I have both light and dark,prohesy,death and life all imprisoned within/
I can either commit acts of kindness,or massacres of sin/
I can launch the slaughter of civilizations upon civilizations of men/
Im the monster in the closet,im the boogieman,im the wolf in the den/
Devower herds of sheap,haunt your dreams while you rest asleep/
Terror will slice through your heart to your soul,dreadfully deep/
Ill pluck and steal your mind,and forever your will i shall keep/
I will creep,i will lurk in the shadows-gracefull but devilish and unseen/
Protected,sheilded by the negative and ghastly cold sheen/
For i am a hunter,but i am also the hunted-stalked by fait/
Along with other tyrants,and for my annihalation the loom,await/
They soon will rip me limb for limb,and my flesh they will grate/
And i fear it is much to late,to reverse my future so travail/
Not even if i kneeled to God upon the holly fucking grail!/
My mission to dominate is still destined to fail,just fail.../
And i was predetermined to die-death to me is easy to apply/
My ounce golden wings have been corrupted and nolonger i fly/
Nomatter how hard i try,nomatter how much i cry..../
I suppose to society,i'll always be insignificant and gry../
And nommater how much i ask why,no answer is given/
No explanation that states why this is the way i am liven'/
Dark all around,im a soul in need of aid,never to be found/
Im fated to be placed six feet deep in ground,all before 18,its bound/
And i forsee this sickness patiently waiting around the corner/
Im growing closer,closer,warmer-fuck it im there,i best beware/
But allready im easy to scare-God,how is this fair?/
How is this fair?HOW IS THIS FAIR?????????
My demise is here,its closer then close,closer then near/
It has its raised sword,prepared to clear me and my name/
Leave the blade in my chest,and steal all that i got for its claim/
And so the world will forget that i ever came!/
so am i the hunter,or the hunted?murderer or prey?/
Which side am i balanced at on this malicious fray?/
Stalked by demons every day-so am i the hunter?or prey??/
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Am I the future
or
Am I the damned?

nice shit man

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nice drop dog had lots of metifors

thanks
uppin for feedback.

uppin this for feedback

good drop.fellin the emotion,like the metas,it had a nice flow 2 it....

drop a vote on dis man......im 4-0 up jus needs closin....
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132300

Very good emotion to it, you was on direct wit the subject, stayed on topic, and your flow was consistent

Very nice drop

it waas nice i was feelin it fix ur structure to get better flow

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uppin

This Was Nice For Real But Let Me Drop This Up In Here

This was good, you had some deep lines in there, emotional and vivid piece, i liked your use of metaphors also, i liked your last couple lines...nice way to close out.....good job...keep at it

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getting some good feedback from this
anymore

I liked it your rhymes stayed consistent and you kept it even on the topic, didnt switch your style halfway through. nice drop. big ups.