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08-28-04, 02:50 PM
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yo ill shit, what made it dope was that it was real and you could definitely feel that in your lyrics. dopeness, cept my name should have been in there. lol
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08-28-04, 02:51 PM
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Geaux Fuck Yourself
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IP: B4BC F724
lol....
thnx for the feed back Van... lol... I won't ever get used to your new name...lol
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08-28-04, 03:22 PM
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FuCk YoU I RhYme BeTtEr
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IP: 8602 39CF
yo...shit was good...keep it up...as for a diss its there...but more about other shit to me...n e how...8/10
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08-28-04, 03:24 PM
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Geaux Fuck Yourself
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IP: B4BC F724
thanks pay day... u & drastic tore it up too...
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08-28-04, 03:30 PM
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E-Style, Bitch.
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IP: 0557 C314
Niiiiiiice Village, Real Nice.....Got Anythin Else U Wrote Like That???
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08-28-04, 03:37 PM
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IP: A001 97D8
Blaaaaah, I Could Beat Some Of Your List...
Lolol, But Im Not About To Complain Here... Real Nice Piece Mayn, Can See You Were Going For Emotion... But I Have Just A Few Suggestions... You Were Tryna Be Deep Then Said Something About Getting Back To Your Hoes... That Kinda Kills The Moment Of Sorrow And Shit... Cuz Then You Just Look Like Another Ganstah Wannabe Pimp Type Deal... But Ya Mayn, Overall Real Nice... Pretty Tite Flow, Would Sound Nice On Audio... 9.3/10... .One. |
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08-28-04, 03:45 PM
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Geaux Fuck Yourself
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IP: B4BC F724
lol... abstrakt... I was tired as fuck I'll wind up revising it before I do the audio...
thx
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08-28-04, 03:53 PM
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IP: 392A 8C54
i think you have some buddie's here.
because you were doing one sylable rhymin . . which is not impressive for example real-rap more-crack shit & it? vet & reckless? this is not anything close to being the dopest piece. i'll leave feedback when i'm not too tired Can someone break this down in .. motion . . wordplay . multi's flow.. vocab..? 6.4/10. average . . please leave feed back not " this was hot , yo " it's getting on my nerve's.
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08-28-04, 03:57 PM
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Geaux Fuck Yourself
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IP: B4BC F724
lol... nah...
I know it's not impressive... I'm not trying to impress anyone... I don't need to... my thing Is I want people to get my message... thats just how it came out of my head and on to the keyboard.
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08-28-04, 04:29 PM
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I wasn't on the list.
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08-28-04, 05:30 PM
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Geaux Fuck Yourself
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IP: B4BC F724
there's a point to that... spul... hold on... yes you were!
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08-28-04, 05:37 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 68E4 45C0
ill shit.... otflmsao
it was tite as hell |
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08-28-04, 05:46 PM
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
thats good money yo im feeling it good lookin out yung 1 peace
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08-28-04, 05:48 PM
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Geaux Fuck Yourself
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IP: B4BC F724
thanks for the feedback... keep it comin'.
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08-28-04, 07:04 PM
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E-Style, Bitch.
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IP: 0557 C314
Aight Man, I'm Here, Check My Battles That Are Currently Open Vs. World Famous & Tha Flash n Get Back To Me
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