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Old 09-05-04, 05:51 AM   #1
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Write to this picture for September. Image created by Sean Briggs
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Old 09-05-04, 12:37 PM   #2
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i'll give it a try..


Ghostly Creations, pools of meditation, Energy is Uniform
Raising my fist in triumph as I astrally fly on the back of a Unicorn
Distorted vision from the fog, i dwell in Mercy waters
violate this space, my sword to u is my only offer





I don't know, i've never done this..
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Old 09-05-04, 06:23 PM   #3
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tried to take warrior's life neva that//
swing my sword like Barry Bonds do a baseball bat//
u tryin steal horse too//
if there was guns back in this time//
i'd prolly have to shoot u//
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Old 09-06-04, 04:17 PM   #4
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yo dis pic is hard yo

My spirit emerges vengeful and reborn
The lake has given me power through the blade of this sword
U thought u'd slain me, it was true, i was once deceased
reincarnation, from the land of damnation aint karma a bitch
cos this sword will puncture a hole to big for a stitch
and when u have bled, and fallen to the floor
justice will have been done ,and 2 the lake i will dwell once more
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Old 09-07-04, 07:25 PM   #5
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aight-
you can't killa real warrior, drown or shot
real soldiers could do like houdini and excape from a box
you'll never kill me by tha sword, or tha gun
im risin' up from tha deeps for revenge,
your life is done....
the end muthafucka's
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Old 09-07-04, 10:52 PM   #6
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im that warrior trying to walk through the water like jesus
im gonna turn all this hating emcees to followers and belivers
You dont see me most of the time cuz im still underwater
But ima still hit the family hard like the sperm in there mother that aint come from the father
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Old 09-08-04, 11:53 AM   #7
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Legends are drowning , my shadow is in the background my father,
I strive to come from underground barley gettin my fist above the water
Im sinking, my hope of living is becoming empty and rather pointless
through the fog i hear a voice saying have faith ICE come and join us
Sun setting or is it rising, every time i get pushed under i keep on fighting
To make a name for myself , the life i lead is gonna be that of writing
Unicorn by his side i see GOD is in the back ground praying that i do this
The sword i yeild represents the mic and from the water i am born a Lyricist
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Old 09-08-04, 08:25 PM   #8
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soul of a soldier neva quitted always commited
he stuck to his plans tite like a new era fitted
if ya mans fail think u could join him that deep
the strong only fail if overpowered by the weak
think about it a new life is emerged and born
best believe ya friend will continue ya legacy life goes on..

this was my first , ive neva done this before either i think i did go tho...
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Old 09-11-04, 05:30 AM   #9
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I can’t see with the mist, my visions impaired
Lost all my bearings, now our life’s are feared
The forest sheltered me,,,.. now I’m in the lake
Horse is becoming agitated, help me for god sake
I can see a beacon of light, in the distance calling
Walked into the marsh,,. but my body kept falling
Didn’t realise I had tread upon the lake of the dead
Evil battles taken place here, the map was miss read
Felt a sharp object impale my chest, feel light headed
All I see is red, pulled down, the sword is still in beded

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Old 09-13-04, 11:15 PM   #10
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im re-do mine-
spirits is restless, fallen soilders risin' from tha deeps
they takin' streets, dawn of tha dead shit passin out "creeps"
tha sword burst through tha threshold leaving niggaz in awe
until tha body rises lik in thriller, and givez a man a slash to tha jaw
-four lines rhyme-
everbodys in panic, brains goin' frantic, resident evil type shit
but this aint no game death is game over, keep runnin' or Quit
it don't matter cuz zombies is everywhere, your ends gettin split
this how its goin' down it armagedon, the worlds losin' life like its throats been slit
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Old 09-15-04, 11:12 PM   #11
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niggaz peepin outta water/
soilder killin wit his sword or a saw saudder/
just makin more bitches attracted to him/
its like a brand new kill/
maybe cuz of hiz bills/
damn about to stab a female/
u can tell dis guys goin to hell/

is dis aight its my first
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Old 09-16-04, 02:01 AM   #12
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Betcha Ill have the illest one:

In the war, they knew they couldnt win without killing me.
So they force my head and body under the deep blue sea.
Horses trot away, with warriors, feelin, mission accomplished.
Im hullicinatin under water, my sword still cuttin up mirages.
I have no reason to question, I know death is near.
So I hold my right arm up, as a salute to those who got me here.
Never feared this fact, we all die sometime in out lives.
So even if I sink, I still know that I'd remain at the top in everyones eyes.
OHHHHH!!
Ya boy is ill!

And ya boy added 2 lines!!!!!
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Old 09-16-04, 10:22 AM   #13
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Its ok Hawk

Not the best
But it was descent
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Old 09-16-04, 01:27 PM   #14
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lol, I was board so I tried...I never do that topical stuff...this is like my second one.
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Old 09-17-04, 10:30 AM   #15
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mine's the dopest

there once was a warrior who road atop a horse
i chopped off his arm, and then i fucked his corpse
ate the remains and tossed the arm into the lake
i got a little sick cause the flesh wasn't baked
so i puked up the left overs and the horse came over
to my suprise he ate the puke along with some green clovers
and he turned out alright, as i rode him outa sight
merry christmas to all and to all a good night
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