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07-25-04, 10:12 PM
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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El Eye Vs. Flow Intelligent Vs. Restricted
IP: A6AC 0B1C
.::The Finals Of The Topical Tourney::. ::.Rules.:: 20 Linez Minimum 30 Linez Maximum 5 Votez Winz No Crew No Hate No D/R Checks Due By 7-27-04 Verses Due By 7-28-04 Votes Due By 8-1-04 Topic: Justification Good Luck To Flow and LI!! ~R~ |
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07-25-04, 10:14 PM
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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.::Ch-Check::. If LI Wins I Will Change Poll Options So His Name Is In There and He Will Get The Win. ~R~ |
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07-25-04, 11:03 PM
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Miss Me?
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IP: 3240 794D
check in...gluck fellas...lets all show and come dope...
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07-26-04, 12:39 AM
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The Epitome Of Greatness
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IP: C1DA C961
Checkin In Good Luck L.I And Re$...Sure To Be A Hott Battle
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07-28-04, 06:24 PM
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I Honestly Did Not Know What To Write For Justification...So I Got This Definition To Help Explain My Verse
Main Entry: jus·ti·fi·ca·tion Pronunciation: "j&s-t&-f&-'kA-sh&n Function: noun 1: something that justifies; specifically : a legally sufficient reason or cause for an act that would otherwise be criminal or tortious ........... Setting Is In A Park Im Sitting On The Bench Reading A Newspaper When A Woman Approaches Me The Beginning: The Grass Was Green...Sun Was Bright...It Promised A Good Day I Was Just Sitting On The Park Bench Reading The Afternoon Away When Out The Corner Of My Eye I See A Woman Heading In My Direction What She Was Dressed In... And How It Fit Gave Me A Sudden Erection She Sat Near Me, Eyes Weary, Tear Stains On Her Cheek Made Her Dreary I Gave Her A Tissue, She Spilled Her Problems And Said She Didnt Fear Me We Talked For Awhile, Childlishy Touching Each Other As We Smiled It Took This Woman Over An Hour To Stack Her Problems In A Pile We Planned On Meeting Later So We Can Continue The Conversation She Left And I Chased Her Cuz She Didnt Give Me A Destination I Caught Her At Her Door, She Was Startled But Saw It Was Only Me If Only She Could See, That Her With Me Was My Biggest Fantasy The Tragic Occurence: 8 Hours Later Im Awoken At A Place That I Have Never Seen Before Clothes On The Floor...I Noticed A "Do Not Disturb" Sign On The Door And I Remembered I Was Clever And Got Her To Let Me In..An Easy Plan And Thats Where It Began, She Took Her Clothes Off And Was Really A Man I Was Embarrased And Angry I Possessed One Million Feelings At Once Last Thing I Remember Was Me Yelling And Knocking Him Out With A Punch Quickly I Gathered My Clothes Put Them On And Moved Quickly To Leave Made It Out The Door And I Was Relieved, Then I Felt A Tug On My Sleeve "Put Your Hands On The Wall, Spread Your Legs, And Assume The Position" It Was My Intuiton...The Cops Caught Me..All I Could Do Was Start Wishin No Justification For Me: "Mr. Smith The Charge Is Murder In The First Degree How Do You Plee " I Guess Im Guilty, But You Would Do The Same If You Seen What I Seen There's No Punishment That Is Harsh Enough For This Haneous Crime I Did And Since There's No Death Penalty Give Me As Much Time As You Can Give I Can't Justify My Actions...Simply Stated I Was Wrong And I Admit It So See It From My Point Of View Because Honestly Im Glad That I Did It So Hear Me Out, After All This I Managed To Bandage Internal Wounds To Be Encapsulated By No Justification Forever Trapped In It's Womb ~!1!~ Kinda A Hard Topic I Didnt Know What To Justify LoL
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07-28-04, 06:47 PM
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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IP: D52C 04A2
.::Nice Drop..You Kinda Have The Same Direction As Me::. So I'ma Probably Write A New One Cause I Don't Want Two of The Same Point-of-Views.. ~R~ |
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07-28-04, 07:32 PM
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Goodluck guys!
IP: C1DA C961
How It All Began...
The festivities began as alcohol was drained into my body... Drank so much in one hour it seemed like it was my hobby... People all around engulfed in liquor as my birthday passed... Two fourties downed in two hours...pfff you do the math... Its amazing to live through the horror i was put through that night... And to think it was all my decisions...shit just dont seem right... Step Into My Shoes... Speeeaaach was slurred.. outlook blurrey as I walked down the street... Vision was short-s i g h t e d.. couldnt even see my feet... Holdin an empty bottle.. screamin jibberish as i strolled along... Next thing i remember im on a porch screamin DING-DONG!!... Lightin fire crackers up and the door was opened... People staring down at me.. night started slopin... Red and blue lights were around me.. all i did was laugh... Passed out the next second.. then surrounded my medical staff... Didnt no what was happening.. as i reached for a swig of my beer... Hand came up empty.. everything around me was spinnin like spheres... Tried to justify what was going on but shit was just going to fast... Then I heard a womens voice screamin.. "Is he gonna Last?!?!"... She ran over to my bed but i still couldnt see here face... She spoke so fast to me all the word flew by like a race... Darkness came about as my brain started to fade thoughts... Still tryin hard to make out wats happenin.. so i fought... All I could make out.. heart thumps slowing down and needles in my arm... And now pain flowed through me.. as if my body had set off an alarm... Fighting and yelling and asking.. I wanted to know whats happenin... Then there was a person next to me so i started tappin them... "Whats goin on?.." tell me i need to no.. "tell me or out wit yall!!"... He stood up and announced.. "Sir your bloods being drained of alcohol"... I went into a choma, survived, and realized I had some problems... Signed up for AA, started a yourh group, and solved em... Not only did he justify what happened that night...he justified his life flaws and fixed them goodluck fellas
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07-28-04, 07:53 PM
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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IP: D52C 04A2
*Just Thoughts I Guess* Why Does Drug Money Have More Value Than Our Circulation.. Why Can't I Say What I Want Without Constant Debations.. Why Is Life More Of A Struggle Than A Journey Of Faith.. Why Even Have An Alcohol Tolerance When Its At An Eight.. Why Do We Even Put R.I.P If We Just Plan To Desecrate.. Why Do The Good Die Young..Yea I Know Ya'll Can Relate.. Why Does The Goverment Keep Secrets From The US Public.. But We Can't Decide Even Though We Live In A US Republic.. Why Can't Gays Get Married But Elton John Get Dubbed Prince.. Why Do We Strive For Security But Cops Take Finger Prints.. Why Does The Us Customs Keep Evidence From The Federal Department.. Why Do We Have Homeless People When We Are Full of Empty Apartments.. Why Does Heaven Have Such A Overwelming Popularity Than Hell.. Why Can't Criminals Live Well Besides Pissin In Buckets In A Cell.. Why Can't A White Man Rap Without Criticism From A Diffrent Race.. But The Blacks Want Acceptance In Everything The White Man Creates.. Why Has Violence Overtaken The Peace and Love We Once Knew.. Why When I Look At The Sky Is It Not Red or Green Instead of Blue.. Why Does Depression and Poverty Overwhelm The US's Popularity.. Why Does Barbarity Rise and Important Things Fall Like Prosperity.. Why Do We Have To Be 18 To Smoke but 16 To Drive Legally.. Why Do Looks Have More Needs Than Personal Health Does Regally.. Why Is Cursing Looked Down Upon but We Have The Right of Free Speech.. But Even The Censorship Admendment Has Been Thrown Out and Impeeched.. Why Do The Girls Of 12 Want To Look And Dress Like Slults and Whores.. Why Are We Taught To Be Honest When No One Is Really Honest Anymore.. Why Can A Guy Fuck 10 Women and Be A Pimp but A Girl Called A Trick.. Why Is Porno So Addicting That It Drives Men To Use Viagra For Dicks.. Why Am I The Only One In Frustration To Devise A New Creation.. But I Guess Thats Just My Salvation To My Mental Justifications.. ~R~ |
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07-28-04, 08:52 PM
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The Epitome Of Greatness
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Very Hott Verse L.I And Re$triced This Was Definately A Nice Battle Good Luck
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07-29-04, 01:36 AM
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The Epitome Of Greatness
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IP: 28AD 5545
Uppin For Votes...
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07-29-04, 03:41 AM
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How I vote comes from First place which is the best To the Last
Which is the Worse But here it is and Its Not a dickride though 1. Restricted-Nice Drop And it made me see things differently and lil vocab But Nice even Structure and flow went well and so Did Wordplay and made me see thins different then Nobody Usually Sees..But I see then  8/10 2. Flow Intelligent-Nice Story and yours was hott also...SO Really I think you was good but yours was mainly and story and had nice similies and Metaphores a lil and Flow was good and balance and even structure But yours was main But Orginal 7/10 3.El Eye-You Was Last in place Lol....You had a nice drop too but you has a story and Just wordplay and life topic a Lil which is good and similies and metpahores was there a lil and structure was evened out leaving flow good 6.9999/10 v/~R~
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07-29-04, 01:12 PM
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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IP: 4EBF 2570
Damn..Syck Drops From All Uppin Dis Shit ~R~ |
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07-29-04, 01:57 PM
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..Intelligent Hoodlum..
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IP: DB8D 5EE9
Damnn....Damnn....Damnnnnnnnnnnnn...This Was One Of The Best Topical Battles I Seen On this Site...Not One Not Two But Three Of Yall Came With Some Dope Shit..
I Liked EveryLine Of Everyones Verse...Yall All Had Diffrent Styles But All Was Tight.. L.I..I Could Relate To Your Verse More Than Anyones Yours Was Actually Funny..And Entertaining...And It Was A Nice Drop Throughout.... Open..How It All Began... The festivities began as alcohol was drained into my body... Drank so much in one hour it seemed like it was my hobby... People all around engulfed in liquor as my birthday passed... Two fourties downed in two hours...pfff you do the math... Its amazing to live through the horror i was put through that night... And to think it was all my decisions...shit just dont seem right... That Was Good...9.4/10 Bestline..Holdin an empty bottle.. screamin jibberish as i strolled along... Next thing i remember im on a porch screamin DING-DONG!!... Humor..^^ Lmao 9.6/10 Closer..went into a choma, survived, and realized I had some problems... Signed up for AA, started a yourh group, and solved em... NiCe Ending To It 9.2/10 Overall..9.4/10 Flow..Underrated Emcee Is Finally Over Now..Your Drop Was Tight....Intresting Way Of Doin It And Excuted On The Topic... Opener..The Grass Was Green...Sun Was Bright...It Promised A Good Day I Was Just Sitting On The Park Bench Reading The Afternoon Away Pretty Good Pretty Descent 9.1/10 Bestline..I Was Embarrased And Angry I Possessed One Million Feelings At Once Last Thing I Remember Was Me Yelling And Knocking Him Out With A Punch ^^ LMAO Nice Humor 9.4/10 Closer..So Hear Me Out, After All This I Managed To Bandage Internal Wounds To Be Encapsulated By No Justification Forever Trapped In It's Womb 9.6/10 Overall verse..9.3/10 ~R~..Creative Work..Also Understood The Concept Of Your Drop Pretty Nice Flow... opener..Why Does Drug Money Have More Value Than Our Circulation.. Why Can't I Say What I Want Without Constant Debations.. Feel That 9.7/10 Bestline..Why Does The Us Customs Keep Evidence From The Federal Department.. Why Do We Have Homeless People When We Are Full of Empty Apartments.. Damnn Got A Point...9.6/10 Closer..Why Am I The Only One In Frustration To Devise A New Creation.. But I Guess Thats Just My Salvation To My Mental Justifications.. Good ending 9.5/10 Overall.9.6/10 ~R~ Verse Was More Catchy..L.I And Flow HAd A Story Verse....All Good..~R~ Took This Because The Stuff He Said Was The Truest Of Justification... Winner..~R~
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07-29-04, 03:16 PM
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Breaaaathless, Dayum... All That Could Be Said Could Only Be Repeated Now So I'm Just Gonna Vote... The Were All Tite As Fuck But R Mos Def Prevailed... Vote:Restricted... ~One~ -Dqed Vote, Need more feedback Last edited by Skriptz : 07-30-04 at 04:28 AM. |
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07-29-04, 03:48 PM
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Very nice drops yall...and thanks for voting...this willbe my last recorded battle as you know...and its great to go out with a championship match....
good job yall
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