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Yes 22 91.67%
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Old 08-26-04, 09:48 AM   #31
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hahahahah shit mayn that was dope...................

your concept was amazing well.............
your depth in the storytelling was dope..
your entire drop was amazing except.....
that you mispelled some words.............
thats basically your only flaw in this......
ummmmmmmm 9.2/10

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=144314

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i agree totley im a vote it for open mic of the mounth
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Old 08-26-04, 09:49 AM   #32
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Originally Posted by For$akeN
hahahahah shit mayn that was dope...................

your concept was amazing well.............
your depth in the storytelling was dope..
your entire drop was amazing except.....
that you mispelled some words.............
thats basically your only flaw in this......
ummmmmmmm 9.2/10

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=144314

you check the link already tho


i agree totley im a vote it for open mic of the mounth
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Old 08-26-04, 09:50 AM   #33
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by the way can some one help me with my batles please
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Old 08-26-04, 09:57 AM   #34
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Vote You Mean???...
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Old 08-26-04, 10:15 AM   #35
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doin ya thang kidd
keep ya gunz up
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Old 08-26-04, 10:30 AM   #36
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Yo that was tight I liked the topic the whole thing was really def
Good rhymes and everything i give u a 9.5/10
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Old 08-26-04, 11:20 AM   #37
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Like all's said already, great depth, amazing visualisation. Actually thought you must have some relative experience to have written this... you're fifteen years only, that makes this piece a piece of artwork. Well developed inner vision. The stuff of great writers. Listen to me goin' on like some old Hinglish Teacher n all, LOL, but I'm seriously impressed with this. August: in, no doubt about that. Still haven't figured out how to work this forum so I hope my vote gets counted here. i tried once and it knocked me back.
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Old 08-26-04, 01:33 PM   #38
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Ayo Thanks For The Love...
Upping...
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Old 08-26-04, 04:23 PM   #39
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Flowed Perfect..Nice Structure/RhymesScene..Good Vocab!!..That Was One OfThe best Poetry I Ever Seen..
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Old 08-26-04, 04:52 PM   #40
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Fire ass drop, definitely a contender for open mic of the month. vocab was nice, imagery on point, spelling, oh well cant be perfect. keep droppin the hot shit.
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Old 08-26-04, 05:05 PM   #41
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Ayo Thanks For The Props Everyone...
Upping This...
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Old 08-26-04, 05:34 PM   #42
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Nice shit thats was crazy yo thats Open Mic of august fe rel no doubt..
this nigga got it nuffa said 1
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Old 08-26-04, 06:55 PM   #43
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insane drop mayne.OM of August fo sho!!! Keep doin ya thang that shit was sik as fuk.







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Old 08-26-04, 08:35 PM   #44
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yo sun i told you before your the best text cee i ever read in my life all your topicals are fucking dope as fuck this was gansta kind like the shit you droped aganist shadow almost that good dope as fuck dog it brought a tear to my eye fo real anyone says this aint open mic of the month your mothers a bitch
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Old 08-27-04, 08:54 AM   #45
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Lol This Is The Jesus Piece Right Here...
Cuz It Just Turned Empire From One Of My Haters To A Fan...
Lololmao...
Thanks For The Love Everyone...
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