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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134552
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134553
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134547
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134542
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134537
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134539
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134550

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voted on http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134545
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134552
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...d.php?p=1415607
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...d.php?p=1406826
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...d.php?p=1415644

im spit above like im in the loft, makin dis more graphic den lara croft
damn you lost, ur spittin so young im urged to go “please cough”*

*when ur young the doctor makes u cough to see if ur balls dropped

His lyrical content is Vacant, like parking lots of enron..
edubz couldnt "step" correct if he "stomped" on scantrons..

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oo i didnt think they need to be explained sorry..

calamity:
His lyrical content is Vacant, like parking lots of enron..
edubz couldnt "step" correct if he "stomped" on scantrons..

decent punch... i thought it was ok.. but i expected better.. it seems well thought up but i really thought u coulda came harder
4/10

E-dubz:
im spit above like im in the loft, makin dis more graphic den lara croft
damn you lost, ur spittin so young im urged to go “please cough”*

this wasnt the best punch i have ever seen... but it got the job done.. the setup line didnt set ur punch up very good.. and it was hard to understand.. but ur punch was better than calamity's..
6/10

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e-dubz - that was decent...u had a lil bit of multis and a nice flow...so ponts there....punch was decent...the meta was clever....i give it a 4.9/10....

calamity - lol this was a nice punch....u had two nice meta's....and they hit....flow was good too....he had multis but ur punch hit really hard....i was feeling them meta's...surprised me....i give it a 6.1/10....

vote - calamity

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This battle was kinda close to me

E-Dubz+++The line had nice flow to it,but I wasn't feeling the last line,therefore I wasn't feeling the punch as much.Ok with the multies.

Calamity+++Had a nice flow and a nice punch.That punch was harder than E-Dubz.Like the first line,and it was a good set-up for the punch.

Vote=Calamity

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e-dubz: well I have to give ya props for having a pretty good flow
and nice syllable count and the lines were lined up but................
this is a punchline battle so I say that the first line was just ok
to me but the 2nd line was pretty much whack not my theory
of what takes a punchline......................................... ......

Calamity: well I have to give ya props aswell for having pretty good
flow your syllable count aswell was very good & lines lined up...
aight well you punch was ok 1st line to me was better than the 2nd
line but both of your lines was pretty good.........

overall: well when it came to flow it was all tied up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
but the most important aspect of this is the punchline and
Calamity had that with both lines being pretty good....

vote: Calamity

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im spit above like im in the loft, makin dis more graphic den lara croft
damn you lost, ur spittin so young im urged to go “please cough”*

^^this was a decent punch but it was pretty basic the wordplay was good but thats about it "im spit above like im in the loft" <<there was no need for that and it was really weak

overall : 3/10

calamity :

His lyrical content is Vacant, like parking lots of enron..
edubz couldnt "step" correct if he "stomped" on scantrons..

^^enron meta was dope no doubt hott line....the second line was decent and a good punch i think you could have came harder but e dubz didnt have to hott of a P/L so u coulda wrote yabba dabba doo and probably won...:P lol jk..anyways decent punch

overall : 6/10

vote: calamity

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im spit above like im in the loft, makin dis more graphic den lara croft
damn you lost, ur spittin so young im urged to go “please cough”*

Ok...with the set up you had me thinking you were gonna drop some fiya, cuz if we was voting on set ups you'd have a high score but you killed it with that punchline, that was really weak punch it wasn't played just weak.


His lyrical content is Vacant, like parking lots of enron..
edubz couldnt "step" correct if he "stomped" on scantrons..


Ok....your setup coulda been better but it was good enuff, punchline itself was good nothing great but definitely took this battle. good meta too so its a obvious win for you, good drop son

Vote: Calamity

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5-1 calamity is up....battle will close if calamity gets ahead by 6 votes....upping for you guys....

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Calmity Took This


Calmity-The ScanTron Was hott you...Nice balance
and wordplay and flow and Overall good punch with
a similies and metpahore in there...


Edubs-Close very very close..But you didnt hit
hard and you had everything as calmity except
for similies and metaphores and a weaker punch

v/Calmity

Return the fav in me vs Triple N

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dunno if anymore votes are needed but calamity definatly took this battle.

the enron addition was a nice meta...good wordplay and an overall better punch