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07-26-04, 04:06 AM
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lost and confused
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Lost and confused
no longer know what to do don’t know what to say I still wake up everyday and realize I’m not with you baby I do still miss you I want u back in my arms so we can laugh together just be together girl I miss you ain’t nothin the same day after day it hurts to know that things had to change it is ok now though because we are now best friends and I can go on with my life feedback plz...leave a link n i'll get back at ya |
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07-26-04, 10:58 PM
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IP: 646D CD48
feedback please
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07-28-04, 10:13 PM
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Welcome 2 Dope South
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IP: 28AD 5545
Yo dat was real. I like da fact dat ur letin ur x know you still love her. keep doin tha damn thing
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07-28-04, 10:40 PM
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IP: E9E6 2674
thass nice...keep it up cuz ur good
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New Generation MAUHZ MUAHZ MUAHZ.. DEALITY IS BAK TO RAP HERE TO STAY N U KNO ILL NEVA GO AWAY..lol TUPAC IS THE GREATES RAPPER EVER HE WAS N STILL IS MEXICAN AND PROUD "that was thier reality this is my dream"reality is wrong dreams are for real" "my momma used to tell me.if you cant find somethin to live for you best find somethin to die for" "remeber there is always two sided to a book"-stunt |
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07-29-04, 01:04 AM
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IP: 7113 B39E
ay thanks fa da feed...uppin peace
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07-30-04, 10:19 PM
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IP: 7113 B39E
feedback plz
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07-31-04, 10:50 AM
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I dont know about the how complex this was...but, I could definately relate to your words...no mattr how simplistic they seemed...I just went through that with my ex. Nice piece...try to elevate with your words....
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07-31-04, 05:05 PM
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IP: 34E7 8281
thanks fa da feedback...uppin
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07-31-04, 07:48 PM
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Vendetta the K.O. King
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Word man - I wasn't feelin the depth, but at the same time im goin through that right now. Was goin to do a track very close to this - and am still writing it... Emotion was real dun. Watch for Phenom in Songs, cause i got a track coming like this. Good lookin though
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07-31-04, 10:45 PM
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IP: 4FEA A3B1
iight kidd i'll be lookin fa dat...thanks fa the feed...peace
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08-03-04, 12:58 AM
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IP: 85C0 F54B
uppin
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08-03-04, 04:32 PM
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I'm feelin this...Lyrical Artist
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Yo dawg, thanks for the feedback, I really appreciate it..Yooo, I'm feelin ya poem joint though..I guess it's because I can really relate to it cause I felt the same way...I just wanted to say keep being focus and keep writing cause ya lyrics are good..Peace............Lyrical Artist..
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08-03-04, 04:45 PM
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I feel like u could have went more into depth with puttin more emotion into it....short but i was feeling it....i Could actully relate to it pretty well so i can undersatnd where u coming from, nice
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08-04-04, 02:00 AM
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IP: 34E7 8281
ay thanks fa da feedback...appreciat it...uppin peace
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08-04-04, 02:55 AM
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[Merk-ology 101...Schools In]
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yo mex...you battle..?
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