Originally Posted by mad dog

Damn 1 sided battle if i ever saw 1 my vote goes to Tek...syke hell naw he got merked. Seriously goos attempt but u picked the wrong guy to battle on this occasion u still need to work on the wordplay and punches structure could do wit a bit of improving but u still got time.

N-Sight good verse i liked th Gore line a lil stretched on the last line but all in all decent wordplay and punches real affective good win couldve dun better but it was enough.

V/N-Sight

Originally Posted by mad dog

N-Sight got this but only just...both had a decent struc and hell burnin personals really went into the battle field shootin props to both but i was just feelin n's a lil more coz of the wordplay i felt de's was a lil basic but tight as hell battle both

V/N-Sight

Originally Posted by mad dog

Damn hott battle peeps but ima break it down.

Tay: Good punches and personals ok wordplay but u stretched most of your lines plus all them colours didnt help wit the verse...plus the structure was off (stretched lines 2 blame).

N-Sight: Dope verse amazin wordplay hard hittin wit the punches decent wordplay a lil strectched wit the lines but maintained a good structure u got this.

V/N-Sight

Originally Posted by mad dog

Gotta give this to n-sight his verse was dope as hell the quotes couldnt be more found. The structure was dope the punches were dope the personals were dope ery thin was dope.

Final u had a good verse too but 1 thing i learned from n-sight is never go 1st u had a decent spit to i kinda felt the different colours didnt help but good anyway. Props to both

V/N-Sight

Originally Posted by n-sight

read ur last battle.. ur styles seems to be stuck on simple
Cuz I got (mad)dog stuck behind bar like a fuckin kinnle

^^ this flows and rhymes...but the punch is corny and played

I ll Decompose your structure as I numb and grind bones
Cuz im know to be droppin mad dog like clumsy whinos /1

^^ Too simple and played

Put clips through your cranium quick as I attack and shoot
Cuz Souls gonna stop M.D.(mad dog) like a malpractise suit /2

Creative...but punch isn't strong


Why are you welcoming my pain ur like...
Quote:
Originally Posted by Soul Of Satan
Hi disaster.

^^^^^^^ That segment there beats ur whole verse Satan...lol sorry...shit was mad funny



Like my boy Fine u gonn have trouble to rhyme u should try and bite/
Recite this last line coz these the last thing u'll see 4 i take ur life/

^^ dats funny as hell...and true


Vote: Mad Dog...way better punches and complexity

Originally Posted by nsight

Yo im here to beat cats and put the Dog out/ This home-made gangsta' about to stop foamin and begin to spit the blood out/ couse Chi-wa-was wit no bark get hit with Mexican drop kicks/ I'll borito your ass with a newspaper for trying

^^ where do the lines end...decent...but i don't like the structure


This guy has got a hidden eyedentity...im sure he's only eight/
Coz that aint spittin dawg i'd say that was more premeture ejactulate/

^^ better structure...good punch

my punchlines, 5 mins redtime, I'll have you makin Head-Lines/ U can't Merk the god of Murcury, I was born from ash/ My nutt on your girls chest is more entertain' then a soccer team in a plane crash/

^^^ decent...but its not hitting hard

We could've been chums Eye but u think u fly for a white guy/
Well ima have to introduce you to a new way to die/
U knew losin to me would make front page on the NY times/
Gotta thank u ur right

^^^ decent closer...not hard hitting..but at least its aimed at him


Vote: Mad Dog...better structure..punches

Originally Posted by nsight

10 lines aint enough to take out who i call this lil pup/
Mommy's been lyin to u ur life coz u iz mine heres my DNA...yup/


^^^ nice opener..haha

Aint no denying no point in lying ur my long lost child i was hopin 2 find/
And now i found u time to smack yo behind/

^^ Funny...but coulda been HARDER and funny...would have made it a better punch

Coz u talk to daddy like shit...u like Will Smith tryin to put out a gangsta hit/
Dont spit ur not worth it...i can see u forcin words like........B-B-Bitch/

^^ YEA boyee..nice line..coulda hit harder...but creative..nice

Killah u barely a killer i doubt u see murder believe its the truth i speak/
This bitch is a wanksta hopin to get signed by them ho's I.N.C/ (Muredr Inc)

^blah...weak-ish closer



Trust Me Dawg..Da Bwoy Will Put You In A flat Line-/
Kid You Aint Ill.. All The Shit You Spit is Half Mine-/

^^ NO...this is weak...prove his shit is half-yours..ur braggin is pretentious

Packed With Nines put som'n on ya head and it aint ya Fitted-/
Kids Like Mike Tyson Cause soon as I drop a "punch" he already bit it-/

^^ Is this supposed to be a personal...I'm not buying it...it's coming across more like ur just on your own dick, bragging.

You MAD DOG? Smash Ya..have ya walkin with an oversized tampon-/
Merk You Quick Demolish Part of Ya Body So You Only Half Gone-/

^^ eh..decent...


Got you runnin faster than a black person in a horror flick-/
Make this kid wanna change sex..so its ova CHICK

^^ That was wack.period.


Run Fast Cause Like an injured ball player I aint PLayin No Games-/
U Aint Known MAD DOG got kilt by DA BWOY is ya only 10 secs of fame-/

^^ WEak...


Breakdown:

Flow Tie
Rhyming Tie
Punches Mad Dog..DEFINITELY

Vote: Mad Dog...i think u just arrived man

Originally Posted by Soul Of Satan

I didnt accuse you of DR killacam or pictureperfect. i merely point out that you and mad dog dick ride each other to the fullest... so why dont you stfu with your whack newb ass and let a mod look over what i posted. I think its a little more then chance when 2 people vote for each other in almost every match they do.... and go ahead and keep calling me an herb if you want, but trust me when i say i was battling way before you even knew what a text battle even was...