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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-06-04 at 06:11 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

Word processor has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-06-04 05:44 PM.

!Mc Merc! has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-06-04 05:47 PM.

here i go-
im bout ta MERC dis feMC, faster dem olympic sprinters
droppin ya teeth in ya lap like you got loose dentures
u should'nt post in bitchslapped cuz you justa CRAPPY GUY*
after this battle,he gon go pull out tha magic lamp and wish i die
like mortal combat dis battle, is gon end wit a fatality**
waitin' for dat FINISH HIM to put your heat beat in neutrality
-"FINISH HIM"-
this bitch couldn't win this battle like im Bush and he's IRAQ
lookin for your skillz a waste of time like ja lookin for a platitinum PLAC

*crappy guy is his rapperz name
**when you do sum crazy shit at da end of mortal combat fights they call it a fatality

i asked for an open battle, not a punching bag
cause every time i hit em, they run outta sand
you live on the end of tha earth cause u wack
only e-rap, cuz ya get nervous and an asthma attack
your the grandmaster of whackness, cant do shit bout this
cause when you were born, me n your mama were doubtless
that you was any use, that why you suffered abuse
but i left ya mama, because she was no more use
i'm sorry to tell ya that your my godamn reproduction
but i'm a lyrical guru and your brain barely even functions

Voted For: Word processor

Good verse word....both of you did your things. You had da dentures verse there and the Ja verse. You pulled it out because of those punches and your structure. BUT...Merc you had nice punches in your verse. I saw some punches in there. But they just weren't hard enough. But...you got great ideas for punches. You just need to dig abit deeper and try and make them hit abit harder. Your gonna elevate...just keep at it.

Yo...can yaw two gimmie some honest votes on my battle?

Voted For: Word processor

chalk up another win for word processor-
punches-both had equally tight punches so no ground gained there
structure-thats were word took it his flow was easier to read and was just better

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uppin

Voted For: !Mc Merc!

ok this MC merc got this because his verse was more stuctured and they actually rhymed, word processor's punches are played and simple, and most of all, wack, both of yall really need to elevate man

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uppin fo' sum valid votes

yeah

Voted For: !Mc Merc!

um wow very weak battle.i gave it to dis dude cuz his punches hit harder, and also cuz that other nigga was on dat mortal combat tip,this was not a topical battle.the punches didnt connect very well and there was not really any wordplay

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