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Old 06-24-04, 09:51 AM   #16
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Old 06-24-04, 11:45 AM   #17
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Here, you can diss me on my new pics, and how I wrote in purple too
In my pic threads, I receive a lot of love. Can’t say the same for you

^ YOu did NOT edit and change your words.. You edited that verse in... because you made your NEW Pics thread 20 mins
later.. you should Be Dq'd for cheating

But i want to win by votes.
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Old 06-24-04, 11:57 AM   #18
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Old 06-24-04, 12:10 PM   #19
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^weerd. Also, Resolve no I DID NOT edit and add the pick links. I do agree, I did post the updated ones so I could use that punch, but I edited my verse because I mispelled parts in the into. And yea, I don't care if you went 32. I mean, this is the finals, it should have been much longer, but whatever. Uppin' for votes.
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Old 06-24-04, 12:20 PM   #20
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ok 0-1

More voootes
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Old 06-24-04, 01:31 PM   #21
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I am only leaving the feedback, because posting the actual verses would be too big to post.. anywaysthe lines correspond with the lines in each verse.. though for SpULS case.. the INTRO was not included...

SPUL -
Nice.. good punch/personal and good opener 9/10
aha good punch and somewhat personal 8/10
good punch.. 8/10
Hahaha good personal.. 8/10
Not a bad punch tho not as good as other ones.. 7/10
not bad.. good punch.. 8/10
hahah good personal.. 8/10
hahaha good punch 9/10
hahahaha godo punch again.. and personal.. 8/10
haha good punch... 8/10
another good punch... 7/10
nice.. good personal with the link
Nice personal again.. cause of the thread.. good punch too 8/10
good punch.. not as good as others tho... 7/10
good punch, personal, and closer.. veryyy good 9.5/10

RESOLVE -
Meh not bad personal.. but not a sick opener...7/10
haha good personal for sure..yet he is christian.. he said it before 7/10
little forced here... and not really a good punch... 6/10
eh.. not feelin that at all.. not that good 5/10
umm not bad.. but not really AMAZING... 6/10
eh not feelin it again.. youve spit better...5/10
hah not too bad..7/10
not a bad personal.. gettin better.. 8/10
men not bad.. but could be better.. 7/10
not a bad punch.. but a lil filler there too.. 6/10
meh not bad.. but still not your best.. 7/10
not feelin this.. not really a good punch.. 6/10
haha gettin better here for sure.. 8/10
meh not a bad punch... but w/e 7/10
not feelin the structure.. not bad punch tho..7/10
not a bad closer.. but not as good as spuls.. 8/10

Overall not bad battle.. but Resolve you had a bit of filler.. and i know you have spit better before.. this just wasnt enough to beat spul....
Spul got this.. better punches.. and overall better spit..

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Old 06-24-04, 02:18 PM   #22
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Old 06-24-04, 02:31 PM   #23
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Old 06-24-04, 04:23 PM   #24
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I don’t like to net beef, cuz I don’t wanna make bitches like you bawl
Yea, you can say Indians don’t eat meat, but Africans don’t eat at all
LOL...GOOD COMEBACK,FUNNY ASS LINE
Average close to 20 posts per day, thinkin’ that makes you tough
Man, don’t come dissin’ on my style, when you already praised it enough
PERSONAL
Everywhere I look, you’re praisin’ me. Prolly my number one fan
No one’s a fan of an ugly bitch, so you got married to yo right hand
ITS AIGHT
Go back to sippin’ tea, and English muffins, you sucky MC
Your rhymes are so predictable, I kno what you got against me
THIS IS WEAK...WHO USES WORDS LIKE SUCKY MC???
I’m part Indian, I got banned, you beat me. You already said it once
He made the due date Thursday, cuz he can’t come up wit a new punch
WELL,ITS PERSONAL...N I DO THINK MASK TOOK WAYYYYYYYY TOO LONG TO POST
Here, you can diss me on my new pics, and how I wrote in purple too
In my pic threads, I receive a lot of love. Can’t say the same for you
JUST PERSONALS
Enough of me, your audio sucks, you don’t have a video, no one believes ya
You can’t ride the beat, cuz the only thing this African used to ridin', is a zebra
LOL
Diss Kyro on his looks, yet why you rock him in yo av, dun?
You both have “99 Problems”, and yo ugly faces are one
DOESNT RHYME TOO WELL....I WASNT REALLY FEELIN IT
Lives in a foreign nation, and changes his name without limitation
He changes it so much, cuz he’s really runnin’ from immigration
LOL...PERSONAL N PUNCH
Don’t think all I got on you, is how your face looks so horrific
I also kno you don’t belong here, cuz you really lost to Polifik
PERSONAL ,BUT NOT VERY HARD HITTING...
You DQ good votes, you DQ opponents, but that don’t get you credit
Heck, since you’re scared and you’re the mod, my verse, you’ll prolly edit
THE WAY U WORDED IT CAME OUT FORCED...WHEN U HAVE TO SWITCH WORDS AROUND TO MAKE IT RHYME...THE CONTENT WOULD'VE MADE A GOOD PUNCH....IT JUST CAME OUT WRONG
You said you would go blindfold. Good, cuz your face is horrifyin’
Compared to your mug, Michael Jackson’s looks worth glorifyin’
LOL,I DUNNO WHY BUT THIS SOUNDS FUNNY....I LIKE CLOWNIN MJ
Man, my skill level is way better than yours, it’s a huge fuckin’ cleft
Copied me, by makin’ a good-bye thread. Man, you should have fuckin’ left
ITS OK...SOMEWHEN HUMOROUS
And yea, you ARE fuckin’ Illegal. Cuz wit the border, you are conflicted
Members in yo OWN crew, rep my crew, man, jus look at Restricted
I DIDNT GET THIS CUZ I DONT KNOW WHAT CREW U IN,N I DONT KNOW WHAT CREW RESTRICTED IS IN,I AINT BEEN KEEPIN UP....N THE LINK DIDNT MAKE IT VERY CLEAR.........






I'm amazed at how he's deformed.. get surgery for christmas
cos ya nose is so fucking long.. pinnochio is out of business
LOL,IT WAS OK,BUT NOT THAT HARD BECAUSE PINOCCHIO LINES WERE USED YRS AGO...
You Indian Kid.. you aint good & WHO are YOU to match me,
& i would tell you to PRAY TO GOD... But which ONE would that be?
WELL,THIS IS NOT A GOOD PUNCH,BECAUSE U TALKIN BOUT HIS RELIGION,THATS NOT HARD HITTING
My inferior punchlines will certainly send him to hell , yo . .
& Ya verse is getting more laughts .. than the david chapell show.
NOT HARD
You fucking pussy.. Your gay & never will be fucking pussy
When even that^ is more creative than your best you fucking rookie.
WORDPLAY I GUESS BUT NOT THAT HARD
Feeding on legendary skripts like mine.. is what SpuL's loving..
& Sure SPuL has no EQUAL...! Because the Whole Rb's above him.
THIS IS AN OK PUNCH...
I guess your the champ in being ugly.. but i'm ill i wont dout
& ya nose is so croocked up... ..Captin hook is renting it out
THIS IS GAY...I WASNT FEELIN IT
I cant belive you think ya nice.. & you aint no fucking G , See?
Cos the only time this fag see's breasts... is whlie in KFC.
U SHOULD'VE WORDED THIS BETTER...CONTENT WAS OK...
& your beat's .. Music to my ears? Nope.. they sound shit
And i'll have Spul Beat down.. Like it was shut down on soundclick.
THIS WAS OK...BEAT LINES ARE KINDA PLAYED
Spul you ruined everything , fuck you.. so now i'm hammering ya shit.
& the Reason i named it FINALS.. Cos there's only 1 CHAMP-in-this-shit!
THIS IS WEAK
I'm overall perfection... & there's facts...i'm the hardest vet,
And i would like to end your career... but it really hasnt started yet.
THIS IS AIGHT
Look at this kid's sig .. looking for dickride.. dude it's ova..
SpuL Dont carry no fucking Guns.. He carries ASDA's supersoakers
GAYYY...
...Will i spend day's on this.. Nah fuck it.. it's only an hour.
& if you hear a bitch screaming... oooh ahhh. it's him taking a shower
GAYYY WTF...HOW IS THAT A PUNCH,IF U HEAR SOMEONE SCREAMING ITS HIM TAKING A SHOWER?
Is this curry looking faggot.. G'd UP.. & roles with chromes too..
Spul rep's the STREET! night & day.. cos he's got no home to go to
LMFAO,THIS IS UR BEST LINE
Alone fool.. ya nothing , you know ya intelligence is dead
& the reason i posted days late.. cos reading his verse sent me to bed.
WEAK...
you stupid wack kid .. i'm mad & forced to contunie killing ya..
You could never be in MY SHOES!
.......................... .... my bad , they were "made from india"
LOL...FUNNY...BUT,IT SHOULD SAY "MADE IN INDIA" NOT FROM INDIA....IT KINDA RUINED IT A BIT...
If you think your above average .. i'm elite son .. so test me.
& as im speaking now.. your losing the weight.. like diest pepsi
(heavy weight )
THAT IS GAY....THE CONTENT IS PLAYED AS HELL....


WOW,I MUST SAY I'M VERY SURPRISED AT THE OUTCOME....CUZ RESOLVE'S LAST VERSE IN THE TOURNEY,(THAT 5 ON 5 THING THAT SPUL WAS IN TOO) WAS THE BEST I'VE SEEN FROM HIM,N HE KILLED SPUL IN THERE...N I EVEN TOLD SPUL HE WAS GONNA LOSE TO RESOLVE...BUT,AFTER READING RESOLVE'S VERSE....I WAS DISAPPOINTED...THERE WERE A LOT OF GAY LINES...THE SHOWER,THE DIET PEPSI,THE SUPERSOAKER,SOME OTHER WEAK LINES..(CHAMP-IN-THIS)...I MEAN,IN SPUL'S WEAK LINES,HE AT LEAST HAD PERSONALS...FEEL ME? U HAD LINES THAT WERE JUST WEAK...SAYIN U TOOK LONG CUZ HIS VERSE SENT U TO BED,THAT WHOLE "SLEEPIN ON UR VERSE" CONCEPT IS PLAYED...U MADE A COUPLE OF PUNCHES ABOUT HIS NOSE,ONE PINOCCHIO (IT WAS OK,BUT I HEARD PINOCCHIO LINES YRS AGO) THE CAPTAIN HOOK LINE WAS JUST RETARDED...U CANT MAKE A PUNCH WITH PINOCCHIO THEN MAKE ONE WITH A PETER PAN,WHAT U BEEN WATCHIN,DISNEY? JUST SEEMS VERY ELEMENTARY N BASIC,I MEAN ME N U RESOLVE HAVE BEEN COO,N U KNOW I VOTE FAIR BUT U LOST THIS ONE...SPUL HAD MORE FUNNIER PUNCHES,HIS OPENER,THE IMMIGRATION,THE ZEBRA,HIS OTHER LINES EVEN IF THEY SEEMED FILLER,THEY HAD MORE PERSONALS...A LOT MORE PERSONALS THAN U....U TALKED ABOUT HIM BEING INDIAN N HIS PIC,WELL,I THINK U DO LOOK WORSE IN UR PIC...U BOTH USED ME AGAINST EACH OTHER...SPUL USED THE PIC I MADE,N RESOLVE USED MY QUOTE,BUT I THINK SPUL'S HIT HARDER...I DONT THINK RESOLVE HAD THAT MUCH TO SAY ABOUT SPUL....
OR IT DIDNT SHOW HERE AT LEAST....RESOLVE, I DO THINK U TOOK TOO LONG TO SPIT, SO ITS SURPRISING U COULDNT BEAT SPUL WHEN U KNEW WHAT U WERE UP AGAINST...I KNOW U ARE CAPABLE OF BETTER...U SHOULD HAVE WON THIS...BUT,I HAVE TO VOTE FAIRLY...


VOTE=SPUL

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Old 06-24-04, 04:36 PM   #25
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Blah SpuL still is not the best on this site... i had thing's to do.
As you see i posted once on wednesday and twice on thursday
Upin to finshi this.
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Old 06-24-04, 06:02 PM   #26
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^yea, I kno that. I kno I ain't the best. Restricted is better than me, and some other dudes. I'm jus happy that I haven't received a vote that has NOT included my name this whole tourney. That is good enough for me, right now. Uppin'
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Old 06-24-04, 07:26 PM   #27
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Old 06-24-04, 10:35 PM   #28
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wow who blacklisted me prolly both but ummm

both where super weak first off mask stoled lks style which makes u look real lame and


Feeding on legendary skripts like mine.. is what SpuL's loving..
& Sure SPuL has no EQUAL...! Because the Whole Rb's above him.

how does that shit rhyme^^

wackk

you stupid wack kid .. i'm mad & forced to contunie killing ya..
You could never be in MY SHOES!
.......................... .... my bad , they were "made from india"

ROFLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL

^ best lines out the battle PERIOD everthing else was sorry
on another note links are wack how u gonna actually battle like that with ya people

gotta be like say brah go check out this website if u aint understand that lmao

but um that shit u keep doin where u post what u doin is stupid it reminds me of that shit off scary movie 3 where they imitate 8 mile

and all that shit u used to try an take away from his personals cut your verse down alot who cares if he has personals makes your better then what he does so u aint gotta post what he has on u in your own verse

there is no winner an read this till resolve delets or edits it

yea it aint a freepost so talk some more shit
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Old 06-24-04, 10:48 PM   #29
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yea, man, for the links, that is the reason this type of battlin' is called TEXT. so fuck what you sayin' about, "How you gonna use that on a real person?" Who gives a fuck, again, this is TEXT. If it were audio, then it is like something you would use on a real person. And yea, don't be talkin' shit when you were too lazy to post up your verse. And, yea, I have you on Blacklist.
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Old 06-24-04, 11:04 PM   #30
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spul:

I don’t like to net beef, cuz I don’t wanna make bitches like you bawl
Yea, you can say Indians don’t eat meat, but Africans don’t eat at all
^^lol funny shyt good punch good opener 9/10
Average close to 20 posts per day, thinkin’ that makes you tough
Man, don’t come dissin’ on my style, when you already praised it enough
^^good personal..and punch 7/10
Everywhere I look, you’re praisin’ me. Prolly my number one fan
No one’s a fan of an ugly bitch, so you got married to yo right hand
^^not hott...seen similar stuff...3/10
Go back to sippin’ tea, and English muffins, you sucky MC
Your rhymes are so predictable, I kno what you got against me
^^sounds like 8 mile...and sucky MC ? lol 5/10
I’m part Indian, I got banned, you beat me. You already said it once
He made the due date Thursday, cuz he can’t come up wit a new punch
^^good shyt nice punch 6/10
Here, you can diss me on my new pics, and how I wrote in purple too
In my pic threads, I receive a lot of love. Can’t say the same for you
^^decent punch like the personals 7/10
Enough of me, your audio sucks, you don’t have a video, no one believes ya
You can’t ride the beat, cuz the only thing this African used to ridin', is a zebra
^^lol at ridin zebra's good personal and punch 8/10
Diss Kyro on his looks, yet why you rock him in yo av, dun?
You both have “99 Problems”, and yo ugly faces are one
^^another good personal and punch 8/10
Lives in a foreign nation, and changes his name without limitation
He changes it so much, cuz he’s really runnin’ from immigration
^^good try at wordplay but wasnt hott 4/10
Don’t think all I got on you, is how your face looks so horrific
I also kno you don’t belong here, cuz you really lost to Polifik
^^good personal nice punch 9/10
You DQ good votes, you DQ opponents, but that don’t get you credit
Heck, since you’re scared and you’re the mod, my verse, you’ll prolly edit
^^good shyt decent punch 7/10
You said you would go blindfold. Good, cuz your face is horrifyin’
Compared to your mug, Michael Jackson’s looks worth glorifyin’
^^lol funny shyt 6/10
Man, my skill level is way better than yours, it’s a huge fuckin’ cleft
Copied me, by makin’ a good-bye thread. Man, you should have fuckin’ left
^^good personal and nice punch 8/10
And yea, you ARE fuckin’ Illegal. Cuz wit the border, you are conflicted
Members in yo OWN crew, rep my crew, man, jus look at Restricted
^^ lol at this no comment 6/10

*Beat stops, but he still delivers his closer*

Watch, this fag will have a filler verse or copy me, cuz he looks like a monster G
Even if you win, you’ll always be pleadin’ what’s on yo shirt:"please sponsor me"
^^hott closer....good personal...lol at his pic 9/10

overall : 102/150 (68%)


resolve:

I'm amazed at how he's deformed.. get surgery for christmas
cos ya nose is so fucking long.. pinnochio is out of business
^^lmfao hott opener good punch 9/10
You Indian Kid.. you aint good & WHO are YOU to match me,
& i would tell you to PRAY TO GOD... But which ONE would that be?
^^it was decent not hott tho 5/10
My inferior punchlines will certainly send him to hell , yo . .
& Ya verse is getting more laughts .. than the david chapell show.
^^good shyt nice meta and punch 7/10
You fucking pussy.. Your gay & never will be fucking pussy
When even that^ is more creative than your best you fucking rookie.
^^lol that was hott nice punch 8/10
Feeding on legendary skripts like mine.. is what SpuL's loving..
& Sure SPuL has no EQUAL...! Because the Whole Rb's above him.
^^seen alot similar to this 5/10
I guess your the champ in being ugly.. but i'm ill i wont dout
& ya nose is so croocked up... ..Captin hook is renting it out
^^not hott either 4/10
I cant belive you think ya nice.. & you aint no fucking G , See?
Cos the only time this fag see's breasts... is whlie in KFC.
^^good meta decent punch 7/10
& your beat's .. Music to my ears? Nope.. they sound shit
And i'll have Spul Beat down.. Like it was shut down on soundclick.
^^hott nice meta and punch 7/10
Spul you ruined everything , fuck you.. so now i'm hammering ya shit.
& the Reason i named it FINALS.. Cos there's only 1 CHAMP-in-this-shit!
^^well finals means 1 winner so thats a given not that hott good w/p 6/10
I'm overall perfection... & there's facts...i'm the hardest vet,
And i would like to end your career... but it really hasnt started yet.
^^seen stuff similar to this or pretty much exactly like this 5/10
Look at this kid's sig .. looking for dickride.. dude it's ova..
SpuL Dont carry no fucking Guns.. He carries ASDA's supersoakers
^^ASDA's...didnt need to put that in...good punch tho 6/10
...Will i spend day's on this.. Nah fuck it.. it's only an hour.
& if you hear a bitch screaming... oooh ahhh. it's him taking a shower
^^LMFAO!! hottttt shyt lol 9/10
Is this curry looking faggot.. G'd UP.. & roles with chromes too..
Spul rep's the STREET! night & day.. cos he's got no home to go to
^^decent punch kinda weak 6/10
Alone fool.. ya nothing , you know ya intelligence is dead
& the reason i posted days late.. cos reading his verse sent me to bed.
^^your worst line it was played and stupid 3/10
you stupid wack kid .. i'm mad & forced to contunie killing ya..
You could never be in MY SHOES!
.......................... .... my bad , they were "made from india"
^^shoulda said made in india...hott punch dont like the structure 8/10
If you think your above average .. i'm elite son .. so test me.
& as im speaking now.. your losing the weight.. like diest pepsi
^^diet pepsi line seen before but still good closer 7/10

overall : 102/160(64%)

vote: spul...he had more creativite and originality...good verses from both....resolve you killed yourself with some played or weak punches...good structure and consistency from both tho

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