04, 11:04 PM   #43
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LoL Wow...Kid You Need To Learn How To Add..

His Totals Added Up To 65.5

While Mine Added Up To 66..

LMAO....D/R??

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Old 07-07-04, 11:07 PM   #44
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was it.....i know i thought that shit.............that hapened last time...i think i added like 4 of the same liens or something cuz wen i added i got 99 ...........so i was like wtf..that aint right.......and i was thinkin...i think restricted might take this one..and then wen the poins added up i was like hmm..interesting..but it was no d/r just a calculation error
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Old 07-07-04, 11:07 PM   #45
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pm strobe and tell him i cant count LOL...................
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